{ INKLINGS } LOCK! NEW THREAD

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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby A*Viola*Named*Steve » Sun Jan 05, 2014 12:27 am

I like it! I would definitely read it. ^^
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Guest » Sun Jan 05, 2014 12:31 am

My new poetry thread:
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2147400
I don't mind if you post.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby wickedbvnes » Sun Jan 05, 2014 1:24 am

Username: vintage. { the original. i am often confused with Vintage. or other spinoffs. :I }
What we will call you: Vint, Vinty.
Will you critique other's work?: Yes.
Links to your story if you have any:
I have one work in progress.
Anything you want us to know?:
Uh, not really.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby luxray; » Sun Jan 05, 2014 4:50 am

Would anyone look at this and see if it's any good? I'm rather satisfied by it, so crit on the first part of possibly my new novel.
I know there's no indentations, I'll edit it soon.
Kyoro was on the run. A golden, black-spotted tail trailed behind her as she sprinted away, her teeth bared in an almost feline growl. "Damnit, are they here again? My fault for getting too close to the city..." The girl looked over her shoulder, the men were slowing, as if they could feel the oppressive aura of the slum radiating stronger now, as they had chased Kyoro far from their beloved city. She turned and let out a loud growl, almost a roar. "You'd be better off heading back, the Chimeras aren't as lenient as you are. They'd kill you on sight."
As if they realized that she spoke the truth, they headed back, throwing a mocking phrase over their shoulders, "That's right, kitty. Tuck your tail and run off to your ragged group of outcasts."
Kyoro snarled, about to chase them, when a hand appeared on her shoulder, a voice accompanying it, "It's alright. They'll get what they deserve soon enough."
Kyoro sighed, she knew the deep voice belonged to her adoptive father, Belhelm. She looked up at his face, he was in his former, human attire, not his Chimera form. A pair of tan slacks, the unshaven, stubbly face she loved, and the gentle smell of his cologne. "I know, Belhelm, but...I just wanted to look at the city. It's brilliant at night like this." Kyoro's features were starting to smooth out, becoming more human, the tail retreated, her teeth dulled, and the claws on her hands disintegrated.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Anthem of Angels » Sun Jan 05, 2014 7:15 am

Username: Abi123JesusIsCool
What will we call you: Abi
Will you critIque other people's work?: No. I am just a beginner myself.
Links to your story if you have one: Another Boring Story...
Anything you want us to know?: I am a beginner so I would like some critique on my story.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Small Child » Sun Jan 05, 2014 10:09 am

So, I was wondering.
Do any of you have a specific medium to write with? Like, always computer, always notepads, always Word?
I used to use only Word, but then I couldn't use my computer for God knows how long and then I started using a notebook for a specific story. I found it really handy, actually. I can do quick scratch edits and whatever, I can put a page or two dedicated specifically to notes and dot points... I don't know, I love it. I just find it faster to do it on a computer, but I won't until the notebook is full with this story.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Anthem of Angels » Sun Jan 05, 2014 10:51 am

Small Child wrote:So, I was wondering.
Do any of you have a specific medium to write with? Like, always computer, always notepads, always Word?
I used to use only Word, but then I couldn't use my computer for God knows how long and then I started using a notebook for a specific story. I found it really handy, actually. I can do quick scratch edits and whatever, I can put a page or two dedicated specifically to notes and dot points... I don't know, I love it. I just find it faster to do it on a computer, but I won't until the notebook is full with this story.


I usually use the computer cause I just find it neater. But sometimes I write little bits of stories in notebooks or journals.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby seargent strigiforme » Sun Jan 05, 2014 11:13 am

- i use my laptop and paper, i am currently in the beginning stages of writing a novel. i really want to do a collaboration book or writing, it sounds fun. -
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Iselka » Sun Jan 05, 2014 11:21 am

Small Child wrote:So, I was wondering.
Do any of you have a specific medium to write with? Like, always computer, always notepads, always Word?
I used to use only Word, but then I couldn't use my computer for God knows how long and then I started using a notebook for a specific story. I found it really handy, actually. I can do quick scratch edits and whatever, I can put a page or two dedicated specifically to notes and dot points... I don't know, I love it. I just find it faster to do it on a computer, but I won't until the notebook is full with this story.


I find it easier to use google drive. It saves your work as your writing, as long as you are connected to the internet.
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Re: { INKLINGS } A Thread For Writers

Postby Silverhart » Sun Jan 05, 2014 11:21 am

Small Child wrote:So, I was wondering.
Do any of you have a specific medium to write with? Like, always computer, always notepads, always Word?
I used to use only Word, but then I couldn't use my computer for God knows how long and then I started using a notebook for a specific story. I found it really handy, actually. I can do quick scratch edits and whatever, I can put a page or two dedicated specifically to notes and dot points... I don't know, I love it. I just find it faster to do it on a computer, but I won't until the notebook is full with this story.


I'm a pencil and paper person. ^^ I used to write in notebooks, now I write on just loose leaf paper, which I keep 'organized' in a few folders. I like the loose leaf because if I don't like how a page is going, I just scrap it and write a new one. It's also less stress on me to fill up an entire notebook with one story. Instead of twenty notebooks, with ten or twenty pages of unfinished stories and sixty blank pages, I have a folder with sixty pages of a story and obly a few blank pages. It's less organized, but I like it that way. Sometimes pages get out of order, but I usually number and/or label them so it's easy enough to put them together again.

I usually do the first draft and sometimes the second (and on a few occasions the third) on loose leaf paper, and then I write it up on the computer.
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