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In other news, here's a thingie for a new book, which I may or may not post on CS.

The scientist is most likely trying to find the keys to my cell, I think, smiling to myself. Too bad he won't find it.

-snip- I did read it, though. :3

Please give feedback! I want to know if people will actually read this.

And Vapor: I thought that was pretty good. I've read a bit of the first Eragon book. ^^

It sounds like an excellent idea, and you should pursue it.
After a successful escape, he, Vermillion, a girl spliced with a chameleon, and a disrespectful adolescent who is secretly a physic, race to figure out about the scientists before the scientists find them.
In this sentence- minor thing- you had extra details (I probably would've done the same... ), and you could keep the secret a secret until further into the book. (Just a suggestion. I'm not too great at wording all that much while attempting to communicate with others. Heh...) Otherwise, have fun! It is a great idea.

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Thanks. Yeah, I'm not too good with wording, either. And that's not the official thing, I just made most of that up on the spot. The wording, not the plot and characters and such. Although it switches viewpoints, so you learn about that the girl is a physic in around the second chapter. ^^

Has anyone had a bunch of characters with similar physical traits? For me it's guys with black hair. I don't know why. It just happens. I have about five so far. Half of which didn't continue on. x)

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My characters seem to have darker or red hair, blue or green eyes, and are tall. Who knows why?

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Okay. I'm starting a new, better novel tomorrow on my long car trip. I think it'll turn out well, and I'll post a link on here after I edit the first few chapters.

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Aaah so excited! Almost finished the book plan of my new book, and am just asking my rl friend 42 if she'll read through. <3

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Aaah so excited! Almost finished the book plan of my new book, and am just asking my rl friend 42 if she'll read through. <3

Do you actually write out a plan? i should probably do that, since I've just been letting the ideas float around and develop within my mind... heheh.

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Everyone is auto-accepted so long as the form is filled out.
Welcome to Inklings! ^-^

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Hey guys! Just popping in to give you the very short prologue of my new book I've been planning ALL day; Horizon. It's a super, super short little thing as prologues generally are, but gives the basis of the rest of the book. I'm very excited! Please give feedback if possible. <3 <3 <3
here goes...

The world I see is how I’ve always known it. Though the elders – grandchildren of the very Escapes that founded the twelve Packs – tell us there was once a very different world, I and all my fellows see it how it is in the present. The land known as Horizon is divided into twelve highly protected territories that represent their surroundings and ruled by a single Alpha.
We are the Forest pack. We live in the hilly oasis of the lush, green forestland and its surrounding rock plains, almost isolated from the other territories. Our home is beautiful, and scattered in the trees with the remains of the ancient ‘human’ villages left over from the Beginning. Our very pack home is situated within a human place; an old castle that is perfect for our residence.
You see, the Beginning – as the elders tell us – was a war of the humans that killed their entire species living on the land we called Horizon. They were just selfish and couldn’t live in peace like us, and killed each other off, letting their dogs escape. We call the dogs who originally fled the war the ‘First Escapes’. They found their own life of solitude and hunting, coming together only with their mate.
The Second Escapes were the generation of the first pack formations, bringing the first step of harmony to Horizon’s dogs. This soon led to the Third Escapes; the dogs that founded and began ruling the twelve Packs of Horizon. Forest, Mountain, Desert, River, Jungle, Rock, Plain, Grassland, Shore, Skytower, Island and Darkenvalley. It may seem a lot and that they take up limited space, but Horizon is an enormous land. It stretches all the way to the ocean, which cannot be passed, as it stretched all the way to the… horizon.
The Third Escapes vowed to shroud the land in peace, and that any single Alpha who tries to slaughter his own dogs and attack the other Packs must be killed. Though trespassing dogs from any pack that wander into another territory can be killed, they told that it is important not to corrupt the harmony of either their own Pack, or others.
It’s been so for almost seventy years, which we must name the Four Seasons. When the Four Seasons pass, it is a new year.
For seventy Four Seasons, Horizon was left in the most calm and quiet state of peace. Our Alphas have all been kind-hearted dogs, who rule and look after all the citizens within the border of their territory well.
That is all I have known.