Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer (ENDED)

[.kestral]

I will do that. And another different one.

Clan Name:
Snowclan - Frozenclan - Iceclan - Frostclan?
Any would work. Which do you think fits best?
Territory:
Cold, icy, wet. This clans territory is full of thick, pine trees, three quarters of the year the territory is bathed in snow. The territory only thaws during Newleaf when they clan makes sure to eat and hunt enough to get them through the colder months. The territory has frozen rivers and frozen pools that need to be broken for fresh, running water. There camp is dug into a enclosed hollow, three high walls surround it and the dens are dug deep into the walls and roots of trees and branches. The walls prevent snow from coating the camp. There is lots of moss around the territory, but often it has to be dried during the Newleaf and then stored until needed. Common prey includes rabbits and squirrels, but mice, hidden in deep tunnels are there usual prey.
Notable History:
Founded many years ago by a cat who left there clan due to conflict, the cat gathered others, building up a clan. They settled on the territory and just never left.
Unique Skills:
Thick fur, ready for the winter. These cats seem to have fur many times thicker than normal to protect against the snow. There paws are slightly bigger, helping them stay slightly on top of the snow. They are experts at hearing there prey, at sniffing out the slightest meal. They can get into tunnels to get to mice and other small animals.
Reputation/Personality:
They have no neighbours, but will always accept more cats to assist there clan.
Average Clan Member:
Thick furred and fluffy. Underneath they are a lot smaller, making it easy to get into the tunnels. There fur is slightly like. Riverclan fur, allowing them to almost shake of snow while staying mostly dry. There fur is usually pale, allowing them to blend in with there snowy territory.
Important Notes:
None

[Arcaii]

I will do that. And another different one.

Clan Name:
Snowclan - Frozenclan - Iceclan - Frostclan?
Any would work. Which do you think fits best?
Territory:
Cold, icy, wet. This clans territory is full of thick, pine trees, three quarters of the year the territory is bathed in snow. The territory only thaws during Newleaf when they clan makes sure to eat and hunt enough to get them through the colder months. The territory has frozen rivers and frozen pools that need to be broken for fresh, running water. There camp is dug into a enclosed hollow, three high walls surround it and the dens are dug deep into the walls and roots of trees and branches. The walls prevent snow from coating the camp. There is lots of moss around the territory, but often it has to be dried during the Newleaf and then stored until needed. Common prey includes rabbits and squirrels, but mice, hidden in deep tunnels are there usual prey.
Notable History:
Founded many years ago by a cat who left there clan due to conflict, the cat gathered others, building up a clan. They settled on the territory and just never left.
Unique Skills:
Thick fur, ready for the winter. These cats seem to have fur many times thicker than normal to protect against the snow. There paws are slightly bigger, helping them stay slightly on top of the snow. They are experts at hearing there prey, at sniffing out the slightest meal. They can get into tunnels to get to mice and other small animals.
Reputation/Personality:
They have no neighbours, but will always accept more cats to assist there clan.
Average Clan Member:
Thick furred and fluffy. Underneath they are a lot smaller, making it easy to get into the tunnels. There fur is slightly like. Riverclan fur, allowing them to almost shake of snow while staying mostly dry. There fur is usually pale, allowing them to blend in with there snowy territory.
Important Notes:
None

Name Rating: A general 9/10
Name Reasoning: In my point of view, names that work the best feature a noun (Stone, Desert, Forest) that pops up a lot in their territory, rather than how the territory usually is (Frozen, Warm, Sunny). If snow is a year-round constant, then that would be the best option to go with; Frost and Ice are effects of cold weather, usually when its about to snow, so they don't describe the territory's regular weather enough.
Alternative Name: SnowClan.

Clan Rating: 9/10
Clan Reasoning: My only complain is the size of the cats. Usually, the bigger a cat is, the fluffier it is (see Maine Coons and Norwegian Forest Cats for reference). There are animals that live regularly in very cold weather, like hares, shrews, bats and lynxes. The cats don't necessarily have to be small to live there; rather, the bigger the better, at least if you're living in Alaska (which I think the Clan could live in, since that's pretty much always snowy).
Suggestions: Figure out exactly where these cats are, and what kind of prey they'd find. Mind that if they're in North America, they're subject to big predators, so you need to figure out a way for them to survive there (being huge, for example, and strong enough to fight a lynx in pairs).

[.kestral]

I forgot about bats and such. I might make them all forest cat and Maine coon types, bigger, bulkier cats thank you!

[Arcaii]

Glad to help!

[Morningpaw11]

Clan Name;; MountainClan / anything else to suggest?

