Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Warriors13lover]

Need more help, lol. I am now in need of two names, one for a red cat one for a mostly white with a few red patches.

[Arcaii]

It would really depend on how white this cat is. If they're roughly 75% or more white or the spots are relatively small, then they would need a white implying name. If the spots are highly noticeable, they would need a patched name.

For a red colored cat, there's Ant- (suggested for a smaller cat), Burnet-, Cherry-, Cypress-, Fire-, Fox-, Holly-, Plum-, Poppy-, Red-, Rowan-, Russet-, Sorrel-, Stoat-, and Tiger-. I do have the general prefix list if you're in need of it (typing out all these prefixes can be tiring, especially with the longer lists, haha).

[Warriors13lover]

That would be great lol

[Arcaii]

Here you are! Be warned for potential swearing in the descriptions.

[Warriors13lover]

Thank you your the best lol

[Arcaii]

If you need any more help, do tell me!

[Zoethian]

Hello! Thought I'd pop in with my newest try at a warrior cat if that's alright with you~

Image/Description: Tall, thin, short-furred, gingery red-brown (w/ some white-grey), amber eyes. One scar besides left eye.
Name: Robinkit, Robinpaw Robinflight.
Gender: She-cat.
Clan: At the moment, I'm just trying to get her right~
Rank: Full time Queen.
Personality/Skills: Stubborn, kind, brave, calm, sweet, gets confused very easily, motherly, honest. She used to be very fast and was once an amazing hunter, but settled down after a time to have a family life - but she still does some hunting in her free time.
Important Notes: I don't believe there's anything? I feel like I haven't really given you much info, if you need more, please say and I'll dig it outta my notepad~

[beauty thief.]

Name: Heronfeather
Description: White tom with icy blue eyes and patches of grey. He is tall but slim, and has long dark whiskers. His tail is also quite long.
Important Notes: Nope!

[Raddy]

Image/Description: Long furred white she-cat with a distinct cuff of fur around her neck (like a mane) with blue eyes
Name: Silkvoice
Gender: female
Clan: Thunderclan (usually fan clans though, like ones in a snowy forest)
Rank: Warrior, sometimes queen
Personality/Skills: Kind and caring, protective, she is great at keeping secrets and being a shoulder to lean on. She is great at hunting fish and has found a little clearing full of snowdrops that she tends to in her spare time. She loves eating mice, except for the tails
Important Notes: She is mute. She lost her voice as an apprentice when she got a bad throat infection, and when she had her voice it was quite pretty.

Image/Description: Light grey tabby with slightly darker stripes and a pale underbelly with blue eyes, again...
Name: Ghosthaze
Gender: female
Clan: Thunderclan
Rank: warrior/queen
Personality/Skills: She is slightly childish and is friendly with everyone. She is good at sneaking up on others and is known for keeping her cool in tough situations. She is not as good at staying calm in minor situations, like when she found out she was going to have kits she started freaking out.
Important Notes: She was a kittypet before meeting her future mate

[Arcaii]

Hello! Thought I'd pop in with my newest try at a warrior cat if that's alright with you~

Image/Description: Tall, thin, short-furred, gingery red-brown (w/ some white-grey), amber eyes. One scar besides left eye.
Name: Robinkit, Robinpaw Robinflight.
Gender: She-cat.
Clan: At the moment, I'm just trying to get her right~
Rank: Full time Queen.
Personality/Skills: Stubborn, kind, brave, calm, sweet, gets confused very easily, motherly, honest. She used to be very fast and was once an amazing hunter, but settled down after a time to have a family life - but she still does some hunting in her free time.
Important Notes: I don't believe there's anything? I feel like I haven't really given you much info, if you need more, please say and I'll dig it outta my notepad~

Rad! Let's take a look here. (And don't worry, this is plenty of information to go on.)

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: I think I'll just quote a previous -flight post, since somehow I don't even know why I haven't put it up yet:

The basics follow -wing: it's something cats can't really do, and if it wanted to say a fast cat or agile climber, it's covered by -foot and -tail.

Her prefix, though, fits her to a T! So the only issue is her suffix, which can easily be changed thanks to her skills in hunting.
Alternative Name: Robinwhisker. -whisker indicates a cat who's very skilled at hunting, and Robin- stays as it is.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: Her personality is laid out in a large number of traits that don't really feel connected. None of these traits seem to really conflict, but without some connection they feel a little stilted. I think the "easily confused" bit could be taken out, to make room for a more fluid characterization.
She could, for example, be a calm and thoughtful cat who has a quiet steadiness and bravery that lets her stare down even the fiercest leader without so much as blinking, who doesn't need to raise her voice to be heard, nor does she ever get into arguments because her motherly nature and gentle honesty leaves no room for arguing. Maybe cats automatically want to do their best around her, because a mother's disappointment is about the worst thing one can face - and she never does get angry, just shakes her head sadly and walks off. I can see her being someone who doesn't really have a mate - whoever she was friendly with at the time provided her with kits, but they had nothing beyond that - and could be a solid rock in times of distress.
Kinda went on a tangent there, but you get my point.