Re: Terran #29 Piebald Deer Stallion

Postby ViceVersa » Mon Dec 23, 2013 7:31 am

Sorry its late. This was soo hard! I loved both of your stories! :D Congrats Tiedye7!

tiedye7 wrote:
Username: tiedye7
Terran name: Missed A Spot
Terran age: 8 years
Terran height: 14.3hh
Terran gender: Stallion
Favorite Season: Very early spring. It's the time of year when he blends in with the snow, with the grass and fresh, soft dirt just barely showing.
Story:
Spot peered around a birch tree. This was the moment he had been waiting for, and he promised himself he wouldn't blow it.
He hid behind the dense weave of trees, concealed by his colouring, waiting. Watching.
His eyes trained on the dark earth in front of him, Spot barely dared to breathe. He watched the hole in the ground with such an intense look in his eyes, he seemed to be trying to make it move.
And move it did! With barely a sound, the snow around the hole shuddered and fell, but whatever was inside seemed hardly perturbed. A tiny, brown thing poked its black nose out of the burrow.
A groundhog!
Spot watched as the little creature sniffed, its nose quivering, and emerged fully from the burrow. It stood up on its hind legs, alert and ready to hide again. Spot held his breath.
The groundhog stayed upright for several moments before a snapping twig scared it back into its burrow. But Spot wasn't annoyed; he had seen what he had come for.
The groundhog hadn't seen its shadow, and an early spring seemed promising.
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Re: Terran #29 Piebald Deer Stallion

Postby ViceVersa » Mon Dec 23, 2013 8:50 am

Teresa8oats you are runner up! Click the Link to go to your Terran.
http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=2120976
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Re: Terran #29 Piebald Deer Stallion

Postby teresa8oats » Mon Dec 23, 2013 4:05 pm

ViceVersa wrote:Sorry its late. This was soo hard! I loved both of your stories! :D Congrats Tiedye7!

tiedye7 wrote:
Username: tiedye7
Terran name: Missed A Spot
Terran age: 8 years
Terran height: 14.3hh
Terran gender: Stallion
Favorite Season: Very early spring. It's the time of year when he blends in with the snow, with the grass and fresh, soft dirt just barely showing.
Story:
Spot peered around a birch tree. This was the moment he had been waiting for, and he promised himself he wouldn't blow it.
He hid behind the dense weave of trees, concealed by his colouring, waiting. Watching.
His eyes trained on the dark earth in front of him, Spot barely dared to breathe. He watched the hole in the ground with such an intense look in his eyes, he seemed to be trying to make it move.
And move it did! With barely a sound, the snow around the hole shuddered and fell, but whatever was inside seemed hardly perturbed. A tiny, brown thing poked its black nose out of the burrow.
A groundhog!
Spot watched as the little creature sniffed, its nose quivering, and emerged fully from the burrow. It stood up on its hind legs, alert and ready to hide again. Spot held his breath.
The groundhog stayed upright for several moments before a snapping twig scared it back into its burrow. But Spot wasn't annoyed; he had seen what he had come for.
The groundhog hadn't seen its shadow, and an early spring seemed promising.

Congrats on winning this amazing guy!
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