Snowlep333 wrote:Name: Willowstripe
Description: Light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes.
Important Notes: No notable skills, just average.
Name: Silverfang
Description: Light gray, a little silver-ish tabby tom with blue eyes.
Important Notes: He is highly ambitious and quick to battle.
Name: Blizzardclaw
Description: A light gray and white tom with blue eyes.
Important Notes: He is a fine warrior when it comes to combat.
Name: Icestorm
Description: Ginger and white tom with green eyes.
Important Notes: Not really notable in any special skill, but he is a rather good hunter, not outstanding though.
Name: Harefoot
Description: Brown she-cat, I haven't really tought about the eyes yet, but amber, I suppose.
Important Notes: She is lithe and fast on her paws, good hunter too.
Name: Dappledtail
Description: A dappled sandy she-cat with amber eyes.
Important Notes: She is a medicine cat, but she also likes racing her brothers and climbing.
Name: Stormwhisker
Description: Black tom with amber eyes. I suppose green would suit him too, I'm still developing that one.
Important Notes: He is generaly friendly with no outstanding skills.
It's a load, sorry for taking up your time, and thanks for any further reviews.
Don't worry about it. I've got nothing else to do this morning, and these are nice and short. It's always a nice break to simply review names that only need minor tweaks here and there.
WillowstripeRate: 8/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: Willow- generally means a grey or grey-brown cat, after the color of the bark. Since she's a light brown, the prefix doesn't work much. Her suffix is just fine, though.
Alternative Name: Barleystripe/Honeystripe. Both prefixes reference a light brown cat, and her suffix stays as it is.
SilverfangRate: 8/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: I'm not sure if he's actually good at battling, or just someone who tends to fight easily. Either way, -fang wouldn't work for him, mostly because he doesn't seem to be an equally good hunter. I'll make an assumption here that he's a good fighter, if he's happy to battle, and leave his prefix as is, since it works.
Alternative Name: Silverclaw, for the reasons above. If he's just average at fighting, use -pelt/-fur instead.
BlizzardclawRate: 10/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: If he's white and grey patched, I'd have to suggest a different name, but he seems to be a regular light grey tabby, so the name's perfect for him.
Alternative Name: In case he is indeed a patched cat, Shrikeclaw/Patchclaw.
IcestormRate: 3/10
Type: Misplaced Traditional
Reasoning: Ice- refers, generally, to an all white cat, rather than a ginger and white one. He doesn't seem to have wild mood swings, either, so -storm doesn't work either. While he isn't completely outstanding in hunting, he is notably good at it, so I think we can use -whisker for him.
I'm going to assume that hes a patched cat here, and if he isn't, please let me know.
Alternative Name: Mottlewhisker/Poplarwhisker. Sadly, ginger-and-white patched cats are absurdly difficult to name, so these are the best ones I could find. Poplar- refers to a golden-and-white cat, and Mottle- refers to a patched cat, especially one with irregular patching.
HarefootRate: 10/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: Harefoot works perfectly for her (Hare-'s always been a prefix I'm fond of, anyway). Coincidental for her, I'm sure (fast as a hare, haha), but her parents must have been excited that the name worked out with her skill.
Alternative Name: None!
DappledtailRate: 10/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: For some reason it's specified as Dapple- rather than Dappled- on the traditionalism blog, but it's such a tiny difference I can't be bothered with it anymore. Anyway, the name works out great, though my only question is if she's actually very good at racing/climbing, or if she just likes to do it.
Alternative Name: If she's not particularly skilled at climbing, stick with -pelt/-fur/-foot (if she's very fast).
StormwhiskerRate: 6/10
Type: Traditional
Reasoning: Storm- specifies a dark grey cat, rather than a black one, and since he isn't a hunter, we can knock off -whisker. Also, if you want a suggestion on eyes, stick with yellow. Lord knows there are enough blue-eyed ones. A realistic, common eye color is absolutely wonderful to see.
Alternative Name: Beetlefur/Ratpelt/Shadefur. I suggested three since the first two aren't exactly popular (I have never met someone with a cat called Rat-), but all three reference a black cat. Since he has no outstanding skills or personality, he gets -pelt or -fur.