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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nekox » Thu Sep 02, 2010 10:29 am

i have seen faces in river, ocean, ponds, Etc. that i swear are merghosts... but no one believes me. also once when i was getting ready to go out to dinner i was doing my hair while looking in the mirror and saw a man or something behind me. suddenly i turned around and saw some dirt where the "ghost" stood. ugh creepy!
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Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
Take a bite of my heart tonight.
Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
What are you waiting for?
Say goodbye to my heart tonight.
Neon Trees; Animal


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Firedragon2009 » Thu Sep 02, 2010 11:11 am

Nekox wrote:
i have seen faces in river, ocean, ponds, Etc. that i swear are merghosts... but no one believes me. also once when i was getting ready to go out to dinner i was doing my hair while looking in the mirror and saw a man or something behind me. suddenly i turned around and saw some dirt where the "ghost" stood. ugh creepy!


My great grandpa used to see ghosts :?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Nekox » Thu Sep 02, 2010 11:24 am

Firedragon2009 wrote:
Nekox wrote:
i have seen faces in river, ocean, ponds, Etc. that i swear are merghosts... but no one believes me. also once when i was getting ready to go out to dinner i was doing my hair while looking in the mirror and saw a man or something behind me. suddenly i turned around and saw some dirt where the "ghost" stood. ugh creepy!


My great grandpa used to see ghosts :?


hhmmm few people do... though it seems many...
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Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
Take a bite of my heart tonight.
Oh, oh,
I want some more
Oh, oh,
What are you waiting for?
What are you waiting for?
Say goodbye to my heart tonight.
Neon Trees; Animal


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby vampir3d » Sat Sep 04, 2010 12:21 am

wow that is a really creepy story i cant wait to tell my friends it
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby chagups » Sat Sep 04, 2010 3:50 am

yea
I AM BACK FOR HOPEFULLY A SHORT TIME BECASUE MY FRIEND [CHAOS<3] HAD DID SOMETHING WRONG TOO HER ACCOUNT SO SHE CANT LOGIN. SO FOR NOW ME AND HER ARE GOING TO USE THIS ACCOUNT. AND IM LETTING HER JUST SO SHE CAN KEEP UP ON HER ROLEPLAYS. I HOPE THIS IS OKAY THANK YOU VERY MUCH.~chagups
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Firedragon2009 » Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:29 am

Nekox wrote:
chagups wrote:wow thats scary give it :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: :thumbup: thumbs up

yes... yes... veeery spooooky

You should tell us your spooky stories. I love them <3
But I surly won't read at night, I will not sleep if I do.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Spotedleaf5 » Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:44 am

ok this is pretty pathetic but once in the mid 1900s in Lake Michigan there was a ledgened parents told their kids. They told the kids not to wander to the beach at night or the sandman would get them. Little kids being little kids beleived it. But Nala and Yalo (boyffriend/girlfriends) Went to the beach not believing it. Yalo wandered into the water "Come in the waters warm". Nala looked around "OK what if the sand man comes?" She said as she wandered in. "That's justa ledgened. Come on." So they swam for a while and then Nala felt something on her ankle. Yalo felt it too "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" they screamed!!! The next morning their bodies were found 40 feet from the shore. The coast gaurd still wonders how this happened. This story is A ledgened from my cousins in America. Suposedley it is true.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby chagups » Sat Sep 04, 2010 11:50 am

Ok heres one its called
It came from under the bed
Ok there was this little girl named Tori and she never believed in monsters intil today. Her parents were out of town and what to do when your a 17 year old girl well thats easy call your boyfriend. So she called him and about 5 mi utes later he came and later he left then she hurd a loud thump upstairs and went to go see she thouht it was a rat and she did her homework and fell asleep on her bed then she herd a deep voice saying "i love you so much but why were you with him" the she was still half asleep and it said "im goin have to elimanate you for that and she saw this thing and it was hairy and about 5.3 and she fell asleep and when her parents got home she was bleeding and was crying in the towel closet and when her parents found her she said it came from under the bed but about 5 days later she went to sleep and saw it again and then ishe pretended to be asleep and started to cry and then it said i no your awake and it grabbed her and she screamed and her parents saw this and it went under the bed. And she was laying on the bed with her throut split open and her parents cried and when her dad looked under the bed and it was gone
I AM BACK FOR HOPEFULLY A SHORT TIME BECASUE MY FRIEND [CHAOS<3] HAD DID SOMETHING WRONG TOO HER ACCOUNT SO SHE CANT LOGIN. SO FOR NOW ME AND HER ARE GOING TO USE THIS ACCOUNT. AND IM LETTING HER JUST SO SHE CAN KEEP UP ON HER ROLEPLAYS. I HOPE THIS IS OKAY THANK YOU VERY MUCH.~chagups
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby VesVes » Sat Sep 04, 2010 10:56 pm

I guess I'll give it a go...It might not be that scary, since it's hard with animals. Oh, and you may notice that the antagonist is a lion, I have absolutely nothing against lions; I just like writing from a hyena's point of view, especially when it's my clan of hyena characters (the Acacia Valley Clan). So, here goes.

