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by selenite. » Sun Nov 24, 2013 4:17 pm

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Atlantic. -- alright, so the main thing is that you don't want to enter absolutely everything, i could easily simply fix it by deleting the fact you entered the /left and the left between the words in row one and the second pink bar. i also deleted the /left that ends the first pink bar and the left that starts bennie's row. encase you're confused here's the code c:- Code: Select all
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by mint. » Tue Nov 26, 2013 8:37 am
atlantic. --- the "-" are too long for my monitor, and so it doesn't fit in parallel to the gif. personally, i find it tasteless, with lack of color. i would suggest putting personality into your signature c: some color, etc etc
other than that, love the signature!
cacti. --- i dislike the quote boxes, and find it completely distracting from the form and color scheme (which may not suit a male character - sorry, me being too biased), and the pink is way to light for text (in my opinion). if you want the quote boxes to "frame" the picture, we can come up with a way to do so c:
--------------------- and onto our next assignment .....
so we all chose one person's palette and picture, and created a blob of code (signature or character form). now, i want to you to critique the blob of code that was made with your picture and code. please include at least one good thing, and one thing that could be changed. also, i would love to know if it was what you expected/or not.---------------------------------------------------------------
for me: i actually didn't expect you to make a signature, smoke c: i really think it nice and appealing to the eye, giving it a major break from that fontmeme. i think what you did really good was that you achieved the look you wanted (a "peaceful" signature), that still allows more customization (the text box).
what i think you chould change next time would be the colors. despite the lovely look the signature has, i feel that there is no emphasis on the headline (what a peaceful place). perhaps bolder or larger?
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by kingly » Tue Nov 26, 2013 4:57 pm
-- for Atlantic's post, the only thing that I didn't like was in between the grey lines were a different type of text on either side, and I was going to mention the evening out of the rows, but I'm sure that was accidental c: however I find her form for Bennie very well done; it's nicely short and brief but all the while very neat and pretty. And no, it was not what I expected.
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by Affliction » Tue Nov 26, 2013 5:11 pm
Thank you cacti c:
I really like how you had the text in multiple locations. I thought this was a really interesting way to organize text and its something I might try it later on. One thing I think you could work on though is trying to neaten up the form. Possibly move some things a bit closer and remove some quote boxes.
And on another note, it wasn't exactly what I had expected either.
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by mint. » Wed Nov 27, 2013 1:24 pm
ash. wrote:sorry smoke. i've been so busy lately and will be for a while. i might even have to drop out of this. family is going to be over all the rest of this month and the next and everything is crazy in my life right now. i'm trying to wrap stuff up on here with signatures, etc., and what not. but i will try to do it as soon as i can! ^^
no problem.
we'll just continue on, if that's alright.
this is the form we will be adding onto this class. i felt this form can give more space for creativity c:
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by selenite. » Thu Nov 28, 2013 5:42 am
ash. -- the form isn't terrible. i actually do enjoy it. all the small details like the sizing of the font, the place you put the picture, and the bars that surround the lyrics are great touches.
somethings i would change would be the font of the lyrics, making the bar into solid colors so there aren't lines in between, and I'd also probably change he name font. although i do enjoy the cursive as the title it tends to remind me of font meme, which was a font website i wasn't fond of.
thank you for doing the form, I really do enjoy it c:
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