Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[corrosive_limes]

Yes! I have a 20 cat! <3 She fits too <3 I see your point.

[Arcaii]

Goody! It's always nice to see someone bring a 20/20 cat upstage.

[horchata]

Image:

Description:
Short-furred light-grey tabby tom with green eyes.
Name:
Blizzardwhisker
Gender:
Male
Rank:
Warrior
Personality:
Blizzardwhisker is a rather gentle cat, despite having quite an aggressive and competitive mother. He'd rather be out hunting than fighting and has sense to think things through without rushing into battle.
Skills/Weaknesses:
He excels in hunting, and his long, powerful legs enable him to swim through water to catch fish. He can also scale trees with ease somewhat, but he isn't good at fighting.
Notable History:
Ever since Blizzardwhisker was born, she'd wanted him to be the best. When Blizzardwhisker asked the clan leader to name him Blizzardwhisker as opposed to Blizzardstorm, which is what his mother had wanted, she completely shut him out. She was angry her kit wasn't aggressive or strong, and before the two cats made up, she died in a vicious fight with a loner.
Important Notes:
Sorry for the large picture xD

Thought I'd check about my cat RP :3 I didn't fill out this form, I copied and pasted the form I posted for the RP which is pretty much the same, I can fill out the other if you prefer ^-^

[Arcaii]

Image:

Description:
Short-furred light-grey tabby tom with green eyes.
Name:
Blizzardwhisker
Gender:
Male
Rank:
Warrior
Personality:
Blizzardwhisker is a rather gentle cat, despite having quite an aggressive and competitive mother. He'd rather be out hunting than fighting and has sense to think things through without rushing into battle.
Skills/Weaknesses:
He excels in hunting, and his long, powerful legs enable him to swim through water to catch fish. He can also scale trees with ease somewhat, but he isn't good at fighting.
Notable History:
Ever since Blizzardwhisker was born, she'd wanted him to be the best. When Blizzardwhisker asked the clan leader to name him Blizzardwhisker as opposed to Blizzardstorm, which is what his mother had wanted, she completely shut him out. She was angry her kit wasn't aggressive or strong, and before the two cats made up, she died in a vicious fight with a loner.
Important Notes:
Sorry for the large picture xD

Thought I'd check about my cat RP :3 I didn't fill out this form, I copied and pasted the form I posted for the RP which is pretty much the same, I can fill out the other if you prefer ^-^

Oh, it's fine! I can review him just as well.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: When I first saw him I was going to tell you that Blizzard- was for white cats only, but when I took a look it was for grey cats (albeit lighter grey cats). So the only thing that would be wrong is that he's a little dark for a Blizzard- but I'm willing to be pretty lenient with that! His suffix is great for him as well.
Alternative Name: Birchwhisker/Ashwhisker, but since he's already accepted it's completely up to you.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: He's pretty great! I think that his mother would have ended up disappointed either way, since she doesn't have any say in what the leader names a cat, even if she was a deputy or medicine cat. Other than that, everything's rad!

[Arcaii]

Bumpity bump.

[Emmancipation]

Image/Description:
A tortoiseshell (sterile.)

Name:
Spottedstar

Gender:
Tom

Clan:
Shadedclan

Rank:
Leader

Personality/Skills:
Sly and slippery in terms of wit. He is particularly good at close-battle contact. Spottedstar will use mind games to get his way.

Important Notes:
As a young tom, Spottedstar fell for a fellow warrior. Unfortunately it was unrequited love and she fell for another tom. Bitter from the rejection and belief that she had lead him on, he rejected relationships with any other cat and successfully became leader. His jealousy never left him and ended up hurting the cat he loved. She left the clan with one of her kits and left the other two with her mate. Never forgetting his mistakes, he punished her kits and trained them to be almost as bitter as he, that their mother left them. He had successfully tore a family apart. He later lead a deadly force into the forest and nearly destroyed the clans as they knew them. He died a loner; He was finally found out and exiled, replaced by the daughter of the cat he had loved.

[horchata]

Image:

Description:
Short-furred light-grey tabby tom with green eyes.
Name:
Blizzardwhisker
Gender:
Male
Rank:
Warrior
Personality:
Blizzardwhisker is a rather gentle cat, despite having quite an aggressive and competitive mother. He'd rather be out hunting than fighting and has sense to think things through without rushing into battle.
Skills/Weaknesses:
He excels in hunting, and his long, powerful legs enable him to swim through water to catch fish. He can also scale trees with ease somewhat, but he isn't good at fighting.
Notable History:
Ever since Blizzardwhisker was born, she'd wanted him to be the best. When Blizzardwhisker asked the clan leader to name him Blizzardwhisker as opposed to Blizzardstorm, which is what his mother had wanted, she completely shut him out. She was angry her kit wasn't aggressive or strong, and before the two cats made up, she died in a vicious fight with a loner.
Important Notes:
Sorry for the large picture xD

Thought I'd check about my cat RP :3 I didn't fill out this form, I copied and pasted the form I posted for the RP which is pretty much the same, I can fill out the other if you prefer ^-^

Oh, it's fine! I can review him just as well.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: When I first saw him I was going to tell you that Blizzard- was for white cats only, but when I took a look it was for grey cats (albeit lighter grey cats). So the only thing that would be wrong is that he's a little dark for a Blizzard- but I'm willing to be pretty lenient with that! His suffix is great for him as well.
Alternative Name: Birchwhisker/Ashwhisker, but since he's already accepted it's completely up to you.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: He's pretty great! I think that his mother would have ended up disappointed either way, since she doesn't have any say in what the leader names a cat, even if she was a deputy or medicine cat. Other than that, everything's rad!

