Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[corrosive_limes]

So I thought of a new cat thay im quite proud of X3

His name is Slatestorm. He is dark gray with gray eyes. Hes a member of Thunderclan and is pretty indifferent, quite like a rock. He has a short temper, but knows how to do things.

[Arcaii]

Sorry, everyone, I'm currently applying for college, so I'm going to have to put a pause on reviewing and answering your questions! Please bear with me.

[Arcaii]

Alright, finished that mess. I'll get to reviewing right away!

[Arcaii]

So I thought of a new cat thay im quite proud of X3

His name is Slatestorm. He is dark gray with gray eyes. Hes a member of Thunderclan and is pretty indifferent, quite like a rock. He has a short temper, but knows how to do things.

I'd like to do a more thorough review of him to try and offer some help with him. Would you mind sending in a review sheet?

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:
Large and gold would be the first words that come to mind. His pelt, while being slightly ginger looks golden in the light, that combined with his size can often make him look like the fabled lion of legend. His eyes are dark blue.
Name:
Lionstep
Gender:
Male
Clan:
Waterclan
Rank:
Warrior
Personality/Skills:
Surprisingly graceful, Lionstep rapidly grew to become the biggest cat in the clan. He is one of there best land hunters as his large paws leave large shadows while fishing. He can fish, but often chooses to travel into the woods to bring back variety, especially for nursing queens who can often desire something new. He is a massive softy except when in battle. He loves being used as a climbing frame by kits, he loves showing apprentices new ways to fight or to hunt. Cats can be deterred by his size but he takes it in his stride, showing them that his appearance means little.
Important Notes:
As mentioned, he is one of the few cats that doesn't really fish. His large paws allow him to travel the land almost silently as he can spread his weight and doesn't splash in the puddles.

I don't know if you will ever read my fanfic, but I have a massive plan for this dude that most people won't like.

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: I'm curious as to whether he's one of the best hunters in general, regardless of his chosen area, of if he's just one of the best land hunters (not saying much since they mostly rely on fish). If that's so, his suffix should be changed to -whisker. But otherwise, this name fits him perfectly!
Alternative Name: Lionwhisker - only if his hunting is heralded as one of the best in general. Otherwise, keep Lionstep.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: You're rollin' it with the great characters today! I'm sure I have some gold stickers lying around somewhere.

[.kestral]

Gold sticker! Woo!

And he's not one of the best hunters, his fishing skills sets him back and that's there main food. On land he is stealthy but can't be as fast as he would want to be. So he isn't one of the best

[Arcaii]

Gold sticker! Woo!

And he's not one of the best hunters, his fishing skills sets him back and that's there main food. On land he is stealthy but can't be as fast as he would want to be. So he isn't one of the best

Alright! -step fits him perfectly. Change my review number to 10/10, then. Confetti and balloons all around, we have a 20/20 cat!

[.kestral]

Gold sticker! Woo!

And he's not one of the best hunters, his fishing skills sets him back and that's there main food. On land he is stealthy but can't be as fast as he would want to be. So he isn't one of the best

Alright! -step fits him perfectly. Change my review number to 10/10, then. Confetti and balloons all around, we have a 20/20 cat!

Yeah! Woo I'm so happy now!

[Arcaii]

Name: Hailstorm
Gender: Tom
Clan: Lightclan
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: Hailstorm is a large tom with broad shoulders that help him run really fast. He is also very good at jumping.
Important Notes: His ancestors we're Skyclan warriors.

Name Rating: 6/10
Name Type: Semi-traditional
Name Reasoning: Hail- is used for an all grey tabby. He's white with a few grey patches, so it won't work.
I'm not sure of his personality, but if he's a cranky, snappy cat, then -storm's just fine.
Alternative Name: Lightstorm/Comfreystorm. Both prefixes describe a white cat (Comfrey has the bonus of also applying to grey cats). If he isn't sour enough to be a -storm cat, just make it -pelt or -fur.

Character Rating: ?/10
Character Reasoning: I don't have much of his personality, so I can't do much of a review. I'd theorize, but at the moment I'm juggling a few different things, so do forgive me for not rambling, haha.

[Arcaii]

Bump.