Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

No problem! There's plenty of animals who have that weird appearing-to-be-black-but-has-red-or-brown-in-their-fur thing going on (horses and cats are the examples that come to mind). Let me know if you need any more assistance!

[Arcaii]

Bumpity

[Arcaii]

bap boop

[Roadhog]

Image/Description: silver, with blue eye, and no she is not white, so she is not deaf.
Name: silverstar
Gender: female
Clan: diamond clan
Rank: leader
Personality/Skills: she is silly, nice, friendly, sneaking, kind, and cannot follow directions well.
Important Notes: she is a good combat fighter, and has a bit of emotional problems.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: silver, with blue eye, and no she is not white, so she is not deaf.
Name: silverstar
Gender: female
Clan: diamond clan
Rank: leader
Personality/Skills: she is silly, nice, friendly, sneaking, kind, and cannot follow directions well.
Important Notes: she is a good combat fighter, and has a bit of emotional problems.

Don't worry, blue eyes only constitute deafness when they're on a completely white cat. It's a bit of a recessive gene thing (which means blue eyes are less likely to appear than yellow or green eyes).

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: She is grey (silver is just a prettier way of saying it), and she is a leader. I bumped you down one point because I have seen Silver- so many times it's not even funny anymore. I mean, really, there are other names to describe a grey cat, but everyone likes Silver-, and it's starting to be a real drag. Her name is acceptable but I will suggest you one or two other prefixes.
Alternative Name: Thistlestar/Breamstar. Both indicate a grey cat (Bream- being more "silvery").

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: It's not so much her personality (a cat like her is completely fine), but what is a cat that's, frankly, so ditzy doing in a leadership position? How is she suppose to give directions when she can't even follow them? A leader ought to be mature and serious enough to be obeyed without question. She sounds more like an apprentice than a leader.
I would tone down her silliness and lack of comprehension (which is a bit of a requirement when it comes to directions), or just remove them completely. Maybe make her charming, and can easily make a group laugh with a joke or story, but with a sharp mind and a fan of having her enemies under-estimate her. I imagine it would be quite the shock to a rival Clan when the casual and friendly leader of DiamondClan suddenly uses her fighting intellect to arrange a sneak-attack that leaves their herb supply destroyed and some of their greatest warriors incapacitated.

[ravennn]

(Sorry the pictures so big)
Name: Shiverpaw (Shivertail)
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: Snowclan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: Shiverpaw is a sneaky, swift she-cat who is very good in swimming and keeping her balance.
Important Notes: None

[Arcaii]

(Sorry the pictures so big)
Name: Shiverpaw (Shivertail)
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: Snowclan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: Shiverpaw is a sneaky, swift she-cat who is very good in swimming and keeping her balance.
Important Notes: None

It's fine, I don't think it's too huge.

Name Rating: 3/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: There's a few things wrong with this name. For one, cats can't look like a shiver, because a shiver is an action, rather than a thing. For two, even if she was to be name for the way she shivered when she was born, that doesn't really mean much - she's in a Clan with Snow- in the title, it's presumably very cold and she was just dumped into a very cold place considering where she was before. For three, she's good at keeping her balance, swimming, and sneaking - about the opposite of what "Shiver-" would bring to mind.
I will also suggest a suffix for you, since that is what we do here.
Alternative Name: Knotstream/Mottlestream. Knot- is more specifically for a grey-and-white patched cat, where Mottle- is just generally for a patched cat.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: Her skills are just fine, but there's not much of a personality here. I'd figure out what kind of a cat she is. Maybe she's casual and uses rude words like they're going out of style without even realizing it, maybe she's studious and serious and squawks at anyone caught breaking even the slightest rule. Perhaps she likes to spend her time striking up conversations with animals she can't even speak to, such as spiders or mice, and is so in tune with her environment she can guess what kind of animals and plants will be living in this or that area. Maybe she likes to sneak off a lot, or maybe she desires to be a kittypet.

[.kestral]

Here is one, not sure what your going to think. She's an odd one.

Image/Description:
Golden spotted tabby she cat. Has white front and back paws and a small patch of white on her chest. She is tall, with a lean build and long legs. She has yellow eyes.
Name:
Leopardstar - Leopardfoot
Gender:
She cat
Clan:
Stoneclan
Rank:
Leader
Personality/Skills:
She is a very swift she cat, her tall, lean build allows her to race, low to the ground. She is a good hunter and fighter, but her speed is what makes her stand out. She can appear quite intimidating and mean, she is also rather cold, but her clan knows every decision she makes is something she feels is best for them. They would follow her into everything. She has a way with words that makes everything she says seem like truth, seem honest. Cats follow her as she gives them hope and they would do anything to gain the territory.
Important Notes:
She has been driven to desperation by The dark forest, she believes they are Starclan and they will lead her clan to greatness, but they are leading her into more and more darkness, blocking Starclan from talking to her and pushing her further into evil. She kidnaps a young she cat (Rainpaw) hoping the she cat will become her tool, her heir and the saviour of her clan due to a false prophecy. There are two clans, and the best part of the territory is the city which they fight for.

[Pokechu12]

Hey, no character review right now, but I was looking for a name suggestion. I have a trio of siblings, who are grey and white patched, but I've used the prefixes Knot- and Heron-. Any suggestions? Hopefully it's ok to ask for advice like this. :3

[Arcaii]

Hey, no character review right now, but I was looking for a name suggestion. I have a trio of siblings, who are grey and white patched, but I've used the prefixes Knot- and Heron-. Any suggestions? Hopefully it's ok to ask for advice like this. :3

Oh, this sort of question's completely fine!

Cuckoo- could be good if they're more blue-grey, as well as Tern-, Shrike-, and Lichen- (a little light or dappled tabby, but I think it could work). And of course there's always Patch- and Mottle- as general patch prefixes. If none of those sound appealing, You could go for majority color - if one's much more white than grey, then they could go for a white-implying prefix, and if they're more grey, then a grey prefix.