Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[meowingtons]

Image/Description: Wolfheart is a light grey Tom with a dark grey back, white paws, muzzle, and tail tip, and also has Amber eyes.
Name: Wolfheart. He was named that because his mother thought that he looked like a wolf.
Gender: Tom
Clan: Any clan is fine.
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Wolfheart is a shy, quiet Tom. He often tries to avoid strangers and not talk to them, but once he opens up to you, he's kind and protective. He will care for you but can sometimes be over-protective.
Important Notes: Nope c:

[Arcaii]

Description: A very light grey cat with darker almost black spots, light green eyes.
Name:Pebblewhisker
Gender: Tom
Clan:Shadowclan
Rank:Warrior
Personality/skills: He is an average cat, with an above average hunting/tracking skills. He has a hard time fighting because he doesn't like hurting others. He is often called for border patrols because he will often be able to smell intruders before anyone else. He likes to be alone but understands the importance of working together. He has fathered three litters of kits with 3 different mothers.
Other info:nope nope

(Sorry I have done so many x) )

It's completely fine, don't worry about it. I'm happy to help.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: This is a good name for him! Everything fits together, and I'm happy to see a name with Pebble- that doesn't end in -stream (I mean, it's a fine name, but I've seen it quite a bit).
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: The only thing is that it's odd that they'd pick him for border patrol when he doesn't like hurting other cats and there's a chance of a possible fight, and they are aware of it. He does have good senses, but he should be spending his time hunting, not checking borders. Other than that, everything is solid!

[Warriors13lover]

Thank you for all the help I'll come back with a few more tomorrow lol

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Wolfheart is a light grey Tom with a dark grey back, white paws, muzzle, and tail tip, and also has Amber eyes.
Name: Wolfheart. He was named that because his mother thought that he looked like a wolf.
Gender: Tom
Clan: Any clan is fine.
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Wolfheart is a shy, quiet Tom. He often tries to avoid strangers and not talk to them, but once he opens up to you, he's kind and protective. He will care for you but can sometimes be over-protective.
Important Notes: Nope c:

Name Rating: 2/10
Name Type: Canonical/Lyrical
Name Reasoning: Thank you for reminding me to put Wolf- up on the Prefix list. There's three main issues with Wolf-:
1) Wolves come in a lot of different colors, and there's too many possibilities for a fur color for cats to be a certain, usable name.
2) Wolves do not live in the UK, where the series, and most fan-made Clans and characters, live. They were wiped out years ago.
3) If a Clan lives in an area where they see wolves regularly, they're probably going to be eaten. Coyotes are worse, but wolves are more bold, and will take down prey in a large group that may likely overwhelm a patrol.
On top of that, he's not really a -heart sort. A -heart cat, at least in the book of traditionalism, is someone who is strongly dedicated to a sense of morality and the right path. They tend to be obnoxious, bold, and willing to fight for what they believe in. This guy's about the opposite of that. He doesn't seem to have any name-able traits, so we'll stick with the defaults.
Alternative Name: Greyfur/Breampelt, suffixes interchangeable.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: As long as he doesn't suddenly become extroverted and overly friendly around people he cares for, I don't see any inconsistencies. I do suggest, if you don't want the default names, to find him a talent that can be named for, but other than that, he's pretty solid.

[Warriors13lover]

Image/description: A white cat, except a few black patches, one on each foot, a small one on the chest and one on the base of the tail. Dark Brown almost black eyes.
Name: Iceclaw
Gender:Tom
Clan:Riverclan
Rank:Warrior
Personality/Skills: He is a very small,lithe cat. You would never expect the fight that is in that tiny cat. He has can anger problem. When angered he doesn't always think straight . He tries to control it but often has trouble. He is impressively strong for his size and is often called for battles. He isn't as sure at hunting though he tries. Many elders think he will mellow when/if he finds a mate.
Important info:He isn't a fan of kittypets (later on his mate will be a former kittypet lol)

