Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer (ENDED)

[.kestral]

Duuuuuude
I got full marks on a clan and woke my dog up celebrating!

I plan two things for these guys, an rp and a fanfiction, obviously both a little different. When I make the rp I will let you know.
And yeah, the houses are all stone
I'm so happy!

[Arcaii]

Duuuuuude
I got full marks on a clan and woke my dog up celebrating!

I plan two things for these guys, an rp and a fanfiction, obviously both a little different. When I make the rp I will let you know.
And yeah, the houses are all stone
I'm so happy!

Excellent to everything. I'm happy to help!

[Morningpaw11]

Clan Name;; MistClan

Territory;; The Clan is named after a large waterfall in the heart of their territory, which is shown on the right. At the bottom of the waterfall is a pool, which leads into a river going downhill. Most of their territory consists of deciduous forest and rivers. The main hunting grounds are the forest around the camp, but they also go to the river to hunt, as well as to collect water. The camp is in a rather sunny clearing, with barriers built around a few bushes that
outline the camp. forest ; riverbank

Notable History;; They are descendants of the four ancient Clans - ThunderClan, RiverClan, WindClan, and ShadowClan. A disaster caused all the Clans to merge together (which was temporarily, they thought; but turned out not to be) in order to survive. They were chased out of their territory by a huge group of rogues and wild cats, hundreds of them. Forced to escape and move away, the Clans eventually settled in a forest by a waterfall. As gener-
ations passed and the Clans started to merge fully together
as one, they renamed themselves MistClan in honour of the
waterfall, because the cats were all different - they origin-
ated from all four Clans.

Unique Skills;; As apprentices, MistClan cats are taught how to fish and hunt in the forest. They are generally agile cats, but aren't as fast when running straight-out on a flat, open space, like the moors. They have quick reflexes for scooping their paw in the water in order to catch fish, and to react fast when prey turns quickly in the forest. Their legs are packed with muscles to perform a powerful forwards leap or for pushing themselves up a tree quickly.

Reputation/Personality: They are known for not letting many outsiders join the Clan and having a disliking towards kittypets especially. However, they are not quick to attack and tend to prefer having a conversation with an intruder first, before they start a battle.

Average Clan Member: The average Clan member has a smaller body build and thin- to medium-length fur. The small body build is to make them agile for running through the forest, and their shorter fur is so when they are swimming, it doesn't drag them down as much. Although the Clan has evolved over the years, there are still many different pelt colours seen.

Important Notes: Nothing really ~

[Arcaii]

Clan Name;; MistClan

Territory;; The Clan is named after a large waterfall in the heart of their territory, which is shown on the right. At the bottom of the waterfall is a pool, which leads into a river going downhill. Most of their territory consists of deciduous forest and rivers. The main hunting grounds are the forest around the camp, but they also go to the river to hunt, as well as to collect water. The camp is in a rather sunny clearing, with barriers built around a few bushes that
outline the camp. forest ; riverbank

Notable History;; They are descendants of the four ancient Clans - ThunderClan, RiverClan, WindClan, and ShadowClan. A disaster caused all the Clans to merge together (which was temporarily, they thought; but turned out not to be) in order to survive. They were chased out of their territory by a huge group of rogues and wild cats, hundreds of them. Forced to escape and move away, the Clans eventually settled in a forest by a waterfall. As gener-
ations passed and the Clans started to merge fully together
as one, they renamed themselves MistClan in honour of the
waterfall, because the cats were all different - they origin-
ated from all four Clans.

Unique Skills;; As apprentices, MistClan cats are taught how to fish and hunt in the forest. They are generally agile cats, but aren't as fast when running straight-out on a flat, open space, like the moors. They have quick reflexes for scooping their paw in the water in order to catch fish, and to react fast when prey turns quickly in the forest. Their legs are packed with muscles to perform a powerful forwards leap or for pushing themselves up a tree quickly.

Reputation/Personality: They are known for not letting many outsiders join the Clan and having a disliking towards kittypets especially. However, they are not quick to attack and tend to prefer having a conversation with an intruder first, before they start a battle.

Average Clan Member: The average Clan member has a smaller body build and thin- to medium-length fur. The small body build is to make them agile for running through the forest, and their shorter fur is so when they are swimming, it doesn't drag them down as much. Although the Clan has evolved over the years, there are still many different pelt colours seen.

Important Notes: Nothing really ~

And it's all color coded and organized! Wonderful, thank you. I love it when people do that.

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Reasoning: In some areas of the world, forests can be regularly misty, so I think it could apply to the rest of the territory if you cared to extend it. The Clan does have a lot of rivers to it, though, so if you choose to have the mist in only that particular location, you could name it instead for the rivers.
Alternative Name: StreamClan/CreekClan. Unless the rest of the territory is regularly misty, I'd go with one of these names.

Clan Rating: 9/10
Clan Reasoning: While the Clans merging story is common, this present Clan in general seems to be very nice! I do ask, though, exactly how long ago the Clans merged, because generations evolve fairly quickly to their habitat (resulting in certain colors being more prominent, or builds). Other than that, I don't think there are any glaring issues.
Suggestions: None, except to figure out how long it was that the cats conjoined and time their coat and build changes accordingly.

[Morningpaw11]

Ahaha, thanks! xD I like coding, it's fun! Anyway, yeah, the Clans merging is pretty common. Sadly I can't think of anything better, haha. They have been evolving for quite a while, enough to change the thickness of their pelt a bit and the body builds, but the fur colour hasn't really evolved. Later, I might have it that the pelts are mainly grey or brown, because I think that might fit in with the forest better, and grey fits in with the river. ^^

[Arcaii]

Ahaha, thanks! xD I like coding, it's fun! Anyway, yeah, the Clans merging is pretty common. Sadly I can't think of anything better, haha. They have been evolving for quite a while, enough to change the thickness of their pelt a bit and the body builds, but the fur colour hasn't really evolved. Later, I might have it that the pelts are mainly grey or brown, because I think that might fit in with the forest better, and grey fits in with the river. ^^

Ah, don't worry too badly! Even the most tired of cliches can usually be salvaged if done well. The future pelt colors sounds perfectly fine to me, so I like that.

If you do want to think of something different, you could have a few Clan cats escape a pretty gnarly situation (the Clans fighting way too often, or a sickness that was going around) and recruit a series of loners and rogues to create a new one!

[Morningpaw11]

That could be a good idea c: I had a roleplay called MistClan with basically that information, but it died recently. I may remake it in the future, I dunno, but if I do, your idea sounds pretty cool!

[Arcaii]

I hope the next MistClan succeeds. Let me know how it goes if you do indeed make it!

[.kestral]

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I made a stoneclan.

[Arcaii]

Excellent! I'll check it out.