Re: first star #4 //open

Postby Beachy. » Thu May 15, 2014 3:33 pm

username: Jane Doe
name: Laidee ("Lady" as in Lady Bug)
gender: Female
child's name: Belladonna Marie

"Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight. I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I wish tonight."
Belladonna was only 5 years old when she was told that her mother abandoned her in such poor health. The small child with raven black hair and the star-filled hazel eyes had been the result of a high school teenage pregnancy, and was just dumped carelessly off to the side of the school as a newborn infant. She had severe brain damage, impairing her long term memory, her short term memory, and her ability to understand things. Despite all these factors, she is indeed a fairly bright girl from what she can grasp.
Bella had been found by a homeless man who brought her to an orphanage where she was taken care of to their highest ability. The homeless man's name was Robert Estello, and he had given her the name Belladonna after his favorite flower. She has definitely grown into her name in appearance, but her personality is brighter than ever.
Every now and again Robert would visit Bella and keep her company when the other kids would get adopted. The other parents wouldn't take her due to her learning and memory disabilities. Robert would come and teach her what he could, patiently trying as hard as he could to make something worthwhile stick. Bella is slowly making progress, thanks to Robert.
After years of taking care of her, Robert wished nothing more than to be able to adopt the small child, but even after all this time, he still couldn't afford the fees. A month before Bella's fifth birthday, Robert died from HIV.
Leaning into her windowsill one night, she looked up at the stars and wished as must as her little heart would let her, that she would find a new home. She wanted more than anything to have Robert back, but she knew that something that big was out of the control of even the highest of powers.
Suddenly a shooting star flew lazily across the sky, and Bella watched it in awe. Noticing that it was growing bigger, she stepped back from the window as a furry little ball of starlight crash landed in her room at the orphanage. It looked at her with wide kind eyes, and Bella shyly stepped closer to it. "Hi" she said in a quiet voice and the strange creature opened up a bottle around it's neck, taking out a small envelope and showing it to Bella. Reading it, she handed it back to the spotted ball of fluff. "You heard me." her eyes gleamed.
Since that day, Belladonna named her new friend Laidee, and the two of them had been inseparable. Laidee granted Bella's wish, and helped her find a new home where she was loved and taken care of by Melissa and Joseph Viramontez. Even when Laidee goes off to grant the wishes of other small soul's her heart will always belong to Bella, and she will always return home when she's called.


I hope this is alright, she's beautiful!
im leaving chicken smoothie, but I'm giving everything to my friend ~Satanic~Embrace~ or however you spell it. Sorry for the inconvenience everyone, but I've been through a lot of emotional stuff lately that I just can't handle anymore. You were all great friends, and SE has been a past member of CS, and she said she would come back only to honor my retirement. Treat her with nothing but respect, she is one of the nicest people you will meet. Goodbye all!
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Re: first star #4 //open

Postby RainbowCharizard » Fri May 16, 2014 10:40 am

username: RainbowCharizard
name: Scallywag;; meaning prankster or rascal.
gender: Female
child's name: Jaqueline wanted nothing more than to spread her arms and fly, fly away into the air and the clouds. She would find great joy in running around grassy windy fields with her arms spread out like wings. She would climb up old crumbly boulders, and when she was at the top, she would puff out her chest, and take a graceful leap to the ground.
But one day, she was running around a coastal cliff. She peered over the edge, staring at the crashing, powerful waves with a gaping mouth of awe.
She dreamily gazed at birds gliding over the waves, riding the air current with ease. They seemed almost weightless.
She crossed her fingers and lay her chin on her folded arms, and barely pronounced a whisper, "I wish... I could be like them. I wish I could fly, and have not a care in the world..."
At that moment, a small fuzzy creature, flying at a high altitude, heard her words. The little impish thing thought, "Well, if she wants to fly, why doesn't she try?"
And she swooped down, pushing the little girl off of the cliff.....

Ah poor Scallywag, never knew how to grant wishes correctly!
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Re: first star #4 //open

Postby fairy king » Fri May 16, 2014 11:53 am

username: Olympians
name: Marieta {Ladybug in Catalan}
gender: female
child's name: Artemis

Star light, star bright. First star I see tonight. I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I wish tonight. I'll make a wish, and do as dreamers do, and all my wishes will come true.

Artemis is a young girl, full of hopes and dreams and happy endings. Her mother would stand outside with her around the same time every night to watch for the first star, and when they saw it, they would sing the wishes song together and make a wish. But her mother had fallen ill, and was no longer strong enough to keep up their tradition. So on this night, after wishing the same thing for the past few nights, her wish was finally chosen by Marieta; She wishes for her mother to get better. Every night when she would wish for her mother's health, she would sing the song by herself and think about her wish really, really hard. Marieta heard her wish loud and clear, and believed that it was most definitely the most important. Duets never sound as sweet when they're sung alone.
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Re: first star #4 //open

Postby Liliette » Fri May 16, 2014 4:14 pm

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    username: alfendi, previously captain katie/miss katie
    name: Ladybirdee
    gender: female
    child's name: She scurried up the stairs, slammed open her bedroom door and hopped into her bed. From her nappy, dark curly ebony hair, orange pajama shirt, which had a two holes on her back the size of a baseball and nearly went past her knees, and socks probably the size of Godzilla's compared to her tiny feet, she looked like a homeless child. Amanda Jane, is her name, and boy was she a troublemaker, but to her, she was a dreamer.

