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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Feb 03, 2014 3:18 am

.kestral wrote:Your Waterclan one made me very happy :)

Clan Name:
Rockclan
Territory:
Rocky, hilly, rough. The territory is littered with large, sharp rocks, it often has holes or hollows hidden under trees and bushes making it treacherous for anyone who doesn't know the land. The majority of the territory is under the trees, with a few small streams that create small rocky overhangs. The streams run down and combine into one of Waterclans rivers. The camp is well hidden, inside a clearing, roots and large pieces of slate make up most of the dens, moss, lichen and grass hang down to obscure the entrances making the camp hard to spot.
Notable History:
They began in the same way as Waterclan and Airclan. Cats who were sick of the city cats rule abandoned there homes and moved to the woods. Starclan led them to there home and Rockclan was born.
Unique Skills:
Art of disguise. Rockclan cats often mask themselves with mud, hiding there fur and there scent, become almost invisible in there home. There paw pads are firm, perfect for exploring there rocky, dangerous home. Years of survival have allowed them to adapt to the dangers and every apprentice learns the safest, or fastest routes through the trees. They are taught never to travel alone and instead hunt and fight in pairs.
Reputation/Personality:
They are the more volatile clan, they know many would be hesitant to step onto there territory. They know that Airclan and Waterclan cats won't make it to the camp without at least one cat being hurt, or without being spotted. This allowed them to take more risks and they are most likely to push for territory. Butt he city cats, again are there biggest worry.
Average Clan Member:
The cats are often very largely built, able to push there way through things to get into tunnels others don't know exists. There pelt colours vary but are often darker, browns and blacks with tabby being the most common. They often have very firm pawpads, allowing them to travel through there lands without worrying about cutting there selves on the rocks.
Important Notes:
None.


Name Rating: 9/10
Name Reasoning: The name describes their home very well. I think I'll just suggest some more specific names, but if you wanted to keep RockClan, I wouldn't stop you.
Alternative Name: RubbleClan/StoneClan. (As a side note, I have a rocky-territory Clan named RubbleClan, myself!)

Clan Rating: 10/10
Clan Reasoning: This is a really good Clan! I like that they have a system for sneaking and fighting in pairs, which would fit a Clan with an open area (where falcons or snakes could come by and attack them).
Suggestions: None!
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Mon Feb 03, 2014 3:20 am

I like Rubbleclan, is it an rp or story clan?

And I will have one more for you in a bit :p
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Feb 03, 2014 3:25 am

RubbleClan's with three other Clans (MarshClan, VineClan, ValleyClan) in an Rp between myself and a Skype friend.

Do send another! I'm wagering it'll be related to Rock and Water, right?
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Mon Feb 03, 2014 3:55 am

You would be right.

Clan Name:
Airclan
Territory:
Unlike the other two clans the relationship between Airclans name and there territory may not be clear. But once you meet the cats it becomes obvious. Airclans territory is full of very thick trees, the ground in overrun with brambles, bushes, grass and pools of water, leaving very little clear ground. The tree canopy shelters there whole territory, making it dark, and dim. There camp is in a set of trees that are extremely close together, the cats uses branches and other things from the forest to make these trees there home. If you walked below there camp you would merely see a thick tree canopy above you and would never know your enemies were there.
Notable History:
Same as the other two clans.
Unique Skills:
Tree skills, these cats rarely set foot on the ground, they live on birds and squirrels, only landing on the floor when a mouse or vole is spotted. They have adapted to be able to live there life up here, kits and young cats learn early on where it is safe to step, and are always followed by two warriors on there first few climbs from there treetop home.
Reputation/Personality:
The silent clan, rarely seen on patrols, rarely spotted at borders. They stick to what they know, using the night and the sunrise or sunset to hide themselves.
Average Clan Member:
Sleek, thin and small. They are often seen as weak by the other two clans but there light weight allows them to balance on the thinnest of branches while they stalk prey, or intruders. They have all pelt colours, due to being higher than most enemies would look.
Important Notes:
They neighbour the other two.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Feb 03, 2014 4:22 am

.kestral wrote:You would be right.

Clan Name:
Airclan
Territory:
Unlike the other two clans the relationship between Airclans name and there territory may not be clear. But once you meet the cats it becomes obvious. Airclans territory is full of very thick trees, the ground in overrun with brambles, bushes, grass and pools of water, leaving very little clear ground. The tree canopy shelters there whole territory, making it dark, and dim. There camp is in a set of trees that are extremely close together, the cats uses branches and other things from the forest to make these trees there home. If you walked below there camp you would merely see a thick tree canopy above you and would never know your enemies were there.
Notable History:
Same as the other two clans.
Unique Skills:
Tree skills, these cats rarely set foot on the ground, they live on birds and squirrels, only landing on the floor when a mouse or vole is spotted. They have adapted to be able to live there life up here, kits and young cats learn early on where it is safe to step, and are always followed by two warriors on there first few climbs from there treetop home.
Reputation/Personality:
The silent clan, rarely seen on patrols, rarely spotted at borders. They stick to what they know, using the night and the sunrise or sunset to hide themselves.
Average Clan Member:
Sleek, thin and small. They are often seen as weak by the other two clans but there light weight allows them to balance on the thinnest of branches while they stalk prey, or intruders. They have all pelt colours, due to being higher than most enemies would look.
Important Notes:
They neighbour the other two.


Name Rating: 4/10
Name Reasoning: They kind of have the opposite of and AirClan area - they're covered by trees! While I do get what you're saying (they spend almost all their time up in the air), they ought to be named for the plant life surrounding them.
Alternative Name: ForestClan/ThicketClan. Thickets are a little small, but I think you could make it work if you tried.

Clan Rating: 8/10
Clan Reasoning: The only issue I'd think I have is the correlation between their coat colors and their surroundings. Cats who live in the trees are more likely to have specific coloring.
Suggestions: Make them have a regular coat color, like tabbies, brown to black, to fit in with their night activity and surroundings.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Mon Feb 03, 2014 4:23 am

Okay, will keep that in mind. :) They are the least developed of the three currently. Just cause I haven't hit a chapter with them yet.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Feb 03, 2014 4:51 am

I see! I'd develop them a little more before you write.

Also, please excuse any pauses, I'm currently applying for college.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby .kestral » Mon Feb 03, 2014 4:52 am

Arcaii wrote:I see! I'd develop them a little more before you write.

Also, please excuse any pauses, I'm currently applying for college.


Yeah, I have a chapter and a half before we even look at them. The name may change, but more likely the camp idea will stay and there general territory will shift a little.
I only have them in woods as well as based on what I see when I'm out, woods don't suddenly become moorland like it seems to in the books. But I might have part of there land quite woody, with the majority being open.
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Re: Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer

Postby Arcaii » Mon Feb 03, 2014 5:14 am

.kestral wrote:Yeah, I have a chapter and a half before we even look at them. The name may change, but more likely the camp idea will stay and there general territory will shift a little.
I only have them in woods as well as based on what I see when I'm out, woods don't suddenly become moorland like it seems to in the books. But I might have part of there land quite woody, with the majority being open.


Sounds good. If they have a mostly moory territory, I'd call them MoorClan or something similar.
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