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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Thu May 15, 2014 3:32 pm

Venus357 wrote:Image/Description: Silver tabby
Name: Undecided (need help)
Gender: Female
Clan: WindClan
Rank: Young warrior
Personality/Skills: Very fast runner, even for WindClan standards. She's a friendly and polite cat, but not particularly outgoing. Very intelligent as well.
Important Notes: I based this cat off myself. I really love the character, but I can't think of a suitable name. I was wondering if you could help me. I'm thinking of something traditional, and maybe referring to her color or swiftness.


Well, thankfully, in traditionalism, we have the ability to name her for both!

Name Suggestions: Rainfoot/Ashfoot
Name Reasoning: Rain- refers to a grey tabby (dappled), and Ash- refers to any kind of grey tabby. -foot refers to her speed.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Like I did in the previous review, I'll offer some more trait suggestions, as there isn't anything wrong with her, but there's not much to pick on.
She could have a bit of impatience to her - maybe she doesn't really bother talking to others because there's a lot to be done and she has no time to be outgoing and accommodating. Or she likes to go out and take a jog around the border, just as an exercise and because she likes looking at the other territories and seeing how different they are. She may be highly observant, and because she doesn't set out to make friends, she just seems like a regular cat, but talking to her for more than a few minutes shows how bright she really can be. Perhaps she's a little more curious than she should be, and has been reprimanded many times for wandering off the territory to go inspect the remains of a campfire or a dead frog on the side of the road. She may live by the phrase "fortune favors the brave", and is willing to strike out and do curious things herself because she's got things to learn, darn it, and dragging others along will slow her down.
Man, I am just rattling off today. Anyway, those are some ideas.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Venus357 » Fri May 16, 2014 8:25 am

Arcaii wrote:
Venus357 wrote:Image/Description: Silver tabby
Name: Undecided (need help)
Gender: Female
Clan: WindClan
Rank: Young warrior
Personality/Skills: Very fast runner, even for WindClan standards. She's a friendly and polite cat, but not particularly outgoing. Very intelligent as well.
Important Notes: I based this cat off myself. I really love the character, but I can't think of a suitable name. I was wondering if you could help me. I'm thinking of something traditional, and maybe referring to her color or swiftness.


Well, thankfully, in traditionalism, we have the ability to name her for both!

Name Suggestions: Rainfoot/Ashfoot
Name Reasoning: Rain- refers to a grey tabby (dappled), and Ash- refers to any kind of grey tabby. -foot refers to her speed.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Like I did in the previous review, I'll offer some more trait suggestions, as there isn't anything wrong with her, but there's not much to pick on.
She could have a bit of impatience to her - maybe she doesn't really bother talking to others because there's a lot to be done and she has no time to be outgoing and accommodating. Or she likes to go out and take a jog around the border, just as an exercise and because she likes looking at the other territories and seeing how different they are. She may be highly observant, and because she doesn't set out to make friends, she just seems like a regular cat, but talking to her for more than a few minutes shows how bright she really can be. Perhaps she's a little more curious than she should be, and has been reprimanded many times for wandering off the territory to go inspect the remains of a campfire or a dead frog on the side of the road. She may live by the phrase "fortune favors the brave", and is willing to strike out and do curious things herself because she's got things to learn, darn it, and dragging others along will slow her down.
Man, I am just rattling off today. Anyway, those are some ideas.

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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby quitting,, » Fri May 16, 2014 10:28 am

Image/Description: A dark brown she-cat with brown, almost hazel eyes.
Name: Name suggestions please c:
Gender: She-cat
Clan: None c:
Rank: Most likely warrior
Personality/Skills: First off, this cat is based on me. She has a very sharp tongue, though is extremely shy to people she doesn't know until she gets to know them. Once you know her, she can be extremely sarcastic, funny, and loyal to her greatest friends. She has unique... 'addictions and hobbies'; for example, counting every step she takes or timing the seconds it takes to get from tree to tree. (True fact about me. It's annoying sometimes) She is extremely fast though; much faster than a lot of her friends. She has huge fear of mountains, grasshoppers, and bee's. She has a light step but an amazing sense of balance at the same time.
Important Notes: Hmm, I'm guessing my suffix is -storm or -foot or -tail?
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Fri May 16, 2014 1:26 pm

SkyroWolf wrote:
Image/Description: A dark brown she-cat with brown, almost hazel eyes.
Name: Name suggestions please c:
Gender: She-cat
Clan: None c:
Rank: Most likely warrior
Personality/Skills: First off, this cat is based on me. She has a very sharp tongue, though is extremely shy to people she doesn't know until she gets to know them. Once you know her, she can be extremely sarcastic, funny, and loyal to her greatest friends. She has unique... 'addictions and hobbies'; for example, counting every step she takes or timing the seconds it takes to get from tree to tree. (True fact about me. It's annoying sometimes) She is extremely fast though; much faster than a lot of her friends. She has huge fear of mountains, grasshoppers, and bee's. She has a light step but an amazing sense of balance at the same time.
Important Notes: Hmm, I'm guessing my suffix is -storm or -foot or -tail?


