Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Pokechu12]

Just me again with two cats that are kind of opposites. |D




Description: A beautiful white she-cat with a couple of calico patches.
Name: Brightcloud
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: -Undecided-
Rank: Warrior

Personality: Brightcloud is a intelligent and gentle cat, who is often seen going around an asking other cats if they need help. Which becomes a nuisance. The nursery and elders den are her second home, and she would rather be taking out a bothersome tick out of an elders fur than battling for the border of her clan. Her hunting skills do surpass her fighting, as she isn't one to jump to conclusions and tries to sort things out first. Her main habit is checking her pelt, to make sure she is presentable, and can spend what seems like forever grooming. Brightcloud is often called upon by queen to kit-sit [not actually sitting on them, of course] and finds her more serious clan mates doubting her abilities.
Skills: Hunting and Tracking. Other than that, it lies in her personality.

Important Notes: None.

Description: A big grey tom with green eyes and a bushy tail.
Name: Boulderstorm
Gender: Tom/Male
Clan: -Undecided-
Rank: Warrior

Personality: A harsh and cold tom. He often shuts people out so he's in his own little world, waking up early and sleeping early to avoid attention. Boulderstorm also keeps his mind full of things with tasks from cats he can tolerate, but hunting is his main excuse. He was does have a good heart under it all though, behind his sharp tongue and loner nature, he feels as if he should protect his clan and the one cat he admires most in it.
Skills: Fighting, Hunting, but he really does like Swimming too. A stream calms him down.

Important Notes: None.

[tikitiki6]

Image/Description:
Name: Rainwhisker
Gender: Female
Clan: Thunder
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: she is a calm, quiet cat. She is sometimes a bit lazy, and would like Things to be handed to her. She would be fine with the life of a kittypet, but never tells anyone
Important Notes: when she was an apprentice, she saw a huge fish swimming in the water. She tried to catch it, but it jumped in the air and pulled off one of her whiskers, and she pulled off one of its. Later, the elders told her that the fish was 100 moons old, and never could be caught, and if you even got one part of it, you would get good luck forever. She always belived that, even thinking that was the reason of her warrior name, (but it was not)
And always stayed happy, even in the darkest times.

[Arcaii]

Just me again with two cats that are kind of opposites. |D




Description: A beautiful white she-cat with a couple of calico patches.
Name: Brightcloud
Gender: Female/She-cat
Clan: -Undecided-
Rank: Warrior

Personality: Brightcloud is a intelligent and gentle cat, who is often seen going around an asking other cats if they need help. Which becomes a nuisance. The nursery and elders den are her second home, and she would rather be taking out a bothersome tick out of an elders fur than battling for the border of her clan. Her hunting skills do surpass her fighting, as she isn't one to jump to conclusions and tries to sort things out first. Her main habit is checking her pelt, to make sure she is presentable, and can spend what seems like forever grooming. Brightcloud is often called upon by queen to kit-sit [not actually sitting on them, of course] and finds her more serious clan mates doubting her abilities.
Skills: Hunting and Tracking. Other than that, it lies in her personality.

Important Notes: None.

Description: A big grey tom with green eyes and a bushy tail.
Name: Boulderstorm
Gender: Tom/Male
Clan: -Undecided-
Rank: Warrior

Personality: A harsh and cold tom. He often shuts people out so he's in his own little world, waking up early and sleeping early to avoid attention. Boulderstorm also keeps his mind full of things with tasks from cats he can tolerate, but hunting is his main excuse. He was does have a good heart under it all though, behind his sharp tongue and loner nature, he feels as if he should protect his clan and the one cat he admires most in it.
Skills: Fighting, Hunting, but he really does like Swimming too. A stream calms him down.

Important Notes: None.

Brightcloud
Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Bright- could work, I think; I'm not for certain, since it's used for a cat with starker contrast between their fur, rather than just smaller parts. If you want to keep it, that's fine; I'll suggest a different prefix, just in case.
She does fit a -cloud cat, but she has some abilities with hunting and tracking, so I think she should be named for that.
Alternative Name: Lightwhisker/Cherrynose (suffixes interchangeable depending on which one she's best at). Cherry- has a bonus for being usable with gingers, tortoiseshells, and white cats, which could work with her fur colors.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: She's a good character, and I don't see anything wrong with her! I like her quite a bit, actually.



