Where I stand (puffball 100 tryout story <3

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Where I stand (puffball 100 tryout story <3

Postby Chimericect » Fri Mar 14, 2014 4:08 pm

100 puffball story <3
It's about Gravity, the puffball, and how she develops over time ewe
It's all in her POV unless stated otherwise.
Characters:
Ravi (puff 100)

Finn (owned by me)
Kimmy (ob me)
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Postby Chimericect » Fri Mar 14, 2014 4:08 pm

:shock: I awoke that morning, my nightmare once again occurring. I sometimes wonder if it's true, so I walk around the abandon orphanage in hope that she would be back. I frown as I see nothing but my own shadow, not even a puffball. Suddenly, a knock at the door alarms me, who would even be here in a cold storm like this? I run to the door, opening it immediately to see a younger puffball, roughly 4 years old- a year younger than I. She was standing alone at the door, shivering. I noticed she was holding a balloon, but didn't seem to want to fly. Golden specks were scattered around her fur, until I realized that WAS her fur. I let her in as she collapsed, I made sure to catch her, bringing her to the dim fire. I frown and run to bring her a blanket, and couldn't help but wonder who she was, why she was here, and how she got here.

"So... You don't have a home?" I asked the younger puffball- Kimmy. She nodded sadly, looking outside. "I don't have a family, not anymore at least" she sighed. I shrugged. "I guess you could stay here, there is plenty of room and I'm alone to.." But instead of the response I expected, she shook her head. "I'm going into the city, you should come with me! I planned on going when the storm goes down, and I heard it was supposed to stop tomorrow. You could come with if you would like" she said with a smile. I frowned, but I knew I had to get out sometime. "Alright. We leave tomorrow.

The next morning...
I awoke with a start, kimmy already up and excited. I said nothing as we left, and I was surprised that she didn't notice me just hovering in the air. Finally, we made it to the bustling city, puffballs flying and walking everywhere. I widen my eyes, excited to see so many puffballs. Unfortunately, kimmy looks rather nervous. I shrug it off, she will probably get over it. Eventually, we travel all around the city, I talk to other puffs while kimmy cowers. Finally, I have no idea what happened, but I snapped. "Kimmy, you have to stop being afraid of others! Your a fraidy puff!" I said, not meaning it in a bad way, but in a rather different way... But she didn't take it as that, kimmy- my adopted sister- frowned and her ears flattened. She didn't say a word. "Kimmy..." I say, but she just sighed. I think she was being a bit overdramatic, but then again... She was 4. She took her balloon, starting to float up. I went up after her, but suddenly something flashed out of the corner of my eye. Then, more puffs crowded around me. Who were these guys and what did they want? Then one grinned and flew up to me, he had something that flashed. Then, he started talking. "Hello! I never seen you round before, you seem to have a special ability here, eh?" He said with a grin. "And that fur of yours, my my..." He continued, and I smiled. My eyes gleamed, I could tell. "You have perfect fur color to, you are just one gorgeous puff. Who are you?" He asked, and I glanced at kimmy, she was watching silently as usual. I looked back at the puff, who was waiting. "Gravity, call me Ravi" I said proudly.[ Suddenly, he asks me a few questions and offer me a place to stay, and I accept immediately, and I completely forgot about kimmy. That was the last I saw of her.
14 years later
"Gravity! Hurry up, we'll be starting soon!" My agent- yes, I have an agent- hissed. "Alright, I'm coming" I spat back, getting out of bed and brushing my fur. Kimmy was only a distant dream, or was it a nightmare? Who knows, who cares. Suddenly, I heard my phone buzz. I sighed, picking it up. I quickly read over the message, it was my agent saying we had a change of plans. My manager said I needed a break, but I didn't need one! I continued, frowning. They had already taken care of my bag and stuff, and already called and asked for me to stay somewhere. Oh, and if I didn't do this I was fired. Great. Puffball Village, here I come -.-
At the village
I groan at the sight of tiny houses, no cars, and not many puffballs. I glanced around, seeing the green grass blowing slightly northeast with the wind. The sun beat down on me, being quite cruel. I sigh and go to a house somewhat bigger than the others, it was actually two stories. It looked vaguely familiar. I I continue on, thinking about why that building seemed so familiar. Then, an orange puffball landed in front of me. "Hello miss!" He said with a smile. "You must be Ravi, another puff was looking for you." He said, his eyes gleaming, so full of spirit. Why? Why did he seem so happy to be in this place? "I'm not surprised, who wouldn't be looking for me?" I say with a smirk. He doesn't seem to be fazed. "She is about half a mile that way" he said, pointing to the west. "A ranch" he continued with a nod. "And if you need anything, I'm Finn" he finished, nodding and flying off. I rolled my eyes and flew off, finally coming across a ranch. No one seemed to be here, but they were probably just inside. I sighed and casually strolled in, not bothering to knock. Even if this wasn't the place, wouldn't they be excited that the great Ravi was in their home? I know I would be. I then put my small bag down and browsed around, but before I got far I heard someone walk in. They then gasped, and I rolled my eyes, not yet seeing who it was. "Yes, yes, I know it's unbelievable that the great Ravi is here..." I start, turning around. I widened my eyes and didn't have the strength to continue. I was staring into the eyes of my adopted sister. Kimmy.
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Postby Chimericect » Fri Mar 14, 2014 4:17 pm

I widened my eyes, backing up slightly. "W-what are you doing here?" I asked coldly, an unusual feeling building up inside of me. She didn't seem much different other than seeming as if she were famous... And she was. I didn't have a reason to want to see her, I thought she wanted to stay and help me. "Kimmy?" She asked, and I flattened my ears, but then sighed and went nearer to her. "Yeah?" I asked with a tilt of my head. "I-I'm sorry..." She started. I smiled. "Really? Because I--" then that moment ended. That you ended up in this little village, working so hard every day! Stuck in this miserable place!" She said, giving me a pitiful look. I flattened my ears and tried to calm down. "I wasn't told you would be staying here. I was told someone important would be here instead" I said, sighing. This was not me, this wasn't how I liked to act. Not one bit. She blinked in surprise, and then looked as if she were about to explode. "Listen here kimmy, do you think i want to be here? Huh? Well?! I wanted to stay in my clean apartment, listening to the outside chatter of puffballs! Instead, I was forced to come here and stay or I would get fired!" she hissed as I took a step back. "I--I--" I started, knowing that was also my end. Before I finished, she stormed off and I didn't see where she went. "Good riddance" I mumbled, but inside I needed her. I missed that only day we had together, and how she had helped me. Where was that sweet and caring puffball? Was she even in there? Surely she can't be all cruel, right? Yes. That sweet, caring puffball must be in there somewhere, and I would have to get it out. I knew she remembered me, she did indeed. And she saved my life, but... I would be fine. I knew it wouldn't be easy, but it could work, right? I hoped so, I need her.
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Postby Chimericect » Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:15 pm

I flipped my phone and called my agent, furious with what they had done. No answer. I repeatedly called in anger, hating just about everyone I've ever met. They weren't answering me on purpose, I knew that. I knew what they were doing, they wanted to drive me to insanity. Drive me to never want to leave. Ever. I remember when I was younger this was all I ever wanted. I don't remember what happened to me, nor if that same puff wants to cone back. I was still fuming, and decided to just find some place of peace. Suddenly, a voice sounded behind me. "Need a place to cool down?" The voice asked. The voice was Kimmy. I noticed that she still had that persistence from when she was younger, hidden by fear. I remembered that sparkle in those eyes, but they were no longer there. They were long gone, diminished from when I left her.
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