I will be assuming here that this is a warriorsona, so no personality reviewing going on here. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong and I'll do a proper review.

Name Suggestion: Darkfoot/Minkfoot
Name Reasoning: Dark- covers a generally dark colored cat (duh), and Mink- is for a dark brown cat. Since speed is her biggest skill, we'll go with -foot here.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby ellyenchanted » Fri May 16, 2014 3:04 pm

Image/Description: Brown tabby with pretty green eyes.
Name: Dewcloud
Gender: Female
Clan: Riverclan 
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Dewcloud is a very soft, self-conscious, calm, and shy kind of cat. She doesn't seem to really stand out at anything. Most consider her average. Dewcloud is incredibly sensitive and sweet once you get to know her.
Important Notes: None
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby quitting,, » Fri May 16, 2014 3:18 pm

Arcaii wrote:
SkyroWolf wrote:
Image/Description: A dark brown she-cat with brown, almost hazel eyes.
Name: Name suggestions please c:
Gender: She-cat
Clan: None c:
Rank: Most likely warrior
Personality/Skills: First off, this cat is based on me. She has a very sharp tongue, though is extremely shy to people she doesn't know until she gets to know them. Once you know her, she can be extremely sarcastic, funny, and loyal to her greatest friends. She has unique... 'addictions and hobbies'; for example, counting every step she takes or timing the seconds it takes to get from tree to tree. (True fact about me. It's annoying sometimes) She is extremely fast though; much faster than a lot of her friends. She has huge fear of mountains, grasshoppers, and bee's. She has a light step but an amazing sense of balance at the same time.
Important Notes: Hmm, I'm guessing my suffix is -storm or -foot or -tail?


I will be assuming here that this is a warriorsona, so no personality reviewing going on here. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong and I'll do a proper review.

Name Suggestion: Darkfoot/Minkfoot
Name Reasoning: Dark- covers a generally dark colored cat (duh), and Mink- is for a dark brown cat. Since speed is her biggest skill, we'll go with -foot here.

Hahaha, no, this is not a warriorsona. Just something I kind of wanted to do since someone did it a page or so back! :lol:
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Fri May 16, 2014 3:42 pm

Ah! Well, at the moment I'm a little busy, so I'll give you a very quick character review. (Apologies for that.)

Overall, there isn't much wrong with the character - her being shy and then suddenly outgoing and sarcastic is a little weird, but it could easily just be changed to her being a little colder to strangers and more sardonic.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby quitting,, » Fri May 16, 2014 3:56 pm

Arcaii wrote:Ah! Well, at the moment I'm a little busy, so I'll give you a very quick character review. (Apologies for that.)

Overall, there isn't much wrong with the character - her being shy and then suddenly outgoing and sarcastic is a little weird, but it could easily just be changed to her being a little colder to strangers and more sardonic.

Ehhh- it's something I've carried for a long time now.


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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sat May 17, 2014 10:26 am

SkyroWolf wrote:
Ehhh- it's something I've carried for a long time now.


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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sat May 17, 2014 10:32 am

Venice; wrote:Image/Description: Brown tabby with pretty green eyes.
Name: Dewcloud
Gender: Female
Clan: Riverclan 
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Dewcloud is a very soft, self-conscious, calm, and shy kind of cat. She doesn't seem to really stand out at anything. Most consider her average. Dewcloud is incredibly sensitive and sweet once you get to know her.
Important Notes: None


Sorry about not getting to this sooner!

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: Dew is a clear substance that disappears early into the day. It has no visual connotations, specifically because it's clear, and can appear on literally any plant. Her suffix does fit her just fine, so don't worry on that.
Alternative Name: Briarcloud/Dustcloud. Both prefixes are for a brown cat, and -cloud stays as it is.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: My only thing is that it seems a little odd for her to be calm and soft but very shy and self-conscious. -cloud cats can have insecurities, but the basis of their personality is a lax state where it's hard to get under their skin. My suggestion is to make her more mildly self-conscious but keep her calmness and soft way of speaking.
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