Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[.kestral]

Quick question for Kestrel - are the pictures switched? Because I really think they are.

Yweah, sorry

[Keriae]

Thank you Arcaii ^.^ for Buzzardfoot's open mindness, I was thinking more along the lines of she's very open to ideas, other's opinions etc when calm, but with her stubbornness, she's likely to stick to her guns in an argument xD
Buzzards are also one of my favourite species of birds and I've been waiting for ages to find a cat that I could use the prefix for!
For Lionstorm/claw (although I do roleplay him as Lionstorm), he is a very good fighter, so I'm glad you picked that up xD

[Arcaii]

Keriae: Ah, excellent. Then, yes, she should be just fine.

Kestrel: I'll review those two in a while; right now I've got to go to an appointment. Awful sorry; I'll get it done as soon as I get home.

[king boo]

thanks! here is another beloved warrior medicine cat of mine ^u
name; fireleaf
fire- after his ginger pelt
-leaf after his green eyes/herb skills
gender; tom
clan; thunderclan or in joining rps any clan similar to thunderclan
rank; medicine cat
Description; see below
a very large tom with long thick fur, a dark red classic tabby in colour. he has pale, leaf green eyes and despite his role as a medicine cat is a large as any warrior although his morals stopped him from becoming a warrior. picture i use in roleplays
personality;
patient - calm - humble - wise - thoughtful - passive - understanding - pacifistic
skills;
healing - intelligent - climbing [i believe all cats are taught to climb in thunderclan!]
greatest weakness;
combat
important notes;
again, thanks! i love fireleaf loads as he is by far my favorite of my medicine cats

[~Dragon Queen~]

Image/Description: Long haired white she-cat with blue eyes. Bad hearing
Name: Spidersilk
Gender: she-cat
Clan: ForestClan (A made-up clan of mine. It's like ThunderClan.)
Rank: medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Because of her bad hearing, her eyesight and sense of smell are better, so she's good at finding herbs. Reclusive, quite grouchy, patient, but isn't fond of kits.
Important Notes: Bad hearing. She tends to stay in her den, only coming out after a battle or to talk with her leader. (Of course she comes out to eat and whatnot.)

[Arcaii]

These two are sisters.

Image/Description:

Name:
Rainstorm
Gender:
She cat
Clan:
Originally Fireclan, currently Iceclan
Rank:
Warrior
Personality/Skills:
Angry, volatile, almost explosive in a way. You give her the order to attack and she does so, with no sense of how her victim may feel. She was trained to be like this, pushed in every way possible to become the darkest thing a cat can be. She only speaks when spoken to directly, only stays around other cats when ordered. She is also an extremely powerful fighter, she wasn't trained to hunt, they found it unnecessary for a weapon, a tool to hunt, she has prey bought to her.
Important Notes:
She was kit-napped at 7 moons and was twisted into what she is now.

Image/Description:

Name:
Adderfang
Gender:
She cat
Clan:
Fireclan
Rank:
Warrior
Personality/Skills:
An average warrior, unlike her sister she doesn't excel and is equally good at fighting and hunting. She enjoys hunting more than fighting. Around the camp she is nice, polite, always willing to feed another cat first. She can have a little bit of a sharp tongue but usually uses it for humor rather than to insult.
Important Notes:

FOR EVERYONE ELSE: THESE PICTURES WERE SWITCHED.
Sorry for the wait! Let's get this started.

Rainstorm
Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Rainstorm has a very nice ring to it, I will give you that. However, she's an extremely skilled fighter, you said - and for me, there's a hierarchy to names. In order from highest to lowest priority:
Skill, Personality, Appearance
Her skill should go above her temper, I'd think. Her prefix fits her just fine, if a little off for a marble tabby (usually for a spotted one; I've gotten the two mixed up before in this thread)
Alternative Name: Rainclaw.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: I really think that she shouldn't be built up to be a killer. No Clan, even a quote-unquote "evil" one would train their cats exclusively to murder others. For one, that's against the code. For two, hunting is just as, if not more essential to Clan life; fighters are great for protecting borders, but you need something that can produce food. For three, even if she was just naturally sociopathic, that's not a healthy trait for a Clan cat!
Being a Clan cat is having a code. Having morals, and self-control. That's one of the most stressed things in the books. Someone who doesn't care who they hurt or how they do it, or is more than eager to kill enemies, is a cat that belongs with the rogues.
A Clan that had a leader vile enough to do such a thing to apprentices (remember Brokenstar, everyone) is not inherently evil, because it has rules that are followed if one wants entry to StarClan. Keep that in mind.


Adderfang
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: That name is absolutely perfect for her (my weakness is cats named Adder- in case you didn't know). I've got nothing to say on it.
Alternative Name: None.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: She's pretty good! My only issue is the sharp tongue bit, which should be a little more refined because it sounds like she has the capacity to say something mean. I think that she could be a bit of a snarker, in a gentle way, without really harming anyone.

