Warrior Cats Clan and Territory Reviewer (ENDED)

[Arcaii]

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[Arcaii]

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[noisecollective]

Clan Name: AmberClan, for the shades of the leaves in the fall.
Territory:
MoonTree:

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This is where AmberClan communicates with Starclan.
Stream:

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This is where AmberClan cats fish.
Meadow:

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This is a source of prey(rabbits), but brings the danger of dogs.
Forest:

This is the home of AmberClan's camp and is the source of most of their prey. The leaves turn a beautiful color in the fall, thus the clan 's name.
Notable History: There was once one other clan, Cloudclan, that owned the meadow and used the stream as a border. They were driven out as leaf-bare became unbearably harsh. Since then, the current leader Jaystar has trained AmberClan cats to survive the harsh leaf-bare conditions.
Unique Skills: AmberClan cats blend in very well with the trees in leaf-fall, for the generations have given the majority of cats a reddish or brown fur color. They are also able and trained to hunt a large variety of prey, including fish, rabbits, and small woodland creatures.
Reputation/Personality: When AmberClan shared a border with Cloudclan, they tried to be positive and friendly. But when leaf-bare came, conditions were harsh and they were forced to drive them out.
Average Clan Member: The average clan member varies, though must are bulky and strong, a few are sleek and fast. Their pelts majority come in a reddish or brown color. They have (mostly) thick and long fur.
Important Notes: The first leader of AmberClan was not Amberstar, but Kestrelstar.

[Arcaii]

Clan Name: AmberClan, for the shades of the leaves in the fall.
Territory:
MoonTree:

images-1.jpeg

This is where AmberClan communicates with Starclan.
Stream:

images-2.jpeg

This is where AmberClan cats fish.
Meadow:

images-3.jpeg

This is a source of prey(rabbits), but brings the danger of dogs.
Forest:

This is the home of AmberClan's camp and is the source of most of their prey. The leaves turn a beautiful color in the fall, thus the clan 's name.
Notable History: There was once one other clan, Cloudclan, that owned the meadow and used the stream as a border. They were driven out as leaf-bare became unbearably harsh. Since then, the current leader Jaystar has trained AmberClan cats to survive the harsh leaf-bare conditions.
Unique Skills: AmberClan cats blend in very well with the trees in leaf-fall, for the generations have given the majority of cats a reddish or brown fur color. They are also able and trained to hunt a large variety of prey, including fish, rabbits, and small woodland creatures.
Reputation/Personality: When AmberClan shared a border with Cloudclan, they tried to be positive and friendly. But when leaf-bare came, conditions were harsh and they were forced to drive them out.
Average Clan Member: The average clan member varies, though must are bulky and strong, a few are sleek and fast. Their pelts majority come in a reddish or brown color. They have (mostly) thick and long fur.
Important Notes: The first leader of AmberClan was not Amberstar, but Kestrelstar.

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Reasoning: Amber-, while a nice color name, doesn't quite fit in here. Amber is usually golden-yellow, and rarely found where these cats would most likely be living, as it is found in rocks and is created from ancient resin from trees. Other than that, there isn't really much to say here!
Alternative Name: MapleClan. You'll see why below!

Clan Rating: 8/10
Clan Reasoning: Overall, I appreciate that these cats have a regular system to their life. The Clan's love of leaf-fall could fit in certain locations, but they're named for one specific part of the year. The rest of the year is green, or white, or yellow. This could be explained away with the introduction of maple trees. Red maple trees stay red-orange for a large part of the year, and a Clan could certainly live in an area where they're popular.
Suggestions: Research a little on where Maple trees can be found, and move the Clan to an area like that. There isn't much more to critique on - this Clan's pretty good!