Territory;; The Clan is in a vast mountain range. They mainly hunt in the pine forest that is on and near the mountains, and their camp is also placed within this forest. The territory is rather cold and up in the colder parts of the world, and they get quite a lot of snow in leaf-bare; in greenleaf, the temperatures are still cool. Another noticeable part of the territory is the clear lake, around which the mountains and elevated terrain are placed. The water generally remains very cold all year, though, so most cats don't try to hunt in it.

Notable History;; There is not really that much to this Clan's history. They have lived in this territory longer than any cat can remember, and although there are stories and myths about their past, no cat knows for sure. Long ago, there were groups of cats that eventually evolved into a
Clan, and that's pretty much it.

Unique Skills;; They have thick fur to withstand the extreme cold that they face in leaf-bare. They have strong muscles in their hind legs and good endurance, to be able to climb uphill for an extended period of time. They are good at tracking things in the forest, because the musty smell of the pine forest can often block out scents of their prey. Having good eyesight in darkness, the cats are also good at sneak and surprise attacks.

Reputation/Personality: [Mountain]Clan has a rather bad impression of kittypets, loners and rogues, and would be the last Clan to accept one in. They are not necessarily quick to fight, but if it has to happen, the Clan will eagerly participate. Known to be fierce, cunning and good fighters, the Clan is generally feared and few cats would try to start a fight with them.

Average Clan Member: Most of the Clan has a dark pelt to fit in with the darkness and shadows of the forest. They are not often seen out on the shore where the lake is because they prefer to be in the shadows, where other cats can't see them. They have a strong body build, accentuated in the hind legs and core.

Important Notes: This isn't an actual Clan I'm doing, I just decided to make something up for fun. ^^ By the way, I'm in the process of remaking my other roleplay. c: I got the first post done and I used the plot with the sickness. Sorry about this Clan's lame history, I guess they just kind of turned into a Clan. xD

[Arcaii]

Clan Name;; MountainClan / anything else to suggest?

Territory;; The Clan is in a vast mountain range. They mainly hunt in the pine forest that is on and near the mountains, and their camp is also placed within this forest. The territory is rather cold and up in the colder parts of the world, and they get quite a lot of snow in leaf-bare; in greenleaf, the temperatures are still cool. Another noticeable part of the territory is the clear lake, around which the mountains and elevated terrain are placed. The water generally remains very cold all year, though, so most cats don't try to hunt in it.

Notable History;; There is not really that much to this Clan's history. They have lived in this territory longer than any cat can remember, and although there are stories and myths about their past, no cat knows for sure. Long ago, there were groups of cats that eventually evolved into a
Clan, and that's pretty much it.

Unique Skills;; They have thick fur to withstand the extreme cold that they face in leaf-bare. They have strong muscles in their hind legs and good endurance, to be able to climb uphill for an extended period of time. They are good at tracking things in the forest, because the musty smell of the pine forest can often block out scents of their prey. Having good eyesight in darkness, the cats are also good at sneak and surprise attacks.

Reputation/Personality: [Mountain]Clan has a rather bad impression of kittypets, loners and rogues, and would be the last Clan to accept one in. They are not necessarily quick to fight, but if it has to happen, the Clan will eagerly participate. Known to be fierce, cunning and good fighters, the Clan is generally feared and few cats would try to start a fight with them.

Average Clan Member: Most of the Clan has a dark pelt to fit in with the darkness and shadows of the forest. They are not often seen out on the shore where the lake is because they prefer to be in the shadows, where other cats can't see them. They have a strong body build, accentuated in the hind legs and core.

Important Notes: This isn't an actual Clan I'm doing, I just decided to make something up for fun. ^^ By the way, I'm in the process of remaking my other roleplay. c: I got the first post done and I used the plot with the sickness. Sorry about this Clan's lame history, I guess they just kind of turned into a Clan. xD

It's fine! I missed this, earlier, so let me get it reviewed.

Name Rating: 10/10
Name Reasoning: The territory fits the name just fine, so I have no complaints about it! I'll suggest some other names, though, just in case.
Alternative Name: SlopeClan/RidgeClan.

Clan Rating: 9/10
Clan Reasoning: The only issue I think I'd have with this Clan is the coat color. Mountains can be dark, yes, but they have a variety of colors to them - brown and grey and orange and white, to think of natural cat colors.
Suggestions: Lighten up the coats a little to the brown-grey-white region.

[Arcaii]

Badimp Badamp

[Arcaii]

I have my own RP up now! We could use some queens and elders!

[Altias]

Bumpabump!

[Arcaii]

Oh sup Alt