Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby FireCalls » Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:09 pm

You're writing is fine! I mean Semi-lit as in using decent Grammar, and punctuation - which you do! I'm just worried some people will join and they can't even type coherent sentences!
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby mentalbilly20142024 » Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:19 pm

Can I type one full sentence with good grammar and punctuation?
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I am most likely not on Thursdays because of my dad please don't kick me from roleplays.. Anyways I play AJ and so on lol be happy tho
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby FireCalls » Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:22 pm

You can; you just did! All I ask is that people use grammar and punctuation so that their sentences aren't random words in an endless string... And of course I like longer posts; but again, I'm only asking for two lines. (This post would be two lines) :thumbup:
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby mentalbilly20142024 » Tue Mar 11, 2014 2:33 pm

So can I make at least one sentence? Or does it have to be two lines or I am kicked out? Or does it have to be more than two lines?
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I am most likely not on Thursdays because of my dad please don't kick me from roleplays.. Anyways I play AJ and so on lol be happy tho
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby FireCalls » Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:19 pm

Just try for two lines; I won't kick you out if that's your only struggle. :) I know the rule sounds harsh, but to be honest I don't like kicking people out; i'm pretty lenient. . .
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby mentalbilly20142024 » Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:21 pm

Oh OK. Ahh! I can't do two linessss! (I just tried)
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I am most likely not on Thursdays because of my dad please don't kick me from roleplays.. Anyways I play AJ and so on lol be happy tho
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby FireCalls » Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:28 pm

LOL; listen, as long as you're contributing to the RP plot, you're fine. I just don't want the kind of stuff that has only one statement, or one action in it. As long as you're adding something about yourself, or some action about yourself, it's fine. :) You'll do great!
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby mentalbilly20142024 » Wed Mar 12, 2014 7:56 am

so: "she walked around" = NO right? "she walked round camp looking for something to do" = be yes right?
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby FireCalls » Wed Mar 12, 2014 8:37 am

No to the first, definitely! And the second is fine, as long as every post you make isn't that short. I understand that sometimes there just isn't much to say. So, yes, you're fine. . :)
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Re: Recreation: Thunderclan -DISCUSSION

Postby mentalbilly20142024 » Wed Mar 12, 2014 11:18 am

kay and im very bored and smiles posted on stormclan :3
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