MillClan - Semi-Lit RP: OPEN

[Arcaii]

I have two problems with these cats (otherwise they're fine!): Ravenkit needs to have a stated personality, even if it's as brief as Dawnpelt's. Second, Dawn- is just a little too light colored for this cat. If you want to find a lighter colored ginger cat, that would be perfect!

[meowingtons]

(( Sorry, it was the first picture I found. Edited my form :3 ))

[Arcaii]

(Much better, thank you very much! Accepted, and I'll add them up in a bit.)

[Kiraeagle]

Description: Moonsight is a beautiful white cat with peculiar black eyes.
Name: Dappleleaf
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Warrior
Personality: Dappleleaf is fiesty and inquisitive. When alone, she enjoys playing with leaves and behaving like a kit. She feels like she is trapped in trying to be loyal and doing so many duties to her clan. She is loyal to her few friends and is never one to hesitate to fight.
Skills/Weaknesses: Dappleleaf doesn't belive in herself and thinks she is never doing enough compared to others. She is good and climbing and fighting- partully in the dark.
Notable History: None as of yet!
Important Notes: Not currently!

{Changed! Sorry about the first one- I hope this is okay }}

[Arcaii]

(I'll respond now, since you appear to have some stuff to look after.
I'm afraid I can't accept this cat. For one, her name is not traditional in the slightest. For two, she has the strange eyes thing, which is not realistic and thus unaccepted, and for three, her backstory is a little off. I would just try with another cat, if I were you.)

[Arcaii]

(The mentor-apprentices have been set in! We'll begin shortly.)

[~Moony~]

Description: oak brown pelt with four black paws and light amber eyes (couldn't think of anything brown XD ))
Name: Eagleclaw
Gender: tom
Rank:warrior
Personality:Strong, aggressive, ambitious, Hot-headed and a spitfire. He will jump into battle without question. Prefers claws over words. Very comical however, and immature at times, but will die for his clan. Enjoys fierce battle training
Skills/Weaknesses: skilled fighter and good at ambushing, long sharp claws. But is a noisy hunter, has some stamina and speed
Notable History: His father died when he was a young warrior, he asked him to try to be the best that he could be, for his sake. This and his mother's betrayal, have helped him become the warrior he is today.
Important Notes: none that i can think of at the moment

[Arcaii]

(If you could find a picture for me, I would greatly appreciate it! Otherwise, I think he should be pretty good to go.

We may also begin RPing whenever!)

[~Moony~]

(( ok for some reason the picture wont come up but if u plug this into a new tab it should come up )) file:///C:/Users/JimJenny/Pictures/created%20cats/Eagleclaw%20with%20powers.png

[Arcaii]

(It's on your computer and not on the internet, is why! Go on the website tinypic and upload it, if you can.)