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by Iselka » Sun Jan 05, 2014 2:57 pm
dragoncatofpern wrote:Do people have any tips on writing full-size stories? As in actually writing to the end of them? I have quite a bit of trouble with that because for the mpst part I can only come up with plots that take at least sixty pages to fill. I t gets quite annoying because I can't often finish the long ones.
Figure out what your story is about, think about who your hero or heroine will be and create their background/personality, and finally add a part of yourself to the character and start writing.
Well that's my experience in writing. Fanfics I keep in my head (like Sirda) or make them into role plays like (Mya).
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by tooru » Sun Jan 05, 2014 3:23 pm
Whoops.
I wrote a thing.
A really stupid thing.
But, uh, tell me what ya think?
I'll probably post it on my poetry thread tomorrow.
"spate"
Spiraling down
Running darkness down
Chattering wind
Makes all men sin
Into the waters
Of deep murky fate
A demon awaits
Young easy to taint
Peering and waiting
For a change to take place
On a throne of bones
With a crown of scars
Looking up to the stars
But held down by the bar
Whispers ensue
Speaking of the date
Another is built
Crafted to hate.
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OIKAWA[ kiddos, kals ]
it's n o t t h e
p a in they're
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it's the l o v e.𝔻 𝔸 𝕌 ℕ 𝕋☀ ☀ 𝓁𝑒𝓈𝓈 ┏▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┓xcall x me x an xaddict
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┏▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┓xwe'll never lose xfaith
xnever forget this taste┖▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┚ █
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by a sky full of stars » Sun Jan 05, 2014 8:40 pm
Hmm.
Always start with a dramatic and extremely short sentence; it provides a better effect and gets your readers hooked right away. I like to start with a calm but curious scene, often a flowing conscience or such. Honestly the short sentence thing makes such a difference c:
Just keep note that because usually the start is kind of and introduction don't bore your reader with explanations; weave some in sneakily and leave some to be revealed later. I often restrain from explains things in a direct way.
Hope this helps!
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by Iselka » Mon Jan 06, 2014 12:38 am
42. wrote:Hmm.
Always start with a dramatic and extremely short sentence; it provides a better effect and gets your readers hooked right away. I like to start with a calm but curious scene, often a flowing conscience or such. Honestly the short sentence thing makes such a difference c:
Just keep note that because usually the start is kind of and introduction don't bore your reader with explanations; weave some in sneakily and leave some to be revealed later. I often restrain from explains things in a direct way.
Hope this helps!
Exactly keep them guessing.
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by airam » Mon Jan 06, 2014 12:57 am
Username: mars.
What we will call you: mars, midz, midi, war
Will you critique other's work?: Yes
Links to your story if you have any: War but I haven't done much
Anything you want us to know?: I needed names and lots of them
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