[PurpleKakashi]

our winner is TheMightyMeep! I love how you used Lucifer & I hope you are able to continue :}

Username:
TheMightyMeep

Kit Name:
Barnabas

Story:
"And here we see the ruins of the castle. Legend has it that Lucifer, the bringer of dawn, guards this place. Be careful mind, everyone! He could be here right now for all we know!" The teacher held a mock expression of fear as her class of young kits gasped and looked around them, half expecting to see the 'bringer of dawn' at any moment.

Many small eyes gazed in awe at the broken building. One in particular was amazed by the beauty of the crumbled towers and empty rooms.

A dark MWK trotted along behind the group, feeling a thrill run through his spine as he imagined what could've happened in the eerie darkness.

The poor man begged for forgiveness, pleading with the large amber fox like creature with paws that seemed to glow with an ominous ghastly green light. He seemed to have taken something of value from the scary creature. He seemed to squirm uncomfortably as his breath caught in his lungs and he coughed on his own words.

"Barnabas!"

The young kit swung his head around at his name, the teacher was glaring at him. "Yes? Sorry." He flattened his ears and slunk back towards the group - He had fallen behind and was left alone in the room by himself.

"Now, as I was saying before someone got lost, in this room we see..."

Barnabas narrowed his eyes and pressed himself against the wall. His dark complexion allowed him to hide in the shadows and his light footwork meant he could sneak back into the old room.

"Ha. Stupid lady." He sniggered, shaking his head with a cocky grin, padding back into the dusty room. "Now, where was I-" The youngster nosed around the room. He had always had a thing for mischief, he was considered a bad student and would rebel against the rules. He did what he wanted and no one would stop that.

The light that cracked through the broken window bounced off something shiny. Weird. Everything else is so dusty; why is this so clean?

Giving in easily to the curiosity that had engulfed him, Barnabas pawed at the shiny object- it seemed to be a bracelet of some sort. It was yellow and orange and seemed to have a faint familiarness to it. With a huge grin, he slipped his paw into it as if to wear it- but it was too big for him.

A freezing chill suddenly surround him and made his fur stand on edge. "Huh?" Barnabas felt the movement on his neck as he realised that something was breathing on him. Tripping over his paws, he spun around and his eyes widened with terror.
Before him stood the fox he imagined earlier- it was his imagination, right? The fox said nothing, but flashed his teeth in a viscous snarl as he snapped at the young male.

With a squeak of fright - the only noise that he could make - Barnabas rolled away from the snapping jaws.

"I'm sorry!" He screamed, shaking the bracelet from his foreleg. "I didn't mean to-"

"BARNABAS."

The shaken kit froze and felt a sob escape him. He flicked an ear, realising that he knew that voice-

"Barnabas, will I have to tell your father that you are misbehaving again?" The teacher was clearly annoyed at the male. "Barnabas? What is wrong?" Her tone softened, seeing the male begin to cry and curl into a ball.

"I saw him! Lucifer! He tried to ki-" The small male stumbled to the small group of kits and his teacher, pushing his face hard into her leg. "He tried to kill me!"

A few giggled spread through the class and his teacher rolled her eyes. "Oh Barnabas. There was no such thing as Lucifer. It's all made up. Come on, it's time to go home, I think."'

Barnabas followed after the class, his tail tucked and wound around one of his back legs. His ears pricked at the sound at a gruff and ghostly laugh.

Looking quickly back behind him, he spotted a yellow and orange bracelet. It was the only thing that was clean and tempting in the dusty room of darkness.

{Thank you for letting us use Lucifer in our stories .u.
I hope that the story wasn't too long, I could've carried on for ages XD }

[Leafe]

congratulations! ^-^

[TheMightyMeep]

klnl.fngksjfg. Oh my ;u;

Thank you so much! C:
I can't wait to see him, he'll be my first <3

Well done to everyone else too, I thought all the stories were amazing! :D

-rolls around with Barnabas-

[PurpleKakashi]

Almost forgot to reveal him!

[TheMightyMeep]

Ahh! He is so handsome! ;u; I love the fluffy edits and his tail is stunning! Thank you so much! -snugs Barnabas[but Barny for short <3]-