Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[meowingtons]

Name: Shadepelt
Gender: Tom
Clan: Scarletclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Kind, warm-hearted to the clan. Leader-like. Quick-witted, doesn't get into arguments easily. He is a skilled climber.
Important Notes: None

[qiripan]

Hello! =D
Image/Description: Black cat with a white paw and belly. Yellowish-Gold eyes.
Name: Nightwing
Gender: Female
Clan: JourneyClan
Rank: Deputy
Personality/Skills: Ambitious and a good fighter.
Important Notes: She has a scar across where her left eye would have been.
(I might have posted this before, I forgot :3)

Hello to you too! No, I haven't seen this character before. Trust me, I'd remember her!

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Type: Canonical/Batman
Name Reasoning: Night- fits her just fine. She is a black cat, even with some white markings. Her suffix, -wing, doesn't really work due to the fact that cats don't have wings, and if you wanted to call her fast (-foot) or an agile climber (-tail) in a fancier way, it'd still be pretty useless.
However, I'm not very interested in her suffix. I'm interested in that injury of hers. This is the first cat on this thread that I've gotten that I think deserves a name-change alluding to an old scar, and I'll explain why.
Name-changes, in the traditional warriors-verse, are used to describe an injury that, even when it heals, is a detriment or disability to the cat that owns it. Take, for example, a cat named Yellowpaw who broke her jaw as an apprentice. She may heal, of course, but her jaw will always look off and she may have trouble speaking or eating. Thus, she's renamed Brokenpaw, and when she becomes a warrior, she is named Brokenjaw. She could also be renamed when she becomes a warrior instead of being renamed right away, so Yellowpaw would become Brokenjaw.
It's an unusual process, and at first glance mean, but the purpose of a name like this is honorable. The leader is calling attention to a missing foot or torn off ears and proudly saying, "We have a warrior in out midst who should have died from this injury, and they won't be able to do as well as they could anymore, but they're still with us and they're strong enough to live until they're in the elder's den." While Bluestar named Brightheart Lostface as a curse to StarClan, it's an accurate name, and she should have kept it.
And your cat's not only survived this, but she's become the deputy! I think she'd have earned this name by now.
Alternative Name: Losteye/One-eye, for the reasons above. If she had lost her eye after becoming a warrior, I would call her Nightclaw, -claw for her fighting skills.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: You've given this cat a good trait for any deputy to have, which is ambition. I think that you should give her a little more than that, though. Does she have any cats she's interested in? Does she hate kits and avoid them at all costs? Does she have a flair for puns and have a record of wheeling them off until the leader threatens to rank her down to apprentice again? Maybe during leaf-bare she gets a headache, and will complain of phantom pains to the medicine cat, who has to patiently explain to her that some cats get odd feelings in old wounds when storms come around. Perhaps she can be immature sometimes, and finds some sort of kinship with apprentices.

Thank you! And actually, she lost her left eye when she just became a warrior. I made a mini comic about it, hur hur Bye! =D

[Keriae]

Name: Eaglestrike
Gender: Male
Image/Description: A brown tabby tom with gold eyes. He has many scars, notably his shredded ear, a long scar on his left flank, a small scar on the side of his muzzle and a thin scar along his belly. Currently I am using this picture in his forms.
Clan: In roleplay, he's in whatever Clan I join xD If he was in the books, he'd probably be in either ThunderClan or ShadowClan.
Rank: Senior warrior/deputy.
Personality/Skills: A serious, no nonsense tom with a sharp tongue, witty mind and a rather aggressive attitude, Eaglestrike walks with a gait that demands respect and almost causes fear. He's quick to judge and even quicker to jump into battle with unsheathed claws and bared teeth, but he is unmistakably loyal and would risk his life for any cat within the Clan, no matter if they be the tiniest scrap of fur or the slowest and deafest elder. A smart mind, he'll think up plans that use the terrain to the full or weaken the enemy with waves of attacks. Eaglestrike certainly doesn't seem the kindest tom, with a rough, rugged exterior that is hard to break through, but he is undeniably a strong warrior and a good mentor. Stubborn he may be, not giving up an argument without good reason and full of pride that won't let him stand down from a fight but it can't be denied that Eaglestrike is a good warrior, although it may take some time to gain his trust.
Important Notes: He's an excellent fighter and a powerful hunter, mostly due to his strength, although it does mean he isn't as fast as some of the smaller, more agile cats. He gained his suffix for the way he kills his prey (and sometimes attacks) with downward strokes of his huge paws, sometimes with surprise and ambush from behind, if the need arises, although he prefers to attack head-on, as attacking from behind could be classed as cowardice.