Boulderstorm
Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Boulder- fits him perfectly. I'm a little more iffy on -storm, simply because he's not as turbulent and wild as a -storm cat. He seems more like a -fang cat to me (-stream I ignore mostly because he likes swimming in water, rather than being very good at it).
Alternative Name: Boulderfang, for his talents in fighting and hunting.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: Overall, I don't think there's too much to complain about. Both of these characters are pretty nice!

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:
Name: Rainwhisker
Gender: Female
Clan: Thunder
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: she is a calm, quiet cat. She is sometimes a bit lazy, and would like Things to be handed to her. She would be fine with the life of a kittypet, but never tells anyone
Important Notes: when she was an apprentice, she saw a huge fish swimming in the water. She tried to catch it, but it jumped in the air and pulled off one of her whiskers, and she pulled off one of its. Later, the elders told her that the fish was 100 moons old, and never could be caught, and if you even got one part of it, you would get good luck forever. She always belived that, even thinking that was the reason of her warrior name, (but it was not)
And always stayed happy, even in the darkest times.

Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Semi-traditional
Name Reasoning: Rain- is fine for her, but she's not particularly a talented hunter, so -whisker doesn't really cut it. Even if she did get a whisker torn off by a big fish, she's got, like, what, 9 more? How many whiskers do cats have, does anyone know...?
Alternative Name: Rainfur/Rainpelt.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: I don't have any issues with her personality, but I am curious about this whole big fish thing. How could a cat pick it out from a whole school of them, and why would it particularly matter if no one did catch it? If you wanted to tweak it a little, you could make it so that she hears old stories of fish scales/whiskers being good luck, and she could collect them whenever she manages to find them.

[tikitiki6]

The thing is, she snuck off during hunting, and found a pool of water that looked like crystal, and there was only one fish in it. But yeah, i like your idea as well

[Arcaii]

The thing is, she snuck off during hunting, and found a pool of water that looked like crystal, and there was only one fish in it. But yeah, i like your idea as well

Whatever option works for you, I'm fine with! 'Sall opinion here.

[Shironeki.]

okay here's Another one~ This one is important as I'm trying out for a rp group on DA

Image/Description: Small grey tabby she-cat with odd coloured eyes
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Name: Stormwhisper
Storm//A few of the other Queens along with her mother agreed that the markings along her back somewhat looked like lightening strikes. That along with her Stormish colours gave her the name.
Whisper// Whisper Due to her silent nature and incredible speed.

Gender: She- Cat

Clan: Hopefully RapidClan

Rank: Apprentice

Personality: ||Silent||Timid||Intelligent||Calm||Antisocial|| Submissive||

Silent;; She doesn't talk much; many cats who have known her for a while haven't actually heard her speak. When she does say something it is nearly always worth listening as it is usually important or insightful. She feels idle conversation is a waste of time, and never speaks unless needed. Some cats consider her mute, so they are often a little shocked when she speaks. To communicate with other cats she usually scratches out the message in the dirt, giving the reader a chance to read it before wiping it away. She rarely talks to the cats of RapidClan only if it’s an emergency or in private.

Timid;; When she does try and talk normally, it often comes out in a jumble of words or saying something she’ll end up regretting later. This is the reason she usually only speaks one or two words at a time, as to not insult any cat or make any sense. She is also quite Hesitant to be the first cat to talk and would rather have another cat start the conversation with her

Intelligent;;Even though she doesn’t know it, Stormpaw is very intelligent. What goes through that brain of hers is a mystery but she always seems to have the answers to questions or the right way to solve a problem, whether she created it or not. She doesn’t really know anything about tactics, but with her minimal knowledge and A leaders caring words she can devise a battle plan only if absolutely necessary. Paired with her ears and soft foot-falls she can hear and catch prey quite easily.

Calm;;Whether on the brink of life and death or chasing predators out of the territory. Stormpaw has the ability to stay calm and composed in most situations. If she was losing a battle with another cat, she would not let the fear show in her eyes but remain relaxed and quiet, not spitting out insults like some cats would do. Staying cool and unruffled in the midst of a battle has a somewhat soothing and calming effect on the cats of RapidClan

Antisocial;; "G-go away..."Ever since she was born Stormpaw has always been in the shadow of her older brother Breezepaw, it was like she didn’t even exist. Breezepaw had always been the better of the two of them often showing off and acting cocky about it. He once even pushed her out of the way when she was about to start talking. Some of the other cats tease her about still being kit sized, which led to her pushing every cat away. She learned to block out the things she didn’t want to hear but kept trying to avoid most cats. She’d make up excuses to leave the camp and hoped her mentor would believe them. Not having any childhood friends to relate to she didn’t even try to befriend any cats.

