Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Keriae]

I hope you don't mind me saying something Arcaii, but I believe that cat is a fawn torbie ^.^ I'd personally go with honey-

[Arcaii]

I do mind, yes, especially since Honey- is not for a cat of that color.

Reed- or Lion- seem to be the most appropriate names. (Cedar- and Honey- being too dark and too light, respectively, Moth- being for grey-brown torties, and Morning- being for a dilute, which is a greyish color.) I would go between and say this cat is a golden-brown, so my suggestion is to go with the two prefixes above.

[Keriae]

I got my colours mixed up. That is a lilac torbie. Therefore, if it is majorly lilac as apposed to the brown (which is technically not brown; that is only brown cats with black stripes) I feel honey- would fit. Honey can be many different colours, not just the clear golden sold in stores.
Of course, it is your thread, but a couple of opinions are better than one and I only wanted to help. I picked up a rude tone in your first sentence and I had to reply.
Sorry for trying to help </3
I'd post a link to a few pictures but I'm on my phone.

[Warriors13lover]

Image/Description:She is a pretty grey cat with white on her paws,she is short-haired exept her tail which is long and feathered, she has striking green eyes and a very light pink nose.
Name: Fishclaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Depends on the rp lol
Rank: Queen/deputy
Personality/Skills: She is a very energetic and fun loving cat, she is usually very nice but has a very sharp tongue if pushed. She is a very good hunter and a fair fighter. She is very happy being deputy and loves her clan. She was made a warrior half a moon early because of a huge battle she was in, saving her mentors life.
Important Notes: nada

[qiripan]

Hi! Here's the character I was going to send in with the Moss- prefix.

Image/Description: Brown torbie with dull green eyes.
Name: Mosspaw {Suggestions for a warrior name?}
Gender: She-cat
Clan: LightningClan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: Mosspaw is a lively she-cat and the first one to be blamed for something. She often gets into trouble, but doesn't mind. She is easy to forgive anybody, and honestly, usually has no clue what the real problems are. Mosspaw is average in hunting and fighting, but she excels in climbing and running. She is better at climbing rather than running.
Important Notes: Nope! Thanks a lot C=

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:She is a pretty grey cat with white on her paws,she is short-haired exept her tail which is long and feathered, she has striking green eyes and a very light pink nose.
Name: Fishclaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Depends on the rp lol
Rank: Queen/deputy
Personality/Skills: She is a very energetic and fun loving cat, she is usually very nice but has a very sharp tongue if pushed. She is a very good hunter and a fair fighter. She is very happy being deputy and loves her clan. She was made a warrior half a moon early because of a huge battle she was in, saving her mentors life.
Important Notes: nada

Name Rating: 5/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: Fishclaw is a fun name to say, I'll grant you that. But we know how that goes here.

(This review thread in a nutshell)
Fish- is too broad of a name; it could mean literally any kind of fish, and most fish tend to not look the same. Fortunately there are some fish that are grey and have a name that can be used, so I'll throw a couple your way and see what sticks to the wall.
-claw is a traditional suffix, but it doesn't really work for her, as she's a fair fighter, not an excellent one. She is a great hunter, though, which I think she should be named for instead.
Alternative Name: Bleakwhisker/Roachwhisker. The prefixes sound weird, I know, but they're both a type of fish common in rivers, and they both will work for a grey cat. -whisker denotes her hunting abilities.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Overall, this is a good cat. I think my only issues are the sharp-tongued thing (which would imply a cat that's very good at thinking up insults, a little disconcerting for a friendly cat), and the graduating early thing, though that's minor, since she didn't graduate a few moons early. Otherwise, a pretty good cat!

[Arcaii]

Hi! Here's the character I was going to send in with the Moss- prefix.

Image/Description: Brown torbie with dull green eyes.
Name: Mosspaw {Suggestions for a warrior name?}
Gender: She-cat
Clan: LightningClan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: Mosspaw is a lively she-cat and the first one to be blamed for something. She often gets into trouble, but doesn't mind. She is easy to forgive anybody, and honestly, usually has no clue what the real problems are. Mosspaw is average in hunting and fighting, but she excels in climbing and running. She is better at climbing rather than running.
Important Notes: Nope! Thanks a lot C=

Name Suggestion: Mapletail/Leopardtail
Name Reasoning: Someone alerted me to the fact that there is a breed of moss known as Irish Moss that has white flowers when it blooms, and I do believe it grows in the UK, so it may be usable for a white cat. This cat isn't really white, though, so I'll have to suggest one of the two names above. -tail is for her skills in balancing and climbing, and Maple- and Leopard- pass for a majority-brown tortoiseshell.
We have three options here: change her color to white, use one of the two names above, or go the less restrictive route and go ahead and use Moss- anyway, and disregard traditionalism, or at least part of it. Your call on that, it's your character.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: She doesn't sound like the brightest cat on the block, which is charming to me (I've always had a soft spot for the cats who aren't very smart but are very friendly). Anyway, she seems like a good cat, and my only recommendation is to add a little more to her - particularly, why she tends to get blamed for trouble more than others. Does she show up in the wrong place at the wrong time a lot, or is she just happy to take the blame?

[Arcaii]

I got my colours mixed up. That is a lilac torbie. Therefore, if it is majorly lilac as apposed to the brown (which is technically not brown; that is only brown cats with black stripes) I feel honey- would fit. Honey can be many different colours, not just the clear golden sold in stores.
Of course, it is your thread, but a couple of opinions are better than one and I only wanted to help. I picked up a rude tone in your first sentence and I had to reply.
Sorry for trying to help </3
I'd post a link to a few pictures but I'm on my phone.

There's no real way to word this without sounding rude, so I'll just say that people come to me for name advice. Input from others is not unwelcome, but I am not looking for someone to barge in and answer for me.
And, since you've disregarded my advice before because it didn't fit with your opinion and then told me I was wrong, you'll understand if I'm a tad frosty.
Kindly don't post here as if it was your advice people were looking for.

[qiripan]

Hi! Here's the character I was going to send in with the Moss- prefix.

Image/Description: Brown torbie with dull green eyes.
Name: Mosspaw {Suggestions for a warrior name?}
Gender: She-cat
Clan: LightningClan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: Mosspaw is a lively she-cat and the first one to be blamed for something. She often gets into trouble, but doesn't mind. She is easy to forgive anybody, and honestly, usually has no clue what the real problems are. Mosspaw is average in hunting and fighting, but she excels in climbing and running. She is better at climbing rather than running.
Important Notes: Nope! Thanks a lot C=

Name Suggestion: Mapletail/Leopardtail
Name Reasoning: Someone alerted me to the fact that there is a breed of moss known as Irish Moss that has white flowers when it blooms, and I do believe it grows in the UK, so it may be usable for a white cat. This cat isn't really white, though, so I'll have to suggest one of the two names above. -tail is for her skills in balancing and climbing, and Maple- and Leopard- pass for a majority-brown tortoiseshell.
We have three options here: change her color to white, use one of the two names above, or go the less restrictive route and go ahead and use Moss- anyway, and disregard traditionalism, or at least part of it. Your call on that, it's your character.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: She doesn't sound like the brightest cat on the block, which is charming to me (I've always had a soft spot for the cats who aren't very smart but are very friendly). Anyway, she seems like a good cat, and my only recommendation is to add a little more to her - particularly, why she tends to get blamed for trouble more than others. Does she show up in the wrong place at the wrong time a lot, or is she just happy to take the blame?

I love the sound of Maplepaw/tail, I'll go with that one.

[Arcaii]

Excellent! Glad that was a good name. Mapletail does sound pretty nice, don't it?