Lord Moose & Chicken wrote:Sketchy. wrote:
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I decided to make once another OC to add to my pile of ponies cx this is Oliver, he is a butler as his cm shows. I tried to be quite creative with his markings. Does anyone like his design? ;w;
(yeah and he's dressed for the spring soiree, sorry I was too lazy to make him a normal ref x3)
Ooh, I like his markings. They seem similar to my mare Rune Beauty's! C:
Lord Moose & Chicken wrote:Sketchy. wrote:
I decided to make once another OC to add to my pile of ponies cx this is Oliver, he is a butler as his cm shows. I tried to be quite creative with his markings. Does anyone like his design? ;w;
(yeah and he's dressed for the spring soiree, sorry I was too lazy to make him a normal ref x3)
Ooh, I like his markings. They seem similar to my mare Rune Beauty's! C:
Lord Moose & Chicken wrote:so i just made a new pony oc. Blueblooded Viper. She however prefers being called Blue or Viper.
Talent is unknown. And I'm not sure if I should add two colors in her mane or keep it a single color.
Choco wrote:"LOOK OUT!"
Choconator charged, eyes on the blue Pegasus. Archer was her name, but it wasn't really Archer. Archer had been a good friend of the old mare, and Archer had died four years ago during the war with the Zebras. The solider watched as the crossbow fired, the arrow starting its rapid journey through the air towards Princess Twilight. She coiled her legs and sprang, eyes wide as she kept her eyes on the weapon.
And time slowed down.
Choco turned herself around, belly facing the Changeling as she threw her forelegs wide. Her red eyes locked with "Archer's" violet eyes, watching as the furious orbs flashed lime green. A smirk crossed her features as there was a moment where they faced each other, an eternity passing by in a mere second.
Then the arrow plunged into her belly.
The mare's eyes flew wide as she watched her own blood spray into the air. Her body jerked, tensed muscles loosening as she felt the arrow stop, almost half of it buried inside of her. She looked at the crowd, their eyes wide with terror as they watched her. Mouths were open, but she couldn't hear the screaming. Her vision was grey, she could see no color. A cough tore itself from her, blood spilling from her mouth and onto her chin. She felt herself spin with the impact, her vision started to go dark.
Her life flashed before her eyes.
A foal standing over her father's body, screaming in terror as a figure of nightmares approached her.
A young filly eating too much chocolate in a fit of depression, her cutie mark appearing on her flank. Raking a knife through her long mane, singing softly to herself as pale brown locks hit the floor.
A teenager, holding her head high and marching into school. Staring lovingly at a lanky Pegasus colt. Kissing him at a dance. A Unicorn, a Doe, a Moose-Pony and a Deer-Pony. Her best friends.
An adult, wearing a suit to her own wedding. Holding a small colt in her arms. Looking at the golden armor. Fighting for her country. Reuniting with her brother. Watching his wedding and holding his small filly for the first time.
An old mare. Scars littering her body. Fiery red eyes staring back at her, a challenging smile on her face.
Her son's wedding. Watching him embrace his husband with tears in her eyes. Helping him with who to adopt as his own.
Training her colts. Turning them into the best soldiers they could be.
Her husband's warm eyes.
Her friends hugging her.
Her family.
A sad sort of smile crossed her face as she felt towards the ground. Her eyes started to blank as cold crept up her body, her heartbeat failing. Everything had gone quiet, she could hear no more. Her vision was fading around the edges. Her smile remained as she closed her eyes, waiting for the impact.
I did my duty for the Princess and countr-
To the all watching, she hit the stage. To her, she hit a void of empty nothingness.
The impact knocked the helmet off of her head, and she slid across the stage in a bloody, crumpled heap. And even as Twilight ran over, she knew;
Choconator was dead before she hit the ground.
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