The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[.Lola]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Coco Llama
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=150745&start=2800
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: I don't know...
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Here or PM, whichever is easier for you (I would probably get it by PM quicker)

[iPawki]

I would like some critique please!
Username: ~ Daydreamer ~
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=4430#p6601624
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN
Deadline for your form: Not quite sure, but very soon.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM, my forms not quite finished yet, but I'd like critique for now.

[corgie]

I would like some critique please!
Username:SweetCorgi
Link to your form:Click
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Goennec
Deadline for your form: Thursday*Sept.16th.2010"
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Pm Perfered but anything is fine :{

[Ekio]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Ekio
Link to your form: Here
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TAN
Deadline for your form: Sept 25
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM would be great thanks

[TheCalicoTabby]

I would like some critique please!
Username: TheCalicoTabby
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=150745&p=6610296#p6610296
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: Well, actually I already won the character. ^^; I just want some critique on my writing anyways.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either. =3

[azalea]

I would like some critique please!
Username: azalea
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=214724&start=170
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Pound of Hope
Deadline for your form: Next week, but I'd like critique ASAP, since I have tough competition
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Whichever

[keydemon]

azalea and Ekio. I will PM you both soon with critiques... Just give me some time. :3

[tanner]

I would like some critique please!
Username: tanner
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=150745&start=2990#p6762274
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: dont know, brobably 4-5 days.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? pm please
its a work in progress, but i'd like critique on what's written so far please.

[amandapj]

I would like some critique please!
Username: amandapj
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=212731&p=6779736#p6779736
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Break of Dawn
Deadline for your form: I dunno, maybe a few days. XP
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?: Hmm... probably PM.

[ode-to-joy]

I would like some critique please!
Username: meri1999
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&p=6984724&hilit=Wolfgang#p6984724
Adoption Agency you are applying for: TaN
Deadline for your form: don't know, very soon.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please

(sorry for all the highlights of Wolfgang's name)