[beauty thief.]

Image/Description: Click! <3
Name: Sunstar
Gender: Female
Clan: EagleClan
Rank: Leader
Personality/Skills: Sunstar is very hard to describe. She's tough, and hard to get to, mean and cold at first. But as you get to know her, she seems to soften a bit and become more warm. She's just emotionally unstable due to her past, and tends to have cases of anxiety at times. She's wise once you get to know her, and she's very motherly to her clan, but she will lie about her feelings.
Important Notes: She's decently old, 46 moons, yet is still a great fighter in her day <3

[border collies.]

Image/Description:
Name: Blackheart
Gender: She-cat
Clan: PineClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Serious but can be funny. She would die for Laurelpaw though.
Important Notes: See Laurelpaw's post....

Image/Description:
Name: Birdpaw
Gender: She-cat
Clan: MapleClan
Rank: Apprentice
Personality/Skills: She is aggressive and smart but she will try and attack her clanmates if they underestimate her or tease her. She is a great fighter, and no cat could doubt it. But she is a terrible hunter, and she can barely catch a mouse.
Important Notes: Her mom, Firestrike is her only kin alive as of now. Her father, Nutclaw, died from a monster and her littermates died when they were born.

Image/Description:
Name: Firestrike
Gender: She-cat
Clan: MapleClan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Rough, and hates her daughter. She is like this because her mate died. She loves to fight and is very good at it.
Important Notes: See Birdpaw

[Arcaii]

Man, they're just crawlin' out the floorboards today! I'll get started.

[Arcaii]

Name: Shadepelt
Gender: Tom
Clan: Scarletclan
Rank: Warrior
Personality/Skills: Kind, warm-hearted to the clan. Leader-like. Quick-witted, doesn't get into arguments easily. He is a skilled climber.
Important Notes: None

Name Rating: 9/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: This name is actually really good! I can't see anything wrong with it. My suggestion, though, is to change his suffix, because, as you said, he's a skilled climber, but otherwise this name is excellent!
Alternative Name: Shadetail. -tail indicates a cat who's good at climbing.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: This is a very good cat in general. He has a good set of traits that, while not enough to go on for paragraphs, is enough to fuel his interactions with others and bring out those parts of him. Well done!

[Arcaii]

Name: Eaglestrike
Gender: Male
Image/Description: A brown tabby tom with gold eyes. He has many scars, notably his shredded ear, a long scar on his left flank, a small scar on the side of his muzzle and a thin scar along his belly. Currently I am using this picture in his forms.
Clan: In roleplay, he's in whatever Clan I join xD If he was in the books, he'd probably be in either ThunderClan or ShadowClan.
Rank: Senior warrior/deputy.
Personality/Skills: A serious, no nonsense tom with a sharp tongue, witty mind and a rather aggressive attitude, Eaglestrike walks with a gait that demands respect and almost causes fear. He's quick to judge and even quicker to jump into battle with unsheathed claws and bared teeth, but he is unmistakably loyal and would risk his life for any cat within the Clan, no matter if they be the tiniest scrap of fur or the slowest and deafest elder. A smart mind, he'll think up plans that use the terrain to the full or weaken the enemy with waves of attacks. Eaglestrike certainly doesn't seem the kindest tom, with a rough, rugged exterior that is hard to break through, but he is undeniably a strong warrior and a good mentor. Stubborn he may be, not giving up an argument without good reason and full of pride that won't let him stand down from a fight but it can't be denied that Eaglestrike is a good warrior, although it may take some time to gain his trust.
Important Notes: He's an excellent fighter and a powerful hunter, mostly due to his strength, although it does mean he isn't as fast as some of the smaller, more agile cats. He gained his suffix for the way he kills his prey (and sometimes attacks) with downward strokes of his huge paws, sometimes with surprise and ambush from behind, if the need arises, although he prefers to attack head-on, as attacking from behind could be classed as cowardice.

Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Semi-traditional
Name Reasoning: Eagle- is a very good prefix for him (as a side note, the picture looks pretty dark, but you did describe him as a brown cat, so it's fine). I'm picturing a very large brown cat, and that's a great prefix for him.
I do understand why you'd like to keep the -strike (to be honest, if it was traditional, I'd tell you to keep it), but it falls short for a few reasons. This cat is a fantastic fighter and a great hunter, and yet he was only named for a certain move he uses on prey. That not only narrows him down to one particular move, but if word got around that he uses that, cats could easily figure out ways to avoid it in battle. Along with that, what -strike tries to accomplish is already taken care of by -claw and -fang.
Alternative Name: Eaglefang. His prefix is just fine, and -fang implies his skills in hunting and fighting.

Character Rating: 10/10
Character Reasoning: He certainly does sound like a scary cat, and not just because of the way he walks. He's a very good cat to have in a Clan, though hopefully there's usually someone around to keep him in check during interactions with strangers. I've got no critique here!

[Morningpaw11]

Could I do another cat? I posted one yesterday so yeah ^^ If you say yes, I'll edit this post with my second cat c:

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: Click! <3
Name: Sunstar
Gender: Female
Clan: EagleClan
Rank: Leader
Personality/Skills: Sunstar is very hard to describe. She's tough, and hard to get to, mean and cold at first. But as you get to know her, she seems to soften a bit and become more warm. She's just emotionally unstable due to her past, and tends to have cases of anxiety at times. She's wise once you get to know her, and she's very motherly to her clan, but she will lie about her feelings.
Important Notes: She's decently old, 46 moons, yet is still a great fighter in her day <3

Name Rating: 3/10
Name Type: Canonical/Lyrical
Name Reasoning: Sun- is a weird prefix, and generally not recommended. The reasons being that, coupled with -star, it's pretty redundant (the sun is a star, after all); the sun is a sacred thing to the warriors, and like the moon and stars you wouldn't name a cat after that; and finally, the sun may be yellow-orange in our eyes, due to our symbolism of it and the general nature of the star from a distance, but cats wouldn't really know about that. Go outside, if you'd like, and look right up at the sun. It's not yellow, is it? It's a blinding white.
Please don't actually go outside and stare into the sun, that's very bad for your eyes.
I'm not sure of her warrior suffix, so I don't think I have to go into that. I'll still recommend one, of course.
Alternative Name: Lionclaw/Heatherclaw. Both are for a slightly lighter ginger cat. The suffix -claw is for her fighting skills (which I imagine she has, from your description), but as a leader she still is a -star.
As a side note, I see a lot of people having problems with naming their she-cats names like Badger-, Lion-, or Tiger-, or their male cats names like Swan-, Daisy-, or Cherry-. Please keep in mind that cats do not follow the gender roles we humans do - the she-cats are treated like toms, except that they can have kittens. That is the only difference in the warrior world. They can be named whatever you want to name them.

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: Her traits seem to be a little muddied - she's warm and cold, unstable and motherly, mean and wise. I would erase a few of those traits and keep others. For example, she could be a rather distant leader, seemingly above it all with knowledge from her ancestors, appearing almost like a cat from StarClan itself (it's always been a theory of mine that the nine lives leaders receives aren't lives at all, they're just memories of the past; I'll probably get more in-depth with that if prompted, but now's not the time), and yet her Clan can sense without a doubt that she looks upon them all like her children. She would show this in subtle ways, but it would come out full-fledged when a member of her Clan (particularly the younger ones) are threatened or bullied.