[noisecollective]

Clan Name: AmberClan, for the shades of the leaves in the fall.
Territory:
MoonTree:

images-1.jpeg

This is where AmberClan communicates with Starclan.
Stream:

images-2.jpeg

This is where AmberClan cats fish.
Meadow:

images-3.jpeg

This is a source of prey(rabbits), but brings the danger of dogs.
Forest:

This is the home of AmberClan's camp and is the source of most of their prey. The leaves turn a beautiful color in the fall, thus the clan 's name.
Notable History: There was once one other clan, Cloudclan, that owned the meadow and used the stream as a border. They were driven out as leaf-bare became unbearably harsh. Since then, the current leader Jaystar has trained AmberClan cats to survive the harsh leaf-bare conditions.
Unique Skills: AmberClan cats blend in very well with the trees in leaf-fall, for the generations have given the majority of cats a reddish or brown fur color. They are also able and trained to hunt a large variety of prey, including fish, rabbits, and small woodland creatures.
Reputation/Personality: When AmberClan shared a border with Cloudclan, they tried to be positive and friendly. But when leaf-bare came, conditions were harsh and they were forced to drive them out.
Average Clan Member: The average clan member varies, though must are bulky and strong, a few are sleek and fast. Their pelts majority come in a reddish or brown color. They have (mostly) thick and long fur.
Important Notes: The first leader of AmberClan was not Amberstar, but Kestrelstar.

Name Rating: 7/10
Name Reasoning: Amber-, while a nice color name, doesn't quite fit in here. Amber is usually golden-yellow, and rarely found where these cats would most likely be living, as it is found in rocks and is created from ancient resin from trees. Other than that, there isn't really much to say here!
Alternative Name: MapleClan. You'll see why below!

Clan Rating: 8/10
Clan Reasoning: Overall, I appreciate that these cats have a regular system to their life. The Clan's love of leaf-fall could fit in certain locations, but they're named for one specific part of the year. The rest of the year is green, or white, or yellow. This could be explained away with the introduction of maple trees. Red maple trees stay red-orange for a large part of the year, and a Clan could certainly live in an area where they're popular.
Suggestions: Research a little on where Maple trees can be found, and move the Clan to an area like that. There isn't much more to critique on - this Clan's pretty good!

(Thank you! I will definitely follow your suggestions! I know this is asking a little much, but do you think this would make a good clan in a roleplay?)

[Arcaii]

I think it would be a fantastic Clan! It's very well thought out, and all that really needs work is the territory. I'd join, for sure.

[noisecollective]

Thank you for the advice, I made a clan if you would like to join: Here

[meowingtons]

Clan Name:
Scarletclan
Territory:
The Forest is their hunting grounds. The forest is their territory.


A River runs through the territory


A Herb Garden is in the south-east part of the territory. Herbs grow there. It is pretty small and many different herbs grow there.

Notable History:
A rouge gang lived near the clans. When the clans left to go to the lake, the gang took over their territory. Cats disliked the territories combined, like where the moonstone was (currently a hunting ground for the moor) and where the marsh was. Many cats became enemies with other cats from the gang. The gang split in two; one side took the forest and the other took the moor. Rouges claimed the marsh and the river. The gangs became clans, the forest cats became Scarletclan, the moor became Wolfclan, the river became Creekclan and the marsh became Shadeclan.
Unique Skills:
Skilled climbers, great at hiding in the undergrowth
Reputation/Personality:
They are the Thunderclan of clans. They are the clan that watches out for other cats, taking loners and kittypets in. Most clans dislike them because of that. Scarletclan doesn't get into arguments or battles easily.
Average Clan Member:
They are swift and normally small and have thin fur. They have strong legs and long claws for climbing trees.
Important Notes:
None

[border collies.]

Clan Name: IceClan
Territory:

This is there main territory in Leaf-Bare:



This is it in Green-leaf:




Important Notes:
It is a cold part of the world, so it is cold almost all year.

[Arcaii]

Thank you for the advice, I made a clan if you would like to join: Here

Ah, thanks for the link! I'll sign up shortly.