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Suggestions? by `Hypnotic

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Suggestions?

Postby `Hypnotic » Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:44 am

Can anyone give me suggestions?I really want to get better.
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Re: Suggestions?

Postby Bruja » Tue Sep 21, 2010 7:46 am

The eye being lower would help. As well as giving it a mane. Possibly make the facial marks less apparent?
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Re: Suggestions?

Postby `Hypnotic » Tue Sep 21, 2010 8:17 am

Better?
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Re: Suggestions?

Postby Bruja » Tue Sep 21, 2010 8:46 am

Yes, it is better. Here, take a look at this picture of mine. Maybe it will give you some ideas when it comes to conformation. viewtopic.php?f=30&t=272765
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Re: Suggestions?

Postby Scoobs » Tue Sep 21, 2010 8:50 am

Actually, instead of basing it off of someone else's drawing, try looking at a photo of a horse. It's your best bet when it comes to realism ^^

I like the texture in the mane (:
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Re: Suggestions?

Postby `Hypnotic » Wed Sep 22, 2010 8:36 am

Really? Thanks I learned a little trick for that from a manupulting friend. Work your way up in colors and then smudge it,or you could do it the better way but I don't know how without my tablet,plus it turns out terrible when I do it. I'll grab one of my horse illustrated magizines and post another soon as I get more time. (more like tonight)
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Re: Suggestions?

Postby `Hypnotic » Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:44 pm

I'm satisifed with my other one! I'm sooo happy that it's looking better than ever! :D
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