Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

I apologize for the wording. x3 I've also taken into account the other two's reviews! c:

description;; A white cat with various grey patches and green eyes.
name;; Knotpaw [Knotwhisker]
gender;; She-cat
clan;; Thunderclan, most likely.
rank;; Apprentice
skills;; Hunting.
personality;; Quite and intelligent and curious cat. She tends to be observant and quite well liked, always thinking before she jumps. While her body is lean, she isn't much of a runner, and prefers the low energy stalking before pushing the energy into pouncing. Knotpaw is quite good when it comes to helping others, and sticks by her friends.
other;; Again, part of the trio. I believe the picture is that of a bobtail, but Knotpaw doesn't have one.

The wording's just fine, haha. Final sibling, let's do this!

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: This name is wonderful (and sounds pretty cool; did I ever tell you how partial I am to Knot- for that reason?). I've got nothing to complain about!
Alternative Name: None.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: I really like her! She's got a unique branching from her siblings (none of them are completely similar, I love that so much), and it all works together to form a very good personality. Well done to you!

[capricorn.]

Name: Foxflight
Description: She has orange fur and a white tail tip, and green eyes
Important Notes: N/A

[Arcaii]

Name: Foxflight
Description: She has orange fur and a white tail tip, and green eyes
Important Notes: N/A

Rate: 7/10
Type: Canonical
Reasoning: Fox- fits her just fine. Her suffix is akin to -feather and -wing, in that it details something cats don't have (wings and feathers) or do (fly). If it was to mean that she's so fast, it looks like she's flying, we've got -foot. If it means she scales trees like a bird, that's -tail. But since it appears that she doesn't have those skills, then she's stuck with the default.
Alternative Name: Foxfur/Foxpelt.

[Arcaii]

bumpity

[noisecollective]

Thank you for the review! I understand that I should probably change her picture...

Image/Description:
Name: Fawncloud
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Fawncloud is a skinny, small she-cat. She is kind to all cats, though it is hard for her. Her mother told her before she died to treat others how you would like to be treated, though no one treats her with respect, no matter how hard she tries. She is fast on foot, but she will often trip or fall.
Important Notes: As a kit she was teased and picked on, and the only one there for her was her mother. As she grew, she tried her hardest to be kind and gain friends, but she was ignored. She feels like an outsider, though the one thing she loves to do is care for the kit's in the nursery. She would like to have kit's of her own.

[skelemental]

Name: I was thinking the suffix would be fur, but as I said below I don't have any definite ideas.

Description: This little feline has very long legs and is quite friendly.

Important Notes: { I am not really sure and haven't chosen an exact name yet and I was wondering if you had any ideas. My brain seems to have been wiped clean. e-e

[Arcaii]

Thank you for the review! I understand that I should probably change her picture...

Image/Description:
Name: Fawncloud
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Fawncloud is a skinny, small she-cat. She is kind to all cats, though it is hard for her. Her mother told her before she died to treat others how you would like to be treated, though no one treats her with respect, no matter how hard she tries. She is fast on foot, but she will often trip or fall.
Important Notes: As a kit she was teased and picked on, and the only one there for her was her mother. As she grew, she tried her hardest to be kind and gain friends, but she was ignored. She feels like an outsider, though the one thing she loves to do is care for the kit's in the nursery. She would like to have kit's of her own.

Name Rating: 6/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: She's a light ginger instead of a brown, which is what Fawn- is for (if you're looking for a different picture, I have some suggestions). On top of that, she's a fast cat, and skill goes above personality.
Alternative Name: Daisyfoot/Rosefoot. Both prefixes indicate a light ginger cat, and -foot is for her speed. If you turn her into a light brown, then make it Fawnfoot.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: Here's my question - why is everyone treating her so cruelly throughout her entire life? Is there a single reason to? She's not weak and helpless, nor is she an ex-kittypet. She doesn't act meanly to anyone; in fact, she sounds like she would be a good mother, and she takes care of the kits, so they would like her and that would certainly earn her a place of respect. And there's no way that a group of 20-30 cats would all disrespect her. The leader would not allow it, and I'm sure that she'd have the queens' backing, since she does so well with their children and is a kind person in general. Even as a kit, adults would not stand for that; besides, most kittens are small and scrawny at that age, so there's no reason there either. There's probably someone a lot more obnoxious and rude in the Clan than her. In fact, she has the sort of personality that would draw a lot of cats to her.
Also, someone who's generally fast would have steady feet. It kinda comes with the package. Fast cats need to be sure of their steps, and thus would be the sort to rarely fall or trip up.

[Arcaii]

Name: I was thinking the suffix would be fur, but as I said below I don't have any definite ideas.

Description: This little feline has very long legs and is quite friendly.

Important Notes: { I am not really sure and haven't chosen an exact name yet and I was wondering if you had any ideas. My brain seems to have been wiped clean. e-e

I really do love this picture.

Name Suggestion: Dipperfur/Minkpelt (suffixes interchangeable)
Reasoning: Dipper- and Mink- cover a dark brown cat, and I think -fur or -pelt is just fine for them. If you get more ideas for this cat, come back at a later time so I can see, or if you have any other troubles come on in and ask.

[noisecollective]

Thank you for the suggestions! New and improved;

Image/Description:
Name: Fawnfoot
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Fawnfoot is kind to all cats. As a kit, she was picked on by some of the older kit's for being weak and scrawny. She would run away from the camp and chase rabbits to be by herself, which made her very fast. She is now loved by her clanmates, and she wishes to be a queen one day. The older warriors that used to pick on her as kit's still hold a grudge, but respect her nonetheless. She cares for kit's very much.
Important Notes: Wishes very much to be a queen one day.

[Arcaii]

Thank you for the suggestions! New and improved;

Image/Description:
Name: Fawnfoot
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Fawnfoot is kind to all cats. As a kit, she was picked on by some of the older kit's for being weak and scrawny. She would run away from the camp and chase rabbits to be by herself, which made her very fast. She is now loved by her clanmates, and she wishes to be a queen one day. The older warriors that used to pick on her as kit's still hold a grudge, but respect her nonetheless. She cares for kit's very much.
Important Notes: Wishes very much to be a queen one day.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: I really do want to thank you for taking my advice and coming back to show me. This is a pleasant surprise. Anyway, her name fits her perfectly, and I'm glad you used that image - it's a very pretty cat.
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: She's shaped up to be a much better character (if I may toot my own horn), and her personality doesn't clash at all with anything else. Well done to you!