Submissive;;If she is pressured or pushed to do something that she doesn’t want to do, with a few threats or harsh words would make her cave and succumb to whatever the cat wanted her to do. She is used to taking orders without hesitation or complaint and sometimes other cats dump their jobs onto her because she works so hard and does things correctly. She does their jobs anyway because she fears for her own safety if she doesn’t, and doesn’t want to be noticed.


Skills: Climbing, Swimming, Stalking, Agile, Hearing
Flaws: Light-Hitter, Clumsy, Fighting, Prickly Terrain, Predictable

Important Notes: Her Older Brother Breezepaw has had a Negative effect on her

[Arcaii]

okay here's Another one~ This one is important as I'm trying out for a rp group on DA

Image/Description: Small grey tabby she-cat with odd coloured eyes
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Name: Stormwhisper
Storm//A few of the other Queens along with her mother agreed that the markings along her back somewhat looked like lightening strikes. That along with her Stormish colours gave her the name.
Whisper// Whisper Due to her silent nature and incredible speed.

Gender: She- Cat

Clan: Hopefully RapidClan

Rank: Apprentice

Personality: ||Silent||Timid||Intelligent||Calm||Antisocial|| Submissive||

Silent;; She doesn't talk much; many cats who have known her for a while haven't actually heard her speak. When she does say something it is nearly always worth listening as it is usually important or insightful. She feels idle conversation is a waste of time, and never speaks unless needed. Some cats consider her mute, so they are often a little shocked when she speaks. To communicate with other cats she usually scratches out the message in the dirt, giving the reader a chance to read it before wiping it away. She rarely talks to the cats of RapidClan only if it’s an emergency or in private.

Timid;; When she does try and talk normally, it often comes out in a jumble of words or saying something she’ll end up regretting later. This is the reason she usually only speaks one or two words at a time, as to not insult any cat or make any sense. She is also quite Hesitant to be the first cat to talk and would rather have another cat start the conversation with her

Intelligent;;Even though she doesn’t know it, Stormpaw is very intelligent. What goes through that brain of hers is a mystery but she always seems to have the answers to questions or the right way to solve a problem, whether she created it or not. She doesn’t really know anything about tactics, but with her minimal knowledge and A leaders caring words she can devise a battle plan only if absolutely necessary. Paired with her ears and soft foot-falls she can hear and catch prey quite easily.

Calm;;Whether on the brink of life and death or chasing predators out of the territory. Stormpaw has the ability to stay calm and composed in most situations. If she was losing a battle with another cat, she would not let the fear show in her eyes but remain relaxed and quiet, not spitting out insults like some cats would do. Staying cool and unruffled in the midst of a battle has a somewhat soothing and calming effect on the cats of RapidClan

Antisocial;; "G-go away..."Ever since she was born Stormpaw has always been in the shadow of her older brother Breezepaw, it was like she didn’t even exist. Breezepaw had always been the better of the two of them often showing off and acting cocky about it. He once even pushed her out of the way when she was about to start talking. Some of the other cats tease her about still being kit sized, which led to her pushing every cat away. She learned to block out the things she didn’t want to hear but kept trying to avoid most cats. She’d make up excuses to leave the camp and hoped her mentor would believe them. Not having any childhood friends to relate to she didn’t even try to befriend any cats.

Submissive;;If she is pressured or pushed to do something that she doesn’t want to do, with a few threats or harsh words would make her cave and succumb to whatever the cat wanted her to do. She is used to taking orders without hesitation or complaint and sometimes other cats dump their jobs onto her because she works so hard and does things correctly. She does their jobs anyway because she fears for her own safety if she doesn’t, and doesn’t want to be noticed.


Skills: Climbing, Swimming, Stalking, Agile, Hearing
Flaws: Light-Hitter, Clumsy, Fighting, Prickly Terrain, Predictable

Important Notes: Her Older Brother Breezepaw has had a Negative effect on her

Sorry for the wait.'

Name Rating: 3/10
Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: Storm- is a traditional prefix, but it's for a dark grey cat. Lightning- is also a prefix, but for a nearly white or slightly golden cat, not a light grey one.
I'm sorry...how does -whisper indicate speed? To my knowledge, cats aren't exactly silent when they run. Even if she was named for being quiet, she's a fast cat! She should be named for that instead, because that's an extremely useful skill.
Alternative Name: Thistlefoot/Juniperfoot. Both prefixes are for a grey tabby, and -foot indicates her speed.