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Re: first star #4 //open

Postby inactive20000009 » Sat May 17, 2014 7:11 am

closed for judging o v o
people who have wip forms must have them finished by 7:00 today, i'm giving you a little less than 4 hours ^^
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Re: first star #4 //forms closed

Postby inactive20000009 » Sat May 17, 2014 11:06 am

and we havveeeee a winner winners ^^

Jane Doe wrote:username: Jane Doe
name: Laidee ("Lady" as in Lady Bug)
gender: Female
child's name: Belladonna Marie

"Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight. I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I wish tonight."
Belladonna was only 5 years old when she was told that her mother abandoned her in such poor health. The small child with raven black hair and the star-filled hazel eyes had been the result of a high school teenage pregnancy, and was just dumped carelessly off to the side of the school as a newborn infant. She had severe brain damage, impairing her long term memory, her short term memory, and her ability to understand things. Despite all these factors, she is indeed a fairly bright girl from what she can grasp.
Bella had been found by a homeless man who brought her to an orphanage where she was taken care of to their highest ability. The homeless man's name was Robert Estello, and he had given her the name Belladonna after his favorite flower. She has definitely grown into her name in appearance, but her personality is brighter than ever.
Every now and again Robert would visit Bella and keep her company when the other kids would get adopted. The other parents wouldn't take her due to her learning and memory disabilities. Robert would come and teach her what he could, patiently trying as hard as he could to make something worthwhile stick. Bella is slowly making progress, thanks to Robert.
After years of taking care of her, Robert wished nothing more than to be able to adopt the small child, but even after all this time, he still couldn't afford the fees. A month before Bella's fifth birthday, Robert died from HIV.
Leaning into her windowsill one night, she looked up at the stars and wished as must as her little heart would let her, that she would find a new home. She wanted more than anything to have Robert back, but she knew that something that big was out of the control of even the highest of powers.
Suddenly a shooting star flew lazily across the sky, and Bella watched it in awe. Noticing that it was growing bigger, she stepped back from the window as a furry little ball of starlight crash landed in her room at the orphanage. It looked at her with wide kind eyes, and Bella shyly stepped closer to it. "Hi" she said in a quiet voice and the strange creature opened up a bottle around it's neck, taking out a small envelope and showing it to Bella. Reading it, she handed it back to the spotted ball of fluff. "You heard me." her eyes gleamed.
Since that day, Belladonna named her new friend Laidee, and the two of them had been inseparable. Laidee granted Bella's wish, and helped her find a new home where she was loved and taken care of by Melissa and Joseph Viramontez. Even when Laidee goes off to grant the wishes of other small soul's her heart will always belong to Bella, and she will always return home when she's called.


I hope this is alright, she's beautiful!

this one was a little word-heavy, and i know i'm judging on names and not stories, but honestly the message got through loud and clear <3 i have a soft spot for the name belladonna and i loved your backstory!
i loved your characters, even though i knew them for such a short time, and the happy ending made me wibble hh X3
congratulations, take good care of laidee!


RainbowCharizard wrote:username: RainbowCharizard
name: Scallywag;; meaning prankster or rascal.
gender: Female
child's name: Jaqueline wanted nothing more than to spread her arms and fly, fly away into the air and the clouds. She would find great joy in running around grassy windy fields with her arms spread out like wings. She would climb up old crumbly boulders, and when she was at the top, she would puff out her chest, and take a graceful leap to the ground.
But one day, she was running around a coastal cliff. She peered over the edge, staring at the crashing, powerful waves with a gaping mouth of awe.
She dreamily gazed at birds gliding over the waves, riding the air current with ease. They seemed almost weightless.
She crossed her fingers and lay her chin on her folded arms, and barely pronounced a whisper, "I wish... I could be like them. I wish I could fly, and have not a care in the world..."
At that moment, a small fuzzy creature, flying at a high altitude, heard her words. The little impish thing thought, "Well, if she wants to fly, why doesn't she try?"
And she swooped down, pushing the little girl off of the cliff.....

Ah poor Scallywag, never knew how to grant wishes correctly!


i just loved this form, it made me laugh so hard X33 however i didn't think it quite fit what i had in mind for this star, so i'm offering rainbow a runner-up <3
coughcough he will be based off an aphid and be laidee's mischievous younger brother ehehe
so please tell me whether you're interested ^^

thank you, everybody, if i could give every form a RU i would be so happy hheh
i loved all your forms, thank you for sharing ahhaaa <333
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Re: first star #4 //laidee

Postby Liliette » Sat May 17, 2014 11:19 am

    I WAS just aBout ta FInISh
    that's fine I guess, congrats y'all!
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Re: first star #4 //laidee

Postby inactive20000009 » Sat May 17, 2014 11:28 am

ahhhh i'm sorry ;^;
heh i thought that i gave enough time eek
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Re: first star #4 //laidee

Postby Liliette » Sat May 17, 2014 12:57 pm

    no it's not your fault it's ok I guess
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Re: first star #4 //forms closed

Postby RainbowCharizard » Sat May 17, 2014 1:15 pm

pocketbee wrote:i just loved this form, it made me laugh so hard X33 however i didn't think it quite fit what i had in mind for this star, so i'm offering rainbow a runner-up <3
coughcough he will be based off an aphid and be laidee's mischievous younger brother ehehe
so please tell me whether you're interested ^^

thank you, everybody, if i could give every form a RU i would be so happy hheh
i loved all your forms, thank you for sharing ahhaaa <333

TOTALLY INTERESTED. APHIDS ARE ALMOST AS COOL AS LADYBUGS LOL
Except he'd better be careful not to be eaten by his sister. XD
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