[Arcaii]

Image/description: A white cat, except a few black patches, one on each foot, a small one on the chest and one on the base of the tail. Dark Brown almost black eyes.
Name: Iceclaw
Gender:Tom
Clan:Riverclan
Rank:Warrior
Personality/Skills: He is a very small,lithe cat. You would never expect the fight that is in that tiny cat. He has can anger problem. When angered he doesn't always think straight . He tries to control it but often has trouble. He is impressively strong for his size and is often called for battles. He isn't as sure at hunting though he tries. Many elders think he will mellow when/if he finds a mate.
Important info:He isn't a fan of kittypets (later on his mate will be a former kittypet lol)

Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: A black and white patched cat is not exactly a white cat. I mean, granted, he is majority white, but the way his patches are is definitely noticeable, but we'll talk more about the coat thing in a bit. His name checks out pretty well otherwise.
Alternative Name: Diverclaw/Iceclaw, with some tweaking. Diver- recognizes a black and white patched cat.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: There's a few issues here that we need to talk about:
The first is his whole coloring. It's like an inverted color thing; the opposite would be a black cat with white markings and yellow eyes. Nearly-black eyes are nonexistent and pretty bizarre looking on a cat, and black markings do not happen in that pattern. White marking/spotting sort of works like this. The black parts would be on the top of his body, not the bottom. If you want to keep the vast majority white thing, then go with something based on one of the patterns in the link.
Plus, there's the whole talent in conjunction with his build. -claw cats tend to be large and bulky, and know how to use their size to win a fight quickly and efficiently. A small cat is going to have a lot of problems battling against larger enemies, so they need to work at it twice as hard. Plus, you gave him a lithe, tiny frame. If he's really as strong as he is, he's likely going to be pretty muscular (think like a dwarf in the Lord of the Rings - they're stout and powerful). I would make him a more broad-shouldered cat.

[Altias]

Bip bop bap! Bump.

[Arcaii]

oh hi alt

[five.six.seven]

Name: Thrushmask
Description: Seal lynx point with deep blue eyes.
Important Notes: Likes climbing, quite fast. Generally friendly cat.

Thanks~

[Arcaii]

Name: Thrushmask
Description: Seal lynx point with deep blue eyes.
Important Notes: Likes climbing, quite fast. Generally friendly cat.

Thanks~

Thank you for reminding me to post up about pointed cats on the Common Problems post. My job here isn't to critique your cat's coat, though I must state for the record that pointed cats are specifically bred to be pointed, and they do not exist in the wild naturally. Your cat will, most likely, have to be an ex-kittypet, or someone with very recent kittypet origins.

Also! I did a quick Google search on lynx points, and there are a wide variety of them and what they look like, so I can't really be sure on what your cat actually looks like. Please be a bit more specific next time, coloring wise ("lynx pointed cat with brown/black points and markings across the legs/thighs" would be perfect, for example). It makes rating and suggestions a lot easier.

Rate: 6/10
Type: Canonical
Reasoning: Thrush- means a grey-brown cat, traditionally. Pointeds tend to be pale gold in color (cream, whatever), with darker, usually brown legs, tail, and face. You can see the issue here.
I do understand that -mask can mean a pointed cat, but as said above, there are no pointed cats in the wild naturally, so the Clans, most likely, would not have a specific suffix for them (the only specific marking suffix is -stripe, and even then that has some rules to it, so there's no point). They have a skill, speed, and here we tend to value skill over appearance.
Pointed cats are inherently difficult to name, just so you know, so these suggested names will be a little shaky.
Alternative Name: Daisyfoot/Knotfoot. Daisy- means either a light golden cat or a white one, so depending on how dark or big their markings are they could be named for the majority of their coat. Knot- refers to a grey-and-white patched cat (assuming that the markings in question are merely slightly darker than the rest of the coat), and -foot refers to a fast cat.