Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

Still open - we could use some queens or elders!

[corrosive_limes]

Name: Undecided, but Im thinking Brindle- or Tiger- as prefixes. As for suffixes, perhaps -whisker or -nose.
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Depends on RP
Rank: Warrior or queen, again depends.
Personality/Skills: Im thinking a fiery she-cat with a spirited personality. Shes good at hunting, but its not a talent. Shes also good at tracking. Shes independent most of the time, but is usually willing to help her clanmates. She has a personality that most cats dont thoroughly understand, but it baffles her they dont understand. To sum her up, a fiery and independent hunter who will help when needed.
Important Notes: She has a small scar on her left cheek and a nick in her left ear. Im thinking Tigernose for a name? She seems to fiery for Brindle-.

[border collies.]

Image/Description: Brown with Amber eyes
Name: Applepaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FlareClan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: She isn't that smart, but she is great at fighting, she can get really angry at Whitepaw that she can almost kill her.
Important Notes: She hates Whitepaw because when they were kits they loved eachother, well not Applepaw. Whitepaw saw her talking to her sister, Rosekit, that she was using Whitekit to become a apprentice.

Image/Description: White with Green eyes
Name: Whitepaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FlareClan
Rank: Med cat apprentice
Personality/Skills: She is very skilled with herbs and she knows over half of them. She is usually calm and cool but not when Applepaw is around.
Important Notes: None.

[Arcaii]

Name: Undecided, but Im thinking Brindle- or Tiger- as prefixes. As for suffixes, perhaps -whisker or -nose.
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Depends on RP
Rank: Warrior or queen, again depends.
Personality/Skills: Im thinking a fiery she-cat with a spirited personality. Shes good at hunting, but its not a talent. Shes also good at tracking. Shes independent most of the time, but is usually willing to help her clanmates. She has a personality that most cats dont thoroughly understand, but it baffles her they dont understand. To sum her up, a fiery and independent hunter who will help when needed.
Important Notes: She has a small scar on her left cheek and a nick in her left ear. Im thinking Tigernose for a name? She seems to fiery for Brindle-.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Since her fur more closely resembles a Brindle- cat, I think that's what you should go for. Tiger- is moreso a directly brown tabby, and she's got little patches here and there of ginger.
Also, just to be clear, a prefix has no personality connotations. When a kit is born, they have no personality. They're just a wailing little ball of fat and fur that likes milk. The prefix's job is to describe the cat's coat, and that has nothing to do with what kind of cat they'll grow to be. So you can get a very timid cat named Lion-, or a violently aggressive cat named Daisy-. It doesn't really matter what the cat's personality is like, it just matters what they look like. See what I mean?
Assuming that she isn't very good at tracking, just pretty good, I think she could be a -storm cat. That's a lot more definitive than any prefix, personality wise!
Alternative Name: Brindlestorm. If she's very good at tracking, then she's Brindlenose.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: Fiery and spirited are fine traits. I think you could add on some more, though: impatient, maybe, or quick to leap to assumptions. She sounds impulsive and not entirely self-aware, as well.

[corrosive_limes]

Name: Undecided, but Im thinking Brindle- or Tiger- as prefixes. As for suffixes, perhaps -whisker or -nose.
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Depends on RP
Rank: Warrior or queen, again depends.
Personality/Skills: Im thinking a fiery she-cat with a spirited personality. Shes good at hunting, but its not a talent. Shes also good at tracking. Shes independent most of the time, but is usually willing to help her clanmates. She has a personality that most cats dont thoroughly understand, but it baffles her they dont understand. To sum her up, a fiery and independent hunter who will help when needed.
Important Notes: She has a small scar on her left cheek and a nick in her left ear. Im thinking Tigernose for a name? She seems to fiery for Brindle-.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Since her fur more closely resembles a Brindle- cat, I think that's what you should go for. Tiger- is moreso a directly brown tabby, and she's got little patches here and there of ginger.
Also, just to be clear, a prefix has no personality connotations. When a kit is born, they have no personality. They're just a wailing little ball of fat and fur that likes milk. The prefix's job is to describe the cat's coat, and that has nothing to do with what kind of cat they'll grow to be. So you can get a very timid cat named Lion-, or a violently aggressive cat named Daisy-. It doesn't really matter what the cat's personality is like, it just matters what they look like. See what I mean?
Assuming that she isn't very good at tracking, just pretty good, I think she could be a -storm cat. That's a lot more definitive than any prefix, personality wise!
Alternative Name: Brindlestorm. If she's very good at tracking, then she's Brindlenose.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: Fiery and spirited are fine traits. I think you could add on some more, though: impatient, maybe, or quick to leap to assumptions. She sounds impulsive and not entirely self-aware, as well.

