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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Remini » Sun Feb 09, 2014 10:45 am

(I may be using these cats to join the clan, so I just want to make sure they're okay before I even think about it. cx)

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Name: Cedarcloud
Gender: male
Clan: Not yet decided.
Rank: medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Cedarcloud was a large kit, the biggest of his litter when he was born. As a kit he was always considered quite lazy and relaxed, seemingly without a care in the world. He felt a connection to Starclan early, and although he was a decent fighter for a kit his age, he slowly gained an interest in the job of taking care of others. He is empathetic, able to understand elders and kits well, and has been sought out for his advice by others often. However skilled in medicine, he can still take care of himself if need be and he considers that one of his greatest assets. He isn't one to ask for protection from others, or put them in harms way.
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Name: Starling (Not sure of a suitable suffix,)
Gender: Female
Clan: Not yet decided.
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Starling has a bit of a self-centered personality, she thinks she's absolutely stunning in every way possible and puts herself before others in most cases. She's average sized, and has a bad habit of rolling her eyes. She's sarcastic and more than a little pretentious, with a dislike of all things dirty. She's skilled in hunting and running, never fighting unless necessary for the good of the clan.
Important Notes: Here's a super cliche cat, don't be afraid to be mean, I'm horrible with writing personalities down for cats like this.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Sun Feb 09, 2014 11:43 am

Mìsha wrote:
(I may be using these cats to join the clan, so I just want to make sure they're okay before I even think about it. cx)

Image/Description:
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Name: Cedarcloud
Gender: male
Clan: Not yet decided.
Rank: medicine cat
Personality/Skills: Cedarcloud was a large kit, the biggest of his litter when he was born. As a kit he was always considered quite lazy and relaxed, seemingly without a care in the world. He felt a connection to Starclan early, and although he was a decent fighter for a kit his age, he slowly gained an interest in the job of taking care of others. He is empathetic, able to understand elders and kits well, and has been sought out for his advice by others often. However skilled in medicine, he can still take care of himself if need be and he considers that one of his greatest assets. He isn't one to ask for protection from others, or put them in harms way.
Important Notes:

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Name: Starling (Not sure of a suitable suffix,)
Gender: Female
Clan: Not yet decided.
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Starling has a bit of a self-centered personality, she thinks she's absolutely stunning in every way possible and puts herself before others in most cases. She's average sized, and has a bad habit of rolling her eyes. She's sarcastic and more than a little pretentious, with a dislike of all things dirty. She's skilled in hunting and running, never fighting unless necessary for the good of the clan.
Important Notes: Here's a super cliche cat, don't be afraid to be mean, I'm horrible with writing personalities down for cats like this.


I'm glad you're considering joining, haha. I'll look at these guys for you. (Spoiler: They're just fine)


Cedarcloud
Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: His suffix is great; the only problem is that he's a little too grey for his prefix, but I think that could be solved with a quick google search and a replacement picture!
Alternative Name: Shadecloud/Greycloud. My higher suggestion is to change the picture, but here's some options if you decide against it.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: This character is just fine! He sounds great to have as a medicine cat.


Starling-
Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Her prefix is just fine. The white spots are a little big for the usual naming, but I don't think that's a terrible deal to fuss over.
As for a suffix, it would depend on which she's better at, in which case she would be a -whisker or a -foot.
Alternative Name: Starlingfoot/Starlingwhisker. If she's a better runner than a hunter, she's a -foot. If she's better at hunting, then she's a -whisker.

Character Rating: 9/10
Character Reasoning: Despite what you think, I like her! We don't see enough pretentious, prissy cats around the fandom anyway, and she's done pretty well! My suggestion is to make her a running cat, since I imagine that if she hates getting dirty, she'd prefer to take a running leap, haha.
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Pokechu12 » Tue Feb 11, 2014 6:58 am

      I can change the twos appearance slightly so they fit their prefixes, if needed. A suggestion, maybe you could add a glossary of animal names suitable for cats? Like Badger, Fox, Bat exc.

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      Description: A ginger tom with white paws and underbelly.
      Name: Foxstar. [Foxstep]
      His gait is similar to a Foxes, thus his name.
      Gender: Tom/Male
      Clan: -Undecided-
      Rank: Leader
      Personality: Foxstar is getting more on the older side, but still has a spring in his step. His pride has not died, and some say he's as cunning as the animal he was named after. He is protective of family, and prefers to be around them than strangers. It can be slightly hard for others to talk to him because of this, but he considers his clan his family and would happily lead them into battle and die for them. He tends to shut out the other clans, and would gladly skip gatherings if Starclan allowed it.
      Skills: Hunting and Stalking.
      Important Notes: None.

