The Artist Army

[MeltiTheDragon]

Ciriun @ "The torso is 99% perfect, although it could be tucked up a bit more around the waist. The hair and tail still looks a bit unnatural. I think the base of the tail could be smaller and more discrete, while the hair in general could have slightly pointier ends. Otherwise, I think it looks great!"

[Black Sabbath]

@ Ciriun: I absolutely adore Fantasia myself and really love to see that you're reaching out to emulate that style, and I also see a lot of potential. So, I made a more realistic redline. I know it's not along the lines of what you're getting at, but I feel it may help you with future endeavors. Anatomy is everything and like I always say, you have to have a solid grasp of anatomy before you can create your own style. No doubt about it.



No, I didn't include the hand because I myself cannot draw them very well and didn't want to mislead you with bad anatomy. Keep up the good work.

@ Johnny-Rancid: Here is a redline for you;



Again, I'm very shaky when it comes to hands so you may add the fingers as you please.

A.K.A Raptor:




For cherri.:

[Night Visions]

So um....hi....I'll guess I'll just drop in...
I'm no good at drawing on CS, so can I post some pictures of my real life drawings and see what you guys think?

[Black Sabbath]

So um....hi....I'll guess I'll just drop in...
I'm no good at drawing on CS, so can I post some pictures of my real life drawings and see what you guys think?

Read the rules. You have to provide some feedback for others first.

[Audrey_Bee]

Okay, hopefully the last revision of this, sorry if you're all sick of seeing her but I really want to get this one right. If anyone spots something they think can be improved, speak now or forever hold your peas. Redlines still allowed, but what I'm most concerned about now is the hair, tail, and torso. If this meets approval, I may go ahead and start on a male counterpart.



Also, someone please tell me if I shouldn't be posting the same thing repeatedly. I don't think there is a rule about it, but I don't want to annoy people.[/quote]

I love this, i thinks it's very creative! I think it's perfect, I can't wait to see the male counterpart:3

[Audrey_Bee]

So.. Ahh, here's my elsa drawing, one of many drawings but this one is one of my favorites :3

[Night Visions]

I really like your creativity, and I can't wait to see the male counterpart! The only thing I think maybe could be improved is the tail, it looks slightly too large. But other than that, it's pretty good! The colours work perfectly too. And I've seen the redlines for it other people have done, hopefully you can use these to further develop it. But nice start!

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And I'm in the process of trying to draw something now. May post later if it works out.

[Night Visions]

So.. Ahh, here's my elsa drawing, one of many drawings but this one is one of my favorites :3

This looks great! The shading really works well in this drawing, and you've got the shape of the hair really well. The proportion is also clearly thought out, and it looks very professional. I can't think of any areas that could be improved on this one, but then, I'm terrible at noticing tiny things that could be improved slightly. c:
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Anyway, better get back to work on my own drawing which I may post later on.

[wolfsong-mapleflame]

So.. Ahh, here's my elsa drawing, one of many drawings but this one is one of my favorites :3

I think it's a bit flat, or squashed. Would it be okay if I did a redline?

[Audrey_Bee]

So.. Ahh, here's my elsa drawing, one of many drawings but this one is one of my favorites :3

I think it's a bit flat, or squashed. Would it be okay if I did a redline?

Yeah, that's fine :3