[Arcaii]

thanks! here is another beloved warrior medicine cat of mine ^u
name; fireleaf
fire- after his ginger pelt
-leaf after his green eyes/herb skills
gender; tom
clan; thunderclan or in joining rps any clan similar to thunderclan
rank; medicine cat
Description; see below
a very large tom with long thick fur, a dark red classic tabby in colour. he has pale, leaf green eyes and despite his role as a medicine cat is a large as any warrior although his morals stopped him from becoming a warrior. picture i use in roleplays
personality;
patient - calm - humble - wise - thoughtful - passive - understanding - pacifistic
skills;
healing - intelligent - climbing [i believe all cats are taught to climb in thunderclan!]
greatest weakness;
combat
important notes;
again, thanks! i love fireleaf loads as he is by far my favorite of my medicine cats

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: My only question is if he's just pretty good at medicine or extremely good. Unlike -claw or -nose, -leaf is a little more rare, because a requirement is to be pretty good at your job, because it's essential. If you're skilled beyond average, to the point of coming up with new ways to cure someone, then that's -leaf worthy. If not, I'd just go with -cloud, since he is a gentle, relaxed sort of fellow.
Fire- fits him perfectly!
Alternative Name: Firecloud, if he's just pretty good at herbs instead of incredibly good.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: He's an excellent cat. The average joe build for a medicine cat is a docile type, but if written well it shouldn't be a problem!

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Long haired white she-cat with blue eyes. Bad hearing
Name: Spidersilk
Gender: she-cat
Clan: ForestClan (A made-up clan of mine. It's like ThunderClan.)
Rank: medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Because of her bad hearing, her eyesight and sense of smell are better, so she's good at finding herbs. Reclusive, quite grouchy, patient, but isn't fond of kits.
Important Notes: Bad hearing. She tends to stay in her den, only coming out after a battle or to talk with her leader. (Of course she comes out to eat and whatnot.)

Sorry for the wait, I got a little sick.

Name Rating: 2/10
Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: Spider- is a traditional prefix, but it's for a dark brown cat, not a white cat. I think that's all that needs to be said there.
Cats have no idea what silk is, really. They know about cobwebs, but why would you name a cat after that? It's a double word.
Alternative Name: Whitenose/Shellnose. Despite her being deaf, I think that if her eyesight and sense of smell cancel that out enough for it to matter.

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: Just go ahead and say that she's deaf. That's a lot more simple than really really bad hearing.
Other than that, she's both cranky but patient, so I'd figure out exactly where you want her to go. Maybe she could be a grouchy cat who doesn't like being snuck up on (which has become a game with the apprentices and kits: who can surprise her and get away without being caught), and makes up for her disability with a sour attitude.

[.kestral]

Personality/Skills:
Angry, volatile, almost explosive in a way. You give her the order to attack and she does so, with no sense of how her victim may feel. She was trained to be like this, pushed in every way possible to become the darkest thing a cat can be. She only speaks when spoken to directly, only stays around other cats when ordered. She is also an extremely powerful fighter, she wasn't trained to hunt, they found it unnecessary for a weapon, a tool to hunt, she has prey bought to her.

Rainstorm
Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Rainstorm has a very nice ring to it, I will give you that. However, she's an extremely skilled fighter, you said - and for me, there's a hierarchy to names. In order from highest to lowest priority:
Skill, Personality, Appearance
Her skill should go above her temper, I'd think. Her prefix fits her just fine, if a little off for a marble tabby (usually for a spotted one; I've gotten the two mixed up before in this thread)
Alternative Name: Rainclaw.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: I really think that she shouldn't be built up to be a killer. No Clan, even a quote-unquote "evil" one would train their cats exclusively to murder others. For one, that's against the code. For two, hunting is just as, if not more essential to Clan life; fighters are great for protecting borders, but you need something that can produce food. For three, even if she was just naturally sociopathic, that's not a healthy trait for a Clan cat!
Being a Clan cat is having a code. Having morals, and self-control. That's one of the most stressed things in the books. Someone who doesn't care who they hurt or how they do it, or is more than eager to kill enemies, is a cat that belongs with the rogues.
A Clan that had a leader vile enough to do such a thing to apprentices (remember Brokenstar, everyone) is not inherently evil, because it has rules that are followed if one wants entry to StarClan. Keep that in mind.

I think I should explain the idea behind her. Basically, the two clans have been at war for years, there isn't another territory to sustain both and they are growing. They know they either have to merge or destroy each other. None of the leaders are willing to back down, to make a choice. Leopardstar of Iceclan makes a drastic decision, doing what she feels is best for her clan. While a battle rages she steals Rainpaw, daughter of Blazestar. She originally plans to use her as a hostage to convince her clan to leave, but under the guidance of what she thinks is Starclan she is made to change, becoming darker, less trusting, more evil in a way. She begins to twist Rain into what she considers the ultimate warrior while the whole time following 'starclans' guidance. The Dark Forest blocked out Starclan from her mind and sent a cat she trusted to convince her. So thats why Rain ends up how she does.

As for the name, I will keep that in mind.

[Arcaii]

I see. Well, if it works in the story, then it works in the story! I didn't know the context, is all.