Character Rating: 5/10
Character Reasoning: Being calm and being timid to the point of stumbling over words contradict, unfortunately. You can't be calm under pressure and then in social situations be terrified of others and avoiding them.
This cat sounds awfully familiar, personality wise...
If I were you, I'd focus on her being a timid, shy cat, rather than the antisocial or intelligent bits. She should be able to talk, even if it is poorly, since scratching out messages is a lot longer and more convoluted than just saying what's on your mind. As well as that, even if she is submissive, she shouldn't be fearing for her life - she's in a Clan, which is a community. If any cat threatened the life of an apprentice, they'd be dead meat. Being nervous and submissive? Sure. But she shouldn't be paranoid that everyone's going to kill her if she doesn't do their job for them.
Anti-social carries the connotation of someone who just plain doesn't like others. She sounds like she does, a little, but she's immensely afraid of them. If this little cat's so scared of everything, why is she still in the Clan? Does she have a mentor who can be soothing and empathetic?

[DaisieGames]

Image/Description: Finchfire is a dark grey tabby with black stripes and white markings. Her gray pelt looks brown in the dark, and pretty much the only thing you can see of her in the dark is her white legs and chest, making it look like they’re moving on their own. Her ears are small ears look pointed at first, but as you get closer to her, you can they are a rounded point. As stated before her white is on her chest, back legs and front paws; also on her chin, making it look like she’s wearing a dapple gray tuxedo. Speaking of her chin, we can see her small pink noise and bright yellow eyes. Her tail is a dappled gray with a solid black tip.

Name: Finchfire

Gender: She-cat

Clan: WindClan

Rank: Warrior

Personality/Skills: Finchfire was a pawful for her adopted family to watch, and still can be even though she has calmed down some. This little tabby is very helpful, even though she may seem under paw more than helpful. She enjoys being with her adopted family, yet is still sadden for the loss of a full family. Finchfire is always trying to find a way to be strong, yet at times, she can be a little shaken and upset easily as she was when she found out about her mother's death. Even though she didn't cause it, Finchfire sometimes blames herself for it.

Important Notes:reason for name , Finch for coloring, fire for her personality. (I added a description along with picture, since I had trouble finding a dark gray tabby picture for her)

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Finchfire is a dark grey tabby with black stripes and white markings. Her gray pelt looks brown in the dark, and pretty much the only thing you can see of her in the dark is her white legs and chest, making it look like they’re moving on their own. Her ears are small ears look pointed at first, but as you get closer to her, you can they are a rounded point. As stated before her white is on her chest, back legs and front paws; also on her chin, making it look like she’s wearing a dapple gray tuxedo. Speaking of her chin, we can see her small pink noise and bright yellow eyes. Her tail is a dappled gray with a solid black tip.

Name: Finchfire

Gender: She-cat

Clan: WindClan

Rank: Warrior

Personality/Skills: Finchfire was a pawful for her adopted family to watch, and still can be even though she has calmed down some. This little tabby is very helpful, even though she may seem under paw more than helpful. She enjoys being with her adopted family, yet is still sadden for the loss of a full family. Finchfire is always trying to find a way to be strong, yet at times, she can be a little shaken and upset easily as she was when she found out about her mother's death. Even though she didn't cause it, Finchfire sometimes blames herself for it.

Important Notes:reason for name , Finch for coloring, fire for her personality. (I added a description along with picture, since I had trouble finding a dark gray tabby picture for her)

Name Rating: 5/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: The problem isn't that there aren't any finches in England, it's that there aren't any birds specifically called "finch". They all have a separate name - Goldfinch, Hawfinch, Greenfinch, etc. Compound words can't be used in a prefix or suffix; the words themselves become a compound (so no Milkywayheart or Redtailwing).
She's not a very firey cat; not really. If she was, she'd be a -storm, but she's certainly mellowed out, and didn't really have the qualifications of a -storm cat anyway. She'll have to go with the defaults, since I don't see any skills that are nameable.
Alternative Name: Stormstripe/Cinderstripe. Storm- and Cinder- indicate a dark grey cat, and the -stripe is to complete the tabby image.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: Overall, I think she's a pretty good character. She's got a nice personality that doesn't contradict, so well done to you!