Thanks c: And yeah, I took a look at that warrior rating thing beforehand to make sure Blizzard was appropriate for a grey cat :3

[inkyst]

Name: Featherstorm
Description: Silver tabby with blue eyes. lighter colored ear tips
Important Notes: Medicine cat, 8 seasons old

Image/Description:
Name: Featherstorm
Gender: Female
Clan: RiverClan
Rank: Medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Kind, Caring, Soft, Graceful, good with herbs
Important Notes: Medicine cat, 8 seasons old (THIS CAT IS THE SAME AS THE ONE ABOVE )

Don't worry, I know. For future reference, it's a lot easier for you and me to just use the character review sheet. I cover names on that one, too.

Name Rating: 2/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: Feather- has been covered under the Common Names part of the thread, but I'll quote it for you here.

Feather-/-feather: As a descriptor, it's useless. Feathers can be any color, shape, or size, and even if they were to suggest a personality type like "soft and gentle", it would still fail due to feathers coming in many varieties besides downy.

As for -storm, she's the exact opposite of a -storm cat. She's calm, kind, and sweet - which is a -cloud cat. Cats with the -storm suffix are easily angered, wild tempered, and very impatient, sometimes even having mood swings.
Alternative Name: Fircloud/Willowcloud. The prefixes cover a grey cat, and -cloud indicates her personality.

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: There doesn't really appear to be too much to her. You listed some very basic traits, yes, but there isn't really anything that spices her up! Even the most patient and calm cats have something to them other than that. Maybe she's relaxed to the point of laziness? Or she can be a little manipulative or lie a lot and then when someone figures it out she just charms them with her grace and sweet demeanor? Something like that!

[inkyst]

Name: Snowstorm
Description: Silvery-white tabby with blue eyes. lighter colored ear tips
Important Notes: Medicine cat, 8 seasons old

Image/Description: Image
Name: Snowstorm
Gender: Female
Clan: RiverClan
Rank: Medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Kind, good with herbs, can get really fired up when cats don't eat her herbs, bad tempered when very tired, always has her paws full, loves snow, has skill to calm down a fretting cat.
Important Notes: Medicine cat, 8 seasons old (THIS CAT IS THE SAME AS THE ONE ABOVE )

(You said I could submit the form again with some editions. I edited it, a bit)

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:
A tortoiseshell (sterile.)

Name:
Spottedstar

Gender:
Tom

Clan:
Shadedclan

Rank:
Leader

Personality/Skills:
Sly and slippery in terms of wit. He is particularly good at close-battle contact. Spottedstar will use mind games to get his way.

Important Notes:
As a young tom, Spottedstar fell for a fellow warrior. Unfortunately it was unrequited love and she fell for another tom. Bitter from the rejection and belief that she had lead him on, he rejected relationships with any other cat and successfully became leader. His jealousy never left him and ended up hurting the cat he loved. She left the clan with one of her kits and left the other two with her mate. Never forgetting his mistakes, he punished her kits and trained them to be almost as bitter as he, that their mother left them. He had successfully tore a family apart. He later lead a deadly force into the forest and nearly destroyed the clans as they knew them. He died a loner; He was finally found out and exiled, replaced by the daughter of the cat he had loved.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: He is spotted (or at least has very small patches of color), so there's no issue there. I'm not sure what his warrior suffix was, so I'm just going by the prefix.
Alternative Name: None.

Character Rating: 5/10
Character Reasoning: This rating's (just a little) personal, because I am thoroughly tired of the "crazy jealous guy who turns evil just because some girl didn't like him" trope. I hate it. It's overused and rarely even makes sense, and I'm going to explain why.
When Ashfur's whole arc was completely destroyed thanks to the Hunters wanting ~~~drama~~~, they took away a lot of what made him the cat he was. His entire story became about one sole cat (that, by the way, he was related to), and he turned evil because their...what, two month long fling didn't work out?
Ashfur had so much more to him than just that. His adopted brother was Cloudtail (and they did have a good friendship, at least for a while), his mother was murdered by Tigerstar, and he was the one that led the charge to kill Bone. He had a strong sense of kinship and justice, willing to risk his life to lead the dogs to their demise and arguing until his face was blue because he and his fellow apprentices were not named properly due to Bluestar's paranoia of StarClan (one day I'll rant about Bluestar...one day). He was even friends with Brambleclaw before this whole mess.
And then all of a sudden everything he was gets flung to the bricks and he becomes an insane, murderous sonuva clinging to a vague memory of a relationship that he misinterpreted. And thus becomes the baby of the fandom. Disgusting, but that's not my point.
My point is that your character didn't even get to start a relationship before going nuts, and the thing is, you didn't even let him be a villain on his own. He had to have a unrequited crush for it to all go downhill.
The truth is, he's plenty villain material by himself. Manipulative, sneaky, and sly? Those are perfect starters. I mean, really, he didn't need to have anything else. He sounds sociopathic, uncaring of the consequences and willing to stoop to any levels to get his way. I assume that he was clever enough to charm his way to the top, and then showed his true colors. That's a terrifying aspect in a leader, and a great aspect in a villain.
Make him his own character. Don't let another person define him.

Oh, and he's a tortoiseshell, something that only occurs in females unless there's a chimera. So I'd either do some more research (it looks like you did do some, but it got waysided by the love thing), make him female, or change his color.