Re: Milky Way Kit #107

Postby Toriguel » Tue Feb 18, 2014 12:47 am

Finally, it's time to announce the winner!
There were really interesting forms, but there will only be one winner...

And it is... Alyci!


Alyci wrote:Username : Alyci
Name of the Kit : Shade
Origine of the name: The first animal I ever saw at the zoo (I was 3 I think) was a giraffe named Shade
Gender : Male

Personality
    Shade is a calm and collected MWK and likes to listen to the sounds of nature; either alone or with friends. Although he is often seen as gentle Shade is actually very strong for a MWK and helps others if they need any help with something heavy. Although Shade seems a bit odd to other kits sometimes because of the strange activities that he likes doing he still gets on with other kits perfectly fine. He is quick to make friends because o his uncanny ability to make any kit laugh and stop feeling nervous around a kit they have never met before.

Favorite animal : All Tropical fish

Short story - The first time this Kit met its favorite animal :
    "What are those bright things?" Shade asked with amazement. Saysha had taken her friend Shade to the beach because she was surprised that he didn't know what fish looked like while they were still alive. They had walked out a fair distance on an old, rickety jetty that would not support the weight of a human.

    "They're fish, tropical fish found mostly in warm water." Saysha said.

    "But they look nothing like the fish that the rest of the pack have caught before." he asked, confused because the only fish he had ever eaten, which was not very often, was always a grey colour. "Those ones reminds me of strawberries!" Shade said, pointing to a group of red fish that were surfacing.

    "Do you wanna get a closer look?" asked Saysha.

    "Of coarse, but how can we get down the-" he was cut of as Saysha pushed them both into the water.

    Spluttering, Shade got the water out of his mouth. He was about to tell Saysha off but then he looked in the water. All sorts of tropical fish were swimming in and around both the kits tails.

    "Wow, this is something." Shade remarked, silently thanking Saysha for pushing him in.

    After 30mins of swimming with the fish, they left the water via the beach. Shade decided that his favourite animal were now the bright and colourful fish that he had spent the afternoon with. (231 words)


I really liked your short story! I was totally able to imagine this kit swimming with tropical fishes :3
Congrats !
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Re: Milky Way Kit #107

Postby Detail. » Tue Feb 18, 2014 1:37 am

Gratz! Hope you give this kit a good home!

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Re: Milky Way Kit #107

Postby Nightstar^..^ » Sun Mar 02, 2014 1:22 am

Congratulations Alyci, lovely story >3>


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