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by Enjyka » Sun Jan 12, 2014 1:00 am
Ah non moi mon préféré c'est le fromage de vache ! *hmm reblochon*
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by claypigeon » Tue Jan 14, 2014 3:10 pm
oooh la france! je veux allé mais mes parents..
Est-ce que c'est bonne la?
je pense oui mais j'ai na pas allé XD
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by Pastasquid » Thu Jan 16, 2014 6:11 am
Bonjour! For my French homework, I have to write a paragraph about what I do in my spare time. My teacher hasn't given me much to work with so I wanted to come on here and check I was doing things right. I don't know what to write in some parts of the text so I've put them in English in brackets, could anyone help me translate them? Heres what I have so far...
Dans ma temps libre, j'aime ecouter de la music, surtout One Direction et quelquefois Little Mix (J'adore One Direction!). {Also}, j'aime retrover mes copains, {We go the the park alot}. J'aime jouer de l'ordinateur. Je joue Netball parce que c'est vraiment amusant.
I'm really sorry if I've made horrible mistakes ^^
I just wanted to know if anyone could help me. The things in red are what I need help translating. Also I need to make sure it makes sense XD
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by meowool » Thu Jan 16, 2014 8:19 am
Amy_Malik wrote:Bonjour! For my French homework, I have to write a paragraph about what I do in my spare time. My teacher hasn't given me much to work with so I wanted to come on here and check I was doing things right. I don't know what to write in some parts of the text so I've put them in English in brackets, could anyone help me translate them? Heres what I have so far...
Dans ma temps libre, j'aime ecouter de la music, surtout One Direction et quelquefois Little Mix (J'adore One Direction!). {Also}, j'aime retrover mes copains, {We go the the park alot}. J'aime jouer de l'ordinateur. Je joue Netball parce que c'est vraiment amusant.
I'm really sorry if I've made horrible mistakes ^^
I just wanted to know if anyone could help me. The things in red are what I need help translating. Also I need to make sure it makes sense XD
Music is spelt 'musique' ('ic' endings normally change to 'ique' in french)
Also = Aussi
We go to the park a lot = Nous allons au parc beaucoup.
The 'j'aime jouer de l'ordinateur' means "I like playing of the computer." change 'de' to 'sur'
Ecouter has an accent like this "é" on the first 'e'. (Although that could be because you don't know how to make accents on your comp!)
Netball doesn't a capital, unlike German nouns.
retrover = retrouver. Also in that sentence you probably need an 'avec' (with) after 'retrouver'
That's all I could find!
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by Pastasquid » Thu Jan 16, 2014 8:35 am
meowool wrote:Amy_Malik wrote:Bonjour! For my French homework, I have to write a paragraph about what I do in my spare time. My teacher hasn't given me much to work with so I wanted to come on here and check I was doing things right. I don't know what to write in some parts of the text so I've put them in English in brackets, could anyone help me translate them? Heres what I have so far...
Dans ma temps libre, j'aime ecouter de la music, surtout One Direction et quelquefois Little Mix (J'adore One Direction!). {Also}, j'aime retrover mes copains, {We go the the park alot}. J'aime jouer de l'ordinateur. Je joue Netball parce que c'est vraiment amusant.
I'm really sorry if I've made horrible mistakes ^^
I just wanted to know if anyone could help me. The things in red are what I need help translating. Also I need to make sure it makes sense XD
Music is spelt 'musique' ('ic' endings normally change to 'ique' in french)
Also = Aussi
We go to the park a lot = Nous allons au parc beaucoup.
The 'j'aime jouer de l'ordinateur' means "I like playing of the computer." change 'de' to 'sur'
Ecouter has an accent like this "é" on the first 'e'. (Although that could be because you don't know how to make accents on your comp!)
Netball doesn't a capital, unlike German nouns.
retrover = retrouver. Also in that sentence you probably need an 'avec' (with) after 'retrouver'
That's all I could find!
Thank you! And the accent thing is because I don't know how to do them on my computer ^^
I just have one more question. How would I say, after school on Thursday, I go to art club? ^^

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by meowool » Thu Jan 16, 2014 9:13 am
Right if there is a '/' after a vowel it needs an accent going that way, and same goes for one '\' like that, as I can't make them on my laptop as I don't have a number pad.
"Jeudi, apre\s e/cole je vais a\ un club d'art." (instead of "d'art" you could put 'de dessin' if you want but they mean the same thing!)
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by Toriguel » Thu Jan 16, 2014 11:09 pm
Pendant mon temps libre, j'aime écouter de la musique, surtout One Direction et quelquefois Little Mix (j'adore One Direction !). J'aime aussi retrouver mes copains, nous allons souvent au parc. J'aime jouer sur l'ordinateur. Je joue au netball parce que c'est vraiment amusant.
Le jeudi après l'école, je vais à mon club d'art.

We often say "my clyb" in french even if it's not our club

And if I may suggest, adding an "ensemble" ("together") after "au parc" in the first text would sound nicer

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