FADE TO BLACK NOW.
Also, TS to morning? That way Thunderstar and HAwktail's little romance is good and done, and everyone else can wake for dawn patrol? I'm going to go ahead and do that, if you want me to change it I will

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Foxfur:
When I feel dawn's first light on my face, I open my eyes and release a satisfied yawn. Stretching, I turn and prod first Russetclaw then Shadepelt in the sides, "Come on you two, dawn patrol, grab a bite then we'll head out." I meow cheerfully, strangely happy and awake. I notice, as I exit the den, that Hawktail is absent. But I scent him nearby. I wonder briefly what's up, but dismiss it, grabbing a mouse and settling down to eat.
Hawktail:
I wake, filled with a joy I've never known. Lifting my head, I gaze down at Thunderstars beautiful face, looking peaceful and content in sleep. I think about waking her, but decide not to. She needs her rest. Carefully, I stand up, and tiptoe out. I see Foxfur in the clearing, eating, and theres no way to hide, so I just don't make eye contact as I work my way quietly into the warriors den. Talk will start, but I don't care. I'm just so happy.