Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

A friend of mine has set up a semi-lit traditional RP site, if you feel like checking it out go nuts!

[Pokechu12]

A friend of mine has set up a semi-lit traditional RP site, if you feel like checking it out go nuts!

I've been waiting for a site like this. x3 / traditional naming has made me slightly picky on which warrior cat roleplays i join. |D /

So I'm guessing your Harestar and Atilas is Minkstar?

[Arcaii]

No, a friend of hers by the name of Holly is Harestar, and Altias is Minkstar. I'm just a regular on there.

[Pokechu12]

Ah ok. :3 Quick question though- do you by any chance remember Foxstar? Well, I decided to build on him a little more and make him an application form for Fieldclan- then decided to make his younger apprentice self. So this is how he came out!


Description: A small tom with short ginger tabby fur, a white blaze, chest, tail tip and two white paws
Name: Foxpaw. [ Foxstep. ]
Gender: Tom.
Clan: Fieldclan / Millclan
Rank: Apprentice.
Personality/Skills: Foxpaw is quite the crafty young fellow, and often likes to playfully tease his denmates. His cunning mind is useful in battle due to his quick decisions, but while in camp it can be a nightmare. He's a typical troublemaker- and yet deeply cares for his clanmates, and prefers to stay away from strangers or unknown objects.

While a weak swimmer and tracker, he has sharp eyesight and quite a funny looking slinking gait that helps him with hunting and stalking in general.
Important Notes: None.

[Arcaii]

Ah ok. :3 Quick question though- do you by any chance remember Foxstar? Well, I decided to build on him a little more and make him an application form for Fieldclan- then decided to make his younger apprentice self. So this is how he came out!


Description: A small tom with short ginger tabby fur, a white blaze, chest, tail tip and two white paws
Name: Foxpaw. [ Foxstep. ]
Gender: Tom.
Clan: Fieldclan / Millclan
Rank: Apprentice.
Personality/Skills: Foxpaw is quite the crafty young fellow, and often likes to playfully tease his denmates. His cunning mind is useful in battle due to his quick decisions, but while in camp it can be a nightmare. He's a typical troublemaker- and yet deeply cares for his clanmates, and prefers to stay away from strangers or unknown objects.

While a weak swimmer and tracker, he has sharp eyesight and quite a funny looking slinking gait that helps him with hunting and stalking in general.
Important Notes: None.

Oh, good! I remember him, yes. He'd be great in FieldClan.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: My only suggestion is if he's very outstanding in hunting, he should be named for that instead. But if he just happens to be pretty good at it, then -step works just fine.
Alternative Name: Foxwhisker, only if his hunting excels quite a bit.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: I think that someone like him - clever and mischievous - would be a bit bolder around strange things or cats. There's a little nerve required to be a troublemaker. Otherwise, I think he's just fine!

[Pokechu12]

I should be able to quickly edit out a few bits of my form. And he's around the average at hunting, thus why -step is used instead of -whisker. c:

Description: A white she-cat with ginger patches, copper eyes and strangely folded ears.
Name: Brightleaf.
Gender: She-cat.
Clan: Fieldclan
Rank: Medicine Cat.
Personality/Skills:
Brightleaf is a quieter cat, that prefers to observe her surroundings thoroughly and keeps to herself. She isn't a social cat and stays on the sidelines when it comes to gatherings or other big meetings. Despite being occasionally looked down on, Brightleaf has a sense of pride. She often feels as if she is truly delivering out the gratitude she feels and repaying the clan and it's warriors for letting her do what she does best.
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Brightleaf is skilled in the art of healing, and had a lot of promise from a young age. Despite that, she also has a love for water and swimming in it, but doesn't get to do this very often and pushes it aside.
Important Notes: She has kittypet roots in some sort of way, which I need to figure out.

[Arcaii]

I should be able to quickly edit out a few bits of my form. And he's around the average at hunting, thus why -step is used instead of -whisker. c:

Description: A white she-cat with ginger patches, copper eyes and strangely folded ears.
Name: Brightleaf.
Gender: She-cat.
Clan: Fieldclan
Rank: Medicine Cat.
Personality/Skills:
Brightleaf is a quieter cat, that prefers to observe her surroundings thoroughly and keeps to herself. She isn't a social cat and stays on the sidelines when it comes to gatherings or other big meetings. Despite being occasionally looked down on, Brightleaf has a sense of pride. She often feels as if she is truly delivering out the gratitude she feels and repaying the clan and it's warriors for letting her do what she does best.
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Brightleaf is skilled in the art of healing, and had a lot of promise from a young age. Despite that, she also has a love for water and swimming in it, but doesn't get to do this very often and pushes it aside.
Important Notes: She has kittypet roots in some sort of way, which I need to figure out.

Just so you know, the medicine cat of FieldClan is open, but they have a rule about having one cat per Clan, at least for now. I would suggest switching Foxpaw to ForestClan if you want to keep Brightleaf as a medicine cat.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Brightleaf fits her just fine! I don't have much else to say on this name, so well done.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: I would try and keep out the kittypet stuff; the rules over at the RP are a fair sight stricter about things like that. She can be Clan born and it would still work.
If she does become Clanborn, then I don't know if the being looked down on part would be a necessity. In general, she sounds fine, but just in case they ask for more information, decide on some more thorough traits.

[Arcaii]

bump

[.kestral]

Would you be willing to give an allegiance list a quick look and just see if anything really bad sticks out?

[Arcaii]

Of course! Go ahead and send them in (a name - basic description will work just fine).