• camp ... [ a little coding class ]

[mint.]

this isn't going to be pretty !

anyways, this is a little coding class that i hope
will be beneficial for all those that signed up.

in this class, we will be going over:

• aesthetics
  
• balance
• picture choice

please bring to the class (as in post here):

• one of your coding examples for us to critique
• to decide on one type of coding you'd like advice on
• one palette (set of colors) you would like to use
• one picture

this week, the following users are in the class:

• ash.
• Atlantic.
• cacti.
• smoke.
only they and myself are allowed to post here.

if you would like to join the class, please let
me know over a PM! thanks!

[mint.]

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[mint.]

so my critique so far:

ash. --- it's a good layout, just that we need to work on spacing techniques. the hearts are a little crooked, so perhaps we'll figure out a way to achieve similar effects, just not the way your are currently doing it? overall, i really love it!
(i would assume this is a character form?)

smoke. --- the form is pretty neat, simple and cute. using the image you provided, i tested out the form, and there was a common error. as soon as an image is given the "left" or "right" alignment code, the "list" codes on your text cancel out. so you may want to add a "left" code to them also.

so now, I would like you all to pick someone else's palette and picture, and create either a signature or