Dog on Duty (20 chapters (SO FAR)

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If I were to publish this book, would you buy it?

Definitely!
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Probably!
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Yes!
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If I can afford it
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Maybe
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No
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby Kenn » Wed Dec 11, 2013 4:13 am

Noooo! Its not fair!!
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby Starlovex » Fri Dec 13, 2013 6:24 pm

wow, your story is so good! they need to publish this, anyways, will angel return to the good side, or is it a sercret? :D
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby . S n o w } » Fri Dec 13, 2013 8:38 pm

Sounds interesting.
Booked and subscribed. Havent even finished chapter one yet!!
snow child wrote:The snow leopard mother and cub
Were resting for a while...
In their exclusive private club,
Yet neither raised a smile...
God turned the heat so low again,
That Winter sadness grew...
The Spring would come, yet, when, when!?
But neither of them knew...

What leopard counts the passing days,
The suns and moons above?
What leopard's privy to God's ways
Or prays to Him with love?
The humans pray, for they've found faith...
They count the days and weeks...
They've learnt endurance to be brave
To wait until God speaks.
by Denis Martindale wrote:For only then, will spring arrive,
To melt the snows and ice,
So that the leopards who survive
Will think it Paradise!
At last, they'll see their sorrows melt,
As if they were a dream...
At last, they'll make their presence felt
And form a hunting team...

Their Winter bonds will grant them strength,
Uniting them as one...
The cub will grow another length
To blossom in the sun...
Each creature has its own domain...
Each leopard has its spot...
It needs no lecture to explain,
This life is all it's got...

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I would die if the snow melts, I would perish of my books were burnt.
And yet both elements, Snow and fire, distory each other in turn, I shall live with out either
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby Starlovex » Sat Dec 14, 2013 4:55 pm

are you going to do another dog on duty contest soon?
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Sun Dec 15, 2013 11:22 pm

Maybe next year. I don't have enough pets now C:
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Sun Dec 15, 2013 11:39 pm

Added more to chapter twenty.
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby quietude » Thu Dec 19, 2013 1:50 pm

Why falcon why?
一条独木桥走到黑的感觉 确实不差.
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby ⓞ ⓚ ⓐ ⓟ ⓘ » Thu Dec 19, 2013 2:18 pm

I feel sorry for Falcon. I wonder if he turned evil purposefully, or really died and became an evil dog like Hawk said. Falcon might have survived from the fall.
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby nyacinth » Mon Dec 23, 2013 10:06 am

    Will be reading when I have some more time <3

    Reminder for me: Up to chapter 8
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Re: Dog on Duty (17 chapters (SO FAR)

Postby satuurnity » Mon Dec 23, 2013 10:25 am

Thanks. I'll write more tomorow.
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