Warrior Cat Names and Characters Reviewer [CLOSED]

[Arcaii]

Man look at all these bumps

[Sapphire Shine]

Image/Description: A light silver she-cat with light violet eyes. Shes kind, smart and independent. She tends to make wishes on the Silverpelt a lot. She also makes really good wishes that are not selfish. Thats how she got her name.
Name: Wishingwell
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior
Important Notes: Her name means that she wishes well.She makes good wishes. Not like the well you throw coins in and make a wish. She was named a little late as well because her mother wasn't sure what to name her until she was about 3 weeks old when she made her first wish.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description: A light silver she-cat with light violet eyes. Shes kind, smart and independent. She tends to make wishes on the Silverpelt a lot. She also makes really good wishes that are not selfish. Thats how she got her name.
Name: Wishingwell
Gender: Female
Clan: Windclan
Rank: Warrior
Important Notes: Her name means that she wishes well.She makes good wishes. Not like the well you throw coins in and make a wish. She was named a little late as well because her mother wasn't sure what to name her until she was about 3 weeks old when she made her first wish.

Name Rating: 3/10
Name Type: Lyrical
Name Reasoning: "Wishingwell" sounds pretty - but that's not really good enough for two reasons. The first is that, no matter what the name actually implies, it will sound like the structure. Cats have no idea what a wishing well is. The second reason is that even if she was named for her well wishes and love of the stars, she wouldn't be like that at birth. Kits don't have a personality when they're born - in fact, for the first three weeks of a kitten's life, they're blind, deaf, and unable to move around more gracefully than a wobbling head and a belly-crawl. The mother will not wait that long to name them. No sane mother would, and if she tried, the Clan would have already stepped in at that point and named the kit themselves.
I think those reasons above also cover the suffix, so I won't elaborate here. If the prefix is gone, so would go the suffix.
Alternative Name: Willowcloud. The -cloud suffix is for a calm, kind, and reasonable cat who doesn't get easily bothered, and is usually optimistic. Her well-wishes could easily apply to her personality, and she could be known throughout the Clans as a cat who's very easy to befriend. (If she's not so easygoing, then just make it -fur or -pelt.)

Character Rating: 6/10
Character Reasoning: There isn't much to this molly other than "she always looks to the stars wishing for her Clanmates" - which is all well and good, and it shows that she wants the best for everyone - but wishing will not put rabbits in the fresh-kill pile. There needs to be more going for her than just that. Go into her fears and dislikes! Is she terrified of thunderstorms, and that's why she's so grateful to see the stars? What's caused her to become superstitious enough to be constantly wishing? How does the rest of her Clan feel about this? Does she alienate others with her odd behaviors? Maybe she's pious; she thinks that constantly praying for her Clan will earn her favors and a way to StarClan. Maybe she's pretentious in her faith, and confident that she'll be going to StarClan, and constantly looks down her nose at the other cats for not praying as much as her.

[pink?pink.]

Name: Mistfur
Rank: Mistfur
Gender: She-cat

[Arcaii]

Name: Mistfur
Rank: Mistfur
Gender: She-cat

Usually I would be completely confused as to what this cat looks like or who they are, but thankfully I'm in the same RP as you where you have that character. I'm going to just do the name for now.

Rate: 6/10
Type: Canonical
Reasoning: Mistfur is a completely traditional name! However, from what I'm seeing on the reference sheet, she's a pointed cat, not a light grey one (to be fair, all pointed cats are bred specifically to be that way, so I wouldn't blame anyone for not naming them right, as they don't appear in the wild). That's all I really gotta say on the name, so let's move to a suggestion!
Alternative Name: Cherryfur. The prefix Cherry- can go for a white, tortoiseshell, or dark ginger cat. Since I didn't want to repeat Sheep- as the solo suggestion, I went with a majority color prefix that also can go for darker colored cats like yours.

[Oliverstorm]

This may be a bit of a special one. ^.^

Name: Oliverstorm
Description: Oliverstorm is a long black furred tom with a patch of white fur on his chest. His eyes are an icy shade of blue.
Important Notes: Oliverstorm used to be a rogue, but he got accepted into a Clan and his name was changed to Oliverstorm.

Image/Description: (above)
Name: Oliverstorm
Gender: Male
Clan: MistClan
Rank: Warrior
Important Notes: Same as above ^.^

[Arcaii]

This may be a bit of a special one. ^.^

Name: Oliverstorm
Description: Oliverstorm is a long black furred tom with a patch of white fur on his chest. His eyes are an icy shade of blue.
Important Notes: Oliverstorm used to be a rogue, but he got accepted into a Clan and his name was changed to Oliverstorm.

Image/Description: (above)
Name: Oliverstorm
Gender: Male
Clan: MistClan
Rank: Warrior
Important Notes: Same as above ^.^

Following the SkyClan philosophy of naming, I see.

Name Rating: 4/10
Name Type: Canonical
Name Reasoning: While SkyClan may be fond of just adding a suffix to a kittypet's name, that's not really a great idea. When a loner becomes a warrior, they are giving up that side of them that lived alone or with two-legs. Bluestar even notes that "you cannot live with a paw in each world" in the very first book. A loner should not live with an attachment to their old life (Millie and Daisy should have taken a warrior's name, Erin Hunter! Firestar did when he became an apprentice!), and neither should your cat.
On the suffix, I'm not really sure of this cat's personality or skills. If he's a rather cantankerous fellow, then -storm fits him like a glove. However, when he entered the Clan, I imagine that he didn't have the training or skills of others, and wouldn't be named immediately for his personality or abilities.
Alternative Name: Starlingfur/Starlingpelt. Starling- is a good name for a cat with black fur (and the additional note of having a dash of white!), and the -fur or -pelt describes how he looks (I'd say -fur, since that would indicate a long-haired cat). If he's a sourpuss (hee), then keep the -storm.

