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Outstanding writing! I can help edit if you'd like...? Can't wait to see more!

[ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s]

Sure! If you'd like to help edit, message me and I'll give you an editing link to a copy of the original that you can edit and comment on :]

[ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s]

Update bump! Chapter four has been concluded!

[Solar Flare]

Ah yes. And I can do some fan-art if you'd like.

[ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s]

Ah yes. And I can do some fan-art if you'd like.

Lol, if you want to, go for it x]

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no doubt about it ,arvie is awesome ! my fave!. niles would have to be my least favorite, i cant stand people who try to take the lead not because everyone isn't sure, but because they think they deserve it and is better then everyone else. sada is a close second behind niles in least favorite.

i may have missed it, but is arvie the youngest? how old might she be, im curious :3

[ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s]

Lol that's what I was going for! I was worried people wouldn't catch the battle between Niles and Ezekiel as leader x] And no, the twins are the youngest, but she's close! Here's them all in order:

Caspian - 18
Cassy - 18
Arvie - 19
Ezekiel - 20
Margrette - 21
Azure - 22
Sada - 22
Maaz - 23
Vincent - 23
Charlotte - 24
Electra - 25
Niles - 26

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oh awesome, and yeah i seen the struggle for leader ship, you did very well on this story, the plot ,the characters, and writing. when might we be hoping for the next chapter? 8D

[ʞ ɔ ǝ ɹ ʍ d ı ʞ s]

Thank you! And I'll be starting it soon :] I'll post bits of it instead of waiting to finish the whole thing x] Whoooo would you guys put together romance wise?

[Solar Flare]

oh awesome, and yeah i seen the struggle for leader ship, you did very well on this story, the plot ,the characters, and writing. when might we be hoping for the next chapter? 8D

I could see the struggle for leadership as well.


Also, I edited all of the prologue- green means something was altered, and underlined means something was deleted (Mainly commas.)