{ ＩＮＫＬＩＮＧＳ } LOCK! NEW THREAD

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Writing a new story. Chapter one is up, and I'd love some critique.

[Wolfie Lee]

Username:whitekit
What we will call you: Wes(a maximum of four.)
Will you critique other's work?:? (yes, no, or possibly.)
Links to your story if you have any:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2089121#p64773766
Anything you want us to know?:I almost published a book!

[Silent Mist]

@Wild Horses
I really like the part about her 'friend' who manipulates her. It makes it much more interesting, instead of being just another story about popular girls vs. unpopular girls. One question though, why did they kill the main character? It seems really drastic, considering the main character didn't really do anything to them. Maybe you could give them more of a motivation?

thank you(: I'm glad you like it. to be honest I haven't completely worked that out yet. I was thinking that the "friend" could get on a social media or something and post a lot about the girls on there that was bad and not true which would motivate them to attacking the newbie in fighting terms. then I I was thinking, possibly, the less popular girl could be there while the attack is happening and say stuff about the newbie getting with one of the original 6' s boyfriends which wouldn't be true. maybe they could just beat her badly that she dies, sadly.

[Wolfie Lee]

Username:whitekit
What we will call you: Wes(a maximum of four.)
Will you critique other's work?:? (yes, no, or possibly.)
Links to your story if you have any:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2089121#p64773766
Anything you want us to know?:I almost published a book!

Does that mean I am accepted? And when do I get to be in the membership?

[Rolly-chan]

Okay, so I was debating with myself about this... and am still not entirely sure (mostly because I'm so shy *lol*), but I think I really would like some help with my Frozen fanfiction I'm planning right now (some plot doctoring and helping where I'm stuck). I think I'll also need a beta reader once I start writing it.
So, if anyone is willing (preferably a native English speaker and good with spelling, grammar and nuances, because I'm not a native), I'd reaaally appreciate the help! Feel free to send me a PM :3

[Wind Frost]

OMG GUYS! HELP! I try to go on the oekaki, I have trusted java, but it says that I haven't DOES ANYPONY KNOW WHAT IS HAPPENING??

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I don't know how to help you there. :s

Oh! I have the second part of my Frozen fanfiction out. I would really, really love some critique on it!

Clicky <3

[Zalia]

Okay, so I was debating with myself about this... and am still not entirely sure (mostly because I'm so shy *lol*), but I think I really would like some help with my Frozen fanfiction I'm planning right now (some plot doctoring and helping where I'm stuck). I think I'll also need a beta reader once I start writing it.
So, if anyone is willing (preferably a native English speaker and good with spelling, grammar and nuances, because I'm not a native), I'd reaaally appreciate the help! Feel free to send me a PM :3

I can help you with that if you would like?

[Silverhart]

Okay, so I was debating with myself about this... and am still not entirely sure (mostly because I'm so shy *lol*), but I think I really would like some help with my Frozen fanfiction I'm planning right now (some plot doctoring and helping where I'm stuck). I think I'll also need a beta reader once I start writing it.
So, if anyone is willing (preferably a native English speaker and good with spelling, grammar and nuances, because I'm not a native), I'd reaaally appreciate the help! Feel free to send me a PM :3

Oh! I have the second part of my Frozen fanfiction out. I would really, really love some critique on it!

Clicky <3

'Frozen' fanfictions! Yay! ^^ I'd love to read them. I'll see if I can muster up a critique for you Waiting for Batman - but I am still getting over a cold and am feeling awfully lazy today. XP I'll definitly read it though.

And if you need any opinions or critique on yours Rolly, you can ask me. I would love to read it.

Loving 'Frozen' fanfics so much. ^^ Don't judge me! XP

[Rolly-chan]

You're making it hard for me to choose *cough* So I'll just pm both of you xP Two separate opinions are always nice *_*

@Silverhart
Whoever should judge you? I mean, it's Frozen. Does not compute? XD