Okay, well, Ill keep that in mind c:



Name: Brindlestorm
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Depends on RP
Rank: Warrior or queen, again depends.
Personality/Skills: Im thinking a fiery she-cat with a spirited personality. Shes good at hunting, but its not a talent. Shes also fairly good at tracking. Shes independent most of the time, but is usually willing to help her clanmates. Shes a bit impatient sometimes, and occasionally short-tempered. She sometimes isn't completely aware of her surroundings, and this has gotten her into trouble on more than one occasion, like not noticing the enemy clan's scent because she's too preoccupied with arguing with a clanmate. She also enjoys adventures, and this may be part of why she's so grouchy: she's bored. She has a personality that most cats dont thoroughly understand, but it baffles her they dont understand, again, this is her impatient personality. To sum her up, a fiery and independent hunter who is a bit of a grump, yet will help when needed and enjoys action.
Important Notes: She has a small scar on her left cheek and a nick in her left ear.

[Arcaii]

She looks a lot better! Well done to you!

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Brown with Amber eyes
Name: Applepaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FlareClan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: She isn't that smart, but she is great at fighting, she can get really angry at Whitepaw that she can almost kill her.
Important Notes: She hates Whitepaw because when they were kits they loved eachother, well not Applepaw. Whitepaw saw her talking to her sister, Rosekit, that she was using Whitekit to become a apprentice.

Image/Description: White with Green eyes
Name: Whitepaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: FlareClan
Rank: Med cat apprentice
Personality/Skills: She is very skilled with herbs and she knows over half of them. She is usually calm and cool but not when Applepaw is around.
Important Notes: None.

Applepaw
Name Rating: 6/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Apple- is only for golden or ginger colored cats. She's a brown cat, so that wouldn't work too well.
Her suffix, meanwhile, could be -claw once she gets older. She does sound like a talented fighter, after all.
Alternative Name: Barleyclaw/Linnetclaw. Barley- is for if she's a lighter colored cat, and -claw denotes her fighting abilities.

Character Rating: 5/10
Character Reasoning: There...really isn't much to her. 'Not smart' and 'easily angered at one specific cat' are all I got.
The thing is, no matterhow old they are as apprentices, they shouldn't be falling in love as kits. Kits, much like children and preteens, cannot comprehend the meaning of "in love" at that stage; their brain is not programmed for that yet. Once they're older, maybe new warriors, they could have something going on (and hey, lesbian cats are always welcome). But until then, they shouldn't even be thinking about that.
My suggestion is to create more of a personality for her. She could be easily flustered and start shouting when she gets embarrassed, she could be focused entirely on being the best fighter she can be, she could like to preen and pose because she's certain that she's the best. Really, anything more than "not smart" would be great.
Also, being angry enough to kill a member of her own Clan? She's got issues, and they did not start over that. Having a broken heart or whatever happened (I'm not entirely certain) is not enough to suddenly want to murder someone that you grew up with.


Whitepaw
Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Well, I mean...she is white. So... not much to say there.
On her suffix, it's hard to place her. Depending on her age, she could be a prodigy or a dunce. If she's only a moon into her training and has already memorized half the herbs on the list, then she's most certainly a -leaf. If she's older, and about halfway through training, then she's not particularly skilled, she's just a -fur or -pelt.
Alternative Name: Whiteleaf, but only if she's pretty young to have already gotten half the herbs and treatments memorized. Otherwise, she's a -pelt or -fur.

Character Rating: 4/10
Character Reasoning: Like her friend, I barely know anything about her. I'd place more emphasis on her personality. Does she completely contrast Applepaw/Barleyclaw/Linnetclaw, and that's why they like each other so much? Is she patient and empathetic? How does she prefer to spend her days? Does she like going for a swim here and there, or does she hide at the first sign of a storm? Stuff like that!

[corrosive_limes]

She looks a lot better! Well done to you!

Could you maybe re-review her?

[Arcaii]

Oh! Sure thing, haha.

[Arcaii]

Name: Brindlestorm
Gender: She-cat
Clan: Depends on RP
Rank: Warrior or queen, again depends.
Personality/Skills: Im thinking a fiery she-cat with a spirited personality. Shes good at hunting, but its not a talent. Shes also fairly good at tracking. Shes independent most of the time, but is usually willing to help her clanmates. Shes a bit impatient sometimes, and occasionally short-tempered. She sometimes isn't completely aware of her surroundings, and this has gotten her into trouble on more than one occasion, like not noticing the enemy clan's scent because she's too preoccupied with arguing with a clanmate. She also enjoys adventures, and this may be part of why she's so grouchy: she's bored. She has a personality that most cats dont thoroughly understand, but it baffles her they dont understand, again, this is her impatient personality. To sum her up, a fiery and independent hunter who is a bit of a grump, yet will help when needed and enjoys action.
Important Notes: She has a small scar on her left cheek and a nick in her left ear.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: With the help of her new-and-improved personality, she fits her name to a T. I don't think I can say much more about that without praising myself, so that's that!
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: She sounds thoroughly entertaining, to say the least. I appreciate your elaborations a lot! As I said earlier, she looks a lot better now!