Tvetyal #24 - winner by jellykiwi

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Tvetyal #24 - winner

Postby jellykiwi » Mon Dec 09, 2013 6:39 am

Inspired by candy canes, yum! *u*

Tvetyals are a unique species of dragon-like mammals, the closest modern animal approximation being a big canine with the behavior of a puffin. They come in a large variety of sizes, with the smallest about the size of a medium dog and the largest closer to the size of horses. Tvetyals are pack animals, and typically live in family units called bevies, which range in population from 7 to up to 40. Tvetyals can sport many different traits, but the most prominent is the heterochromic eyes that all Tvets possess. Some traits are more rare than others, and on ocassion, it is said that a Tvetyal may even be born with wings. Notably, Tvetyals are separated into two primary groups: Wild and Domestic. As the names may suggest, Wild Tvets are generally not receptive to humans and cannot be ridden. With enough work, a Wild Tvetyal can become Domestic, at which point they can be lifelong companions.


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Re: Tvetyal #24

Postby Vintage » Mon Dec 09, 2013 6:51 am

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    Call me Vintage. Quite recently, I tried out for a Tvetyal, for the first time, and unfortunately, I lost, but I am glad the better form won. But this baby is gorgeous, and I really think I have a connection with him.
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    Ghetto. noun
    1.
    a part of a city, esp. a slum area, occupied by a minority group or groups.
    verb
    1.
    put in or restrict to an isolated or segregated area or group.

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    The air was crisp with snow, as light, fluffy flakes fell from the rolling clouds, settling on my hair. That was not my mission to be here, to pay attention to the ivory flakes that fluttered to the ground.
    I was looking for him.
    There was a Tvetyal I had seen around the lightly wooded area that brushed against the golden beach, where water flooded the sand. He was scarlet, like a Christmas CandyCane, with white lines that flickered about his fur. He seemed friendly, but being the daring person I was, I was going to attempt to reach him, to touch him. But how to find him? Back in the city, I could find any one of my friends, by studying the ghettos around, analyzing their personality so I would know how they would live, and finding that ghetto that matched their living habits. I was a ghetto girl. But I knew nothing about this Tvetyal's personality, so it was a 'guess and check' ordeal.
    Rounding the corner of a rocky segment, a bright, scarlet Tvetyal showed up, easily recognized as the one I had been watching. His brilliant heterochromia eyes gazed back at me, and I stood there in awe. As I visited the ICT center often, I saw Tvetyals often, always gorgeous. But this one had a certain air about it, something that stood out to me. He was gorgeous, brilliant, in a holy sort of way.
    Quietly, with excitement bubbling up inside me, I reached out, fingertips just reaching out for the comfort of this Tvetyal that I knew he possessed. He paused, staring at me with an interesting curiosity. But just after that short pause, he ;launched his large head into my hand. And I knew, just knew, that we were perfect for each other.

    *The story is from my(Vintage♥) point of view.*

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Re: Tvetyal #24

Postby The Glass Doe » Mon Dec 09, 2013 2:51 pm

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Emily.
Name:
Zane
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Zane was the cutest little baby Tevt. His favorite holiday was of course, Christmas! It is his own tradition to decorate himself with the Christmas present bows. He stuck them and tied them all over himself. Now that hes older, he allows the younger Tevt's decorate him with the Christmas decorations. Once it got so bad that he was totally wrapped with Christmas paper.
No matter who you are,
what you look like, or where you're from...
You deserve love & acceptance
just like anyone else!


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Re: Tvetyal #24

Postby Underworld » Tue Dec 10, 2013 6:42 am

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Name: Fane
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Kimba (Female wolf pup)
Razor (Male wolf pup)

A lone Tvetyal walked along a muddy path. He hadn't eaten in days and was exhausted. He was looking for shelter and a place to rest. He walked aimlessly until he tripped over something. Curiously he looked down to see what he had tripped over only to find 2 wolf pups curled up trying to keep warm. He felt sorry for the pups and picked them up and continued his journey for shelter. He walked for hours until he came to a cave. He put the wolf pups down and went to check the cave out. As he walked back out he noticed that the pups were up and waiting for him. "What are your names little ones" he asked. "I'm Razor and this is my sister Kimba we were looking for shelter but we got too cold" Razor exclaimed. "Well I'm Fane would you like to sleep here and later I will go and get us something to eat?" He asked. "Sure" they both said. And that is how Fane, Kimba, and Razors friendship began.
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Re: Tvetyal #24

Postby Chasing Dreams » Wed Dec 11, 2013 8:47 am

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Yes, I was domestic and I had a loving owner who I adored. But sometimes she expected too much out of me. Today she wanted to try and ride me. Well, I wasn't going to let that happen. She prepared me for riding and her face looked pleased as I let her climb up and sit down on my back. I turned my head so I could see her and grinned. A sly, grin and she could tell what was going to happen. Her eyes got wide and she started yelling out words and I felt her feet shuffle on my sides as she tried to climb off of me. It was too late for that. I started to run around, tossing my tail around, bucking and springing into the air. My owner cried out with fear. I was having too much fun with her, too bad she didn't know that I still loved her. Just, I wasn't meant for riding.

With one final spring into the air, I landed hard back on the ground and my owner fell to the ground. I strutted around for a few minutes before walking over to her slowly. Those streams were leaking from her eyes again. I nudged her to try and see if she could move and she let out a scream of pain. I soon regretted by foolish game. I gently scooped my owner on my back and I felt her hands cling to my mane. Quickly I raced her back to get help. For I love my human.
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Re: Tvetyal #24

Postby ExpensiveAlpaca » Wed Dec 11, 2013 4:26 pm

Delirium
an unexplained world of delirious minds | Delirium is made up by yours truly |one who is insane and living in their own world



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Story: There was nothing to explain this lad's life, he was trapped inside of his own mind, inside of his own delirious world. There was nowhere to go, nowhere to run, and nowhere to hide. He was everywhere at every time, the maniacal smile stretched from each to ear. Who exactly was he though? The lad's name was Delirium, and he was trapped inside of his own head. Delirium was like a fish in a cave with no eyes, he never searched for anything inside of a person before sharply commanding them. He was diagnosed as a psychopath years ago, and that's when I ran into him. I had been walking through the forest one cold winters day, not dressed warmly, as I enjoyed the cold. My own mind began to wonder, and I lost track of where I was headed. Next thing I knew I was laying on the snow laden ground with a large creature the color of blood pinning me down, his face inches with mine and an unusual, frightening toothy smile that seemed to stretch the whole way across his face. I was frightened, but something intrigued me about this beast that laid before me...
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Re: Tvetyal #24 - winner

Postby jellykiwi » Sun Dec 15, 2013 11:54 am

Ahhh the choice was very tough for me; you're all such good writers ;v;
But I really enjoyed the descriptions and the varied syntax in Vintage♥'s story, so they are the winner! c:
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Re: Tvetyal #24 - winner

Postby Vintage » Sun Dec 15, 2013 12:37 pm

Thanks! You all Did a great job!
Hey there, I'm Vintage, but you can call me Vin if you prefer to do so.
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