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carrie911 wrote:hmmmmm, I finally came up with an idea for a pony story ;3;
it'll involve Vivid Visions
Like, other ponies view her as a 'monster', since her hallucinations can affect others in a negative way, and when her hallucinations affect her, she becomes unpredictable and scary. To begin with her appearance is odd, her brightly colored mane and tail, her strange eyes, and her occasional 'split' when her hallucinations start. No wonder why other ponies fear her. So for all of her life, she casted herself away to protect others from the 'monster'. She hates her talent, and can only see it as a tool that'll hurt others, which is why she keeps such a tight control over it.
Though, what if there is another pony out there, one that looks completely normal and appears good on the outside. But everything on the inside is the complete opposite. They have a similar talent to Vivid Visions, but one that creates nightmares while your awake. This pony gets to know you, becomes friends with you, learns about your history and fears, then uses them against you for fun. You have a fear of losing others? This pony will make you experience losing them again and again, different ways, different scenes, and each one of them you are too late to save them. Fear of the dark? This pony will make it seem you'll never see light again.
This is when Vivid Visions comes in, since her talent can affect others in a positive way. So in the end, Vivid will save the day, and realize her talent is not so bad after all.
so yeah, something like that, I thought I would jot it down quickly before I forget it all xD
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hiperyon wrote:Heyo everyone!
I've been thinking about it, and I finally decided to start a project that's way out of my league.
I'm going to make a short video game featuring Lavvi!
(if that's alright with you, genic)
At the moment, I'm at the public library sketching out ideas while I wait for my dad, and I'm pretty sure it's going to be about the Lavvi/Jack Ketch storyline I've had half-written since I wrote up my form to win her. If it doesn't completely flop, I might try to make more interesting storylines eventually ehhehe.
This is going to be long and hard for me (Especially because I have a bad habit of not following through with things that I intend to break), but I'll do my best.
Does this sound stupid? Wanna help?
I'm planning on making it pixeled, so that'll make it easier. I'll also be mixing the music myself (I already have Ketch's theme drafted), so that's taken care of... but if anybody would want to help with sprites/storyboarding/backgrounds/cOdINg, I'd be forever in your debt.
hiperyon wrote:Ooh, I would love to read that, Carrie.
((Also, gonna post this on both threads!))hiperyon wrote:Heyo everyone!
I've been thinking about it, and I finally decided to start a project that's way out of my league.
I'm going to make a short video game featuring Lavvi!
(if that's alright with you, genic)
At the moment, I'm at the public library sketching out ideas while I wait for my dad, and I'm pretty sure it's going to be about the Lavvi/Jack Ketch storyline I've had half-written since I wrote up my form to win her. If it doesn't completely flop, I might try to make more interesting storylines eventually ehhehe.
This is going to be long and hard for me (Especially because I have a bad habit of not following through with things that I intend to break), but I'll do my best.
Does this sound stupid? Wanna help?
I'm planning on making it pixeled, so that'll make it easier. I'll also be mixing the music myself (I already have Ketch's theme drafted), so that's taken care of... but if anybody would want to help with sprites/storyboarding/backgrounds/cOdINg, I'd be forever in your debt.
Cosmic~Wallaby wrote:hiperyon wrote:Ooh, I would love to read that, Carrie.
((Also, gonna post this on both threads!))hiperyon wrote:Heyo everyone!
I've been thinking about it, and I finally decided to start a project that's way out of my league.
I'm going to make a short video game featuring Lavvi!
(if that's alright with you, genic)
At the moment, I'm at the public library sketching out ideas while I wait for my dad, and I'm pretty sure it's going to be about the Lavvi/Jack Ketch storyline I've had half-written since I wrote up my form to win her. If it doesn't completely flop, I might try to make more interesting storylines eventually ehhehe.
This is going to be long and hard for me (Especially because I have a bad habit of not following through with things that I intend to break), but I'll do my best.
Does this sound stupid? Wanna help?
I'm planning on making it pixeled, so that'll make it easier. I'll also be mixing the music myself (I already have Ketch's theme drafted), so that's taken care of... but if anybody would want to help with sprites/storyboarding/backgrounds/cOdINg, I'd be forever in your debt.
If it's pixel I might be able to help with sprites ^^
Mountain Snow stood on the doorstep of a tall cabin. Behind him stood Sheer Slopes and Frosted Hills, either side like jailers "This is ridiculous" Snow grumbled.
"You passed out on the mountainside. Just…accept your sick" Frosted Hill argued.
"I have draft horse in me. I don't get ill" Snow huffed, trying to ignore the throbbing head and acing limbs that argued otherwise. Before either pony had a chance to respond the door opened to a massively tall figure.
Stooping slightly, the reindeer leant out the door, blinking sleeping "You are aware it's six in the morning?" Pillow Drift asked in a surprisingly light voice for her size.
"City boy went hooves up trying to snow slide the side slope" Frosted Hill drawled. Drift blinked slowly "Snow fainted when we snowboarding" Sheer Slopes confirmed. Drift nodded, clarity dawning
"Come in"
"Feather Flu" came the verdict, a few minutes later "It is very bad. A pony your size should not be suffering so very much" Drift explained to Snow, who sat sullenly after being poked and prodded at "When did you last sleep, Snow?" she asked softly.
"A while" came the short reply.
"When did you last eat something? Real food?"
There was a short silence "A while longer than a while" Snow muttered, staring down. It was clear. His eyes were dull and his coat was flat and brittle. Drift sighed, tossing her head lightly to push the long braid over her shoulder "You must care for yourself Snow, when living alone"
"I cope fine" Snow argued. She sighed. They all knew Snow did not cope very well at all, alone upon the mountainside. He needed others. Yet he still insisted on shutting himself away.
"You need somebody to look after you for the next week at least" she told him "Call your family"
"No longer around" Snow's reply came bluntly, offering no alternative. He simply wanted to go home.
"Friend?"
"None who would care to take care"
Drift sighed, frustrated. This was unlike the normally amiable pony. She had never seen him ill before. Clearly it put him in an unpleasant mood. One last try "Significant other?" she asked hopefully. Snow laughed without smiling "Significantly absent. May I go?"
Pillow Drift smiled at the Pegasus, knowing he was about to be very angry "You may leave once your healthy. Bedroom in second on the right. Go lay down" she instructed, bracing herself for the rant.
To her surprise, by the time she looked back to him, he was already heading down the hall.
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