The hyenas of the Serengeti Plain tell of the legend of the ghost lion that nearly wiped out the Acacia Valley Clan. However, they tell it as a legend, a myth, a fairy tale. But the ghost lion is a reality. A reality that killed many hyenas: Moon, Stick, Flame, Tree, Rain, and even Wheat, the strongest, bravest adult deputy the hyenas knew. The threat started with Moon.
Moon was a young female ready for a bright future. She was one of the best hunters in her clan, the others being her sisters; Star, Berry, and Fern. She was on her way to becoming leader of the Acacia Valley Clan. And then, it happened. Moon, along with her sisters and other hyenas, including River, the clan's leader, were back from a long and exhausting hunt at night, in which they were unsuccessful. Moon, feeling really tired, flopped down in her den to go to sleep, when she entered a nightmare.
It started as a normal fight. "Lion attack!" River yelled. Lions were everywhere, and the hyenas were fighting for their lives. However, she didn't get much time to observe when she felt a huge paw on her back. It was a huge male lion. It growled, and loomed over her. Moon, momentarily frozen in fear, just barely found her voice enough to yell, "Star! River! Berry! Help!" The hyenas she called appeared at her side, and the lion backed off, growling, but not before saying, "Remember pretty, I know where you live."
Moon woke up. Good! Just a bad dream, she thought.
"Star! Fern! I want you to help Wheat and Tumbleweed patrol the area. Look for enemy hyenas." came River's voice. Fern and Star bounced up to their feet and joined Wheat and Tumbleweed, leaving Moon alone in the den. Suddenly, Moon heard pawsteps.
"Didn't I tell you I know where you live?" It was the lion. Moon screamed. When the other hyenas rushed to her aid, they found Moon lying dead in a pool of blood. Since she was killed in a dirt area, the others searched for tracks that could lead to her killer. But they found no tracks. None at all.
The next hyena victim was Stick, a cub of River's. Since River is the leader of the Acacia Valley Clan, Stick would at least be high ranking among the low ranking males. But one day, River left Stick playing with his sister Leaf to ask the morning hunting party about what they managed to catch. But right when Flower was telling the story of a buffalo that they almost but didn't manage to catch, Leaf came running up to her mother.
"Mom! Mom! Come quick! This ghost lion jumped out of nowhere and killed Stick!" Leaf squealed.
"Leaf, you know very well that I am having a talk with this morning's hunting party and I don't have time to play any of your imaginary games right now." River scolded.
"But it really did come and kill Stick and it was so big and scary and...and..."
"All right, I'll come if it makes you feel better." And sure enough, they found Stick dead. And once again, there were no tracks leading to a possible killer.
Flame, Tree, and Rain were also killed in the same way. Each time, every hyena's back happened to be turned, and--BAM!--one hyena just happened to turn around and find their clanmate dead. But the biggest shock of all came when Wheat died.
"Wheat! Star! Pine! Petal! Berry! I want you all to go on a hunt." River told them. Of course, the five hyenas nodded and set off.
As I mentioned earlier, Wheat is an adult deputy. If River dies when Leaf--River's heir--is still a cub and too young to lead the clan, then the adult deputy steps in and leads the clan. Wheat is also strong, fit, and brave, not one you'd expect to be killed. But it happened. The hyenas came across a herd of gazelle, in which one had strayed from the herd. Wheat of course went after it, but that turned out to be the biggest mistake of her life. The gazelle leapt and landed on top of Wheat and turned into none other than the ghost lion. The other hyenas watched in horror as Wheat's life was taken from her, and then the lion vanished into thin air as easily as a mouse slipping into a small hole. The lion has never struck since, but to this day, none of the hyenas know when or who he will strike next.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Triss » Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:08 am

I am not a fan of scary stories. Luckily, I don't go on chatrooms.
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