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      Description: A stocky black and white cat.
      Name: Badgerpaw. [Badgerstep or Badgerclaw/nose.]
      Badger due to his coat, step for his waddling/clumsy gait, claw and nose for his hunting and tracking skills respectically.
      Gender: Tom/Male
      Clan: -Undecided-
      Rank: Apprentice
      Personality: Quite a considerate and kind tom, Badgerpaw is a secret favorite of she-cats. He is also quite clumsy, but he hopes he grows out of it- Owlpaw often teases him! His favorite pass time is to watch the sun rise and fall, but he does like to catch new scents and play-fight with his fellow apprentices. As he grows up he might become more protective, and have a way with words. Badgerpaw also seems to be growing into a humbly proud tom, since he doesn't like rubbing his wins in others face.
      Skills: Fighting and Tracking.
      Important Notes: I believe -nose is for a tracking cat? Or is it -whisker?

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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Tue Feb 11, 2014 7:26 am

Pokechu12 wrote:
      I can change the twos appearance slightly so they fit their prefixes, if needed. A suggestion, maybe you could add a glossary of animal names suitable for cats? Like Badger, Fox, Bat exc.

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      Description: A ginger tom with white paws and underbelly.
      Name: Foxstar. [Foxstep]
      His gait is similar to a Foxes, thus his name.
      Gender: Tom/Male
      Clan: -Undecided-
      Rank: Leader
      Personality: Foxstar is getting more on the older side, but still has a spring in his step. His pride has not died, and some say he's as cunning as the animal he was named after. He is protective of family, and prefers to be around them than strangers. It can be slightly hard for others to talk to him because of this, but he considers his clan his family and would happily lead them into battle and die for them. He tends to shut out the other clans, and would gladly skip gatherings if Starclan allowed it.
      Skills: Hunting and Stalking.
      Important Notes: None.

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      Description: A stocky black and white cat.
      Name: Badgerpaw. [Badgerstep or Badgerclaw/nose.]
      Badger due to his coat, step for his waddling/clumsy gait, claw and nose for his hunting and tracking skills respectically.
      Gender: Tom/Male
      Clan: -Undecided-
      Rank: Apprentice
      Personality: Quite a considerate and kind tom, Badgerpaw is a secret favorite of she-cats. He is also quite clumsy, but he hopes he grows out of it- Owlpaw often teases him! His favorite pass time is to watch the sun rise and fall, but he does like to catch new scents and play-fight with his fellow apprentices. As he grows up he might become more protective, and have a way with words. Badgerpaw also seems to be growing into a humbly proud tom, since he doesn't like rubbing his wins in others face.
      Skills: Fighting and Tracking.
      Important Notes: I believe -nose is for a tracking cat? Or is it -whisker?


There is a glossary up on the front page, but I'll give you a link! Here's the prefixes and suffixes. Each prefix covers the coat color and possible eye colors, along with an explanation for the name. The suffixes are more in depth as to their reasoning, since they are mostly for skill or appearance. They also come with traits that may be associated with each skill! I hope that helps you.
And now on to the reviews.


Foxstar/Foxstep
Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: He does have the prerequisite for a -step cat, but it would depend on how skilled he is with hunting. If he's a very talented hunter, then he would get -whisker, but if he just happens to be good at it, he'd keep -step. Since he's a leader, though, I don't think it'd matter much either way, haha.
Alternative Name: Foxwhisker - only if he's very good at hunting, rather than just pretty good.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: He sounds just fine! Fortunately for him, the only thing they have to worry about is the occasional big animal or loner, haha.


Badgerpaw aaaa he looks adorable!
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: His prefix is just fine. -claw is actually used for fighting, rather than hunting, which I suggest more (unless that was a typo up there. I assume so, anyway). A tracking cat is indeed a -nose cat, as well.
Alternative Name: Badgerclaw/Badgernose. It depends on which one he's more talented at; -claw: fighting, -nose: tracking.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: This one looks great too! Go ahead and apply, if you'd like!
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Re: Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer

Postby Pokechu12 » Tue Feb 11, 2014 7:50 am

badgerpaw is indeed adorable <3 Ok, I'll be checking the glossary often then! I believe there was a typo. x3 His fighting skills are suppose to be better than his hunting. I'm joining now~

Edit; Just noticed I got my first 20/20 cat. x3

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