Character Rating: 7/10
Character Reasoning: Overall, there's really nothing wrong with his origin, but there's not much else to him that you've told me. What's his likes and dislikes? Why did he join the Clan? Is he a selfish cat, and figured that safety in numbers was a great idea, without realizing that Clan life meant a commitment to a family (and not just blood-related!)? Does he still forget the Clan rules, or has he dedicated himself to learning them to be the best cat he can be? Is he regularly harassed for being an ex-loner, and does this drive him forward or cut him down?

[Sameen_of_Nohr]

Image/Description:
Name: silverheart{at the moment is a paw}
Gender: female
Clan: dawnclan{my rp clan}
Rank: warrior becomes deputy and then leader
Important Notes: she is dawnpelt/stars daughter and grayfangs sister she is easily told what to do until she thinks that it is wrong her headstrong attitude led her on an adventure away from the clan with a tom from a different clan and a rouge and together with some help from nearby cats they stopped the destruction of the moontree {my version of the moonstone/pool} her bravery and strength in her belief in justice and truth helped to make her a strong leader.

Image/Description:
Name:grayfang
Gender: male
Clan:dawnclan
Rank: warrior
Important Notes: he is a great fighter but he falls in love wit a cat off a different clan but not jus a cat from a different clan the clans medicine cat featherstream. his sister no leader at this point struggles with the decision she must make as weather to banish him or let him and his mate live with the clan. starclan showed her by taking both the clan's current medicine cat and his apprentice and featherstream helped to train the new medicine cat and they were permitted to stay.

[Arcaii]

Image/Description:
Name: silverheart{at the moment is a paw}
Gender: female
Clan: dawnclan{my rp clan}
Rank: warrior becomes deputy and then leader
Important Notes: she is dawnpelt/stars daughter and grayfangs sister she is easily told what to do until she thinks that it is wrong her headstrong attitude led her on an adventure away from the clan with a tom from a different clan and a rouge and together with some help from nearby cats they stopped the destruction of the moontree {my version of the moonstone/pool} her bravery and strength in her belief in justice and truth helped to make her a strong leader.

Image/Description:
Name:grayfang
Gender: male
Clan:dawnclan
Rank: warrior
Important Notes: he is a great fighter but he falls in love wit a cat off a different clan but not jus a cat from a different clan the clans medicine cat featherstream. his sister no leader at this point struggles with the decision she must make as weather to banish him or let him and his mate live with the clan. starclan showed her by taking both the clan's current medicine cat and his apprentice and featherstream helped to train the new medicine cat and they were permitted to stay.

Bless you; images!

Silverheart
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Her name fits her perfectly. She's got a strong sense of what's right and wrong and is dedicated to doing what she believes is right, even if it's breaking rules. Silver- also fits her fur color. You did a very good job naming her!
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: I can't really pick out anything I would think needs correcting; all I can really suggest is to add more to her! What terrifies her, what earns her ire, does she have confidence troubles if immediately confronted, or will no cat be able to get through to her? Has she screwed up before, and do others still remind her of this?

Grayfang
Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Grayfang works almost perfectly for him - all that's really wrong with it is his suffix. -fang is used for cats who are great at both fighting and hunting, and I don't think he's particularly skilled with hunting.
Alternative Name: Grayclaw. The suffix -claw is for a fighting cat.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: Like his sister, there's not much to him I can complain about, other than suggesting that you bring more to him. What else is there other than his forbidden love? How did he meet this girl? Does he feel frustrated that fighting's all he good at, especially now that he knows that he's injured some of her Clanmates? Does he desire the spotlight, or is he fine in the shadows? How introverted is he?

[Sameen_of_Nohr]

Bless you; images!

Silverheart
Name Rating: 10/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Her name fits her perfectly. She's got a strong sense of what's right and wrong and is dedicated to doing what she believes is right, even if it's breaking rules. Silver- also fits her fur color. You did a very good job naming her!
Alternative Name: None!

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: I can't really pick out anything I would think needs correcting; all I can really suggest is to add more to her! What terrifies her, what earns her ire, does she have confidence troubles if immediately confronted, or will no cat be able to get through to her? Has she screwed up before, and do others still remind her of this?

Grayfang
Name Rating: 8/10
Name Type: Traditional
Name Reasoning: Grayfang works almost perfectly for him - all that's really wrong with it is his suffix. -fang is used for cats who are great at both fighting and hunting, and I don't think he's particularly skilled with hunting.
Alternative Name: Grayclaw. The suffix -claw is for a fighting cat.

Character Rating: 8/10
Character Reasoning: Like his sister, there's not much to him I can complain about, other than suggesting that you bring more to him. What else is there other than his forbidden love? How did he meet this girl? Does he feel frustrated that fighting's all he good at, especially now that he knows that he's injured some of her Clanmates? Does he desire the spotlight, or is he fine in the shadows? How introverted is he?

oh wow thanks ! !yes silverheart is like a perfect mix of sandstorm,squirrelflight,and firestar all rolled into one cat her confidant tends to be grayfang she also confides in her future mate acornnose a lot too and what scares her? well squirrels she doesn't like squirrels and everyone makes fun of her for it. she did at one point have a close friendship with a male in another clan but she never actually crossed that line the code means to much to her for that

and grayfang is actually a good hunter in fact after he falls in love he refused to fight at all he wouldn't do border patrols or anything so yeah and he meets her in battle she was healing a fallen clanmate and he got shoved into the river and she saved him from drowning after that you know their story.

thank so much for doing this! its really cool and when im naming new warriors I will know to come you for advice!

p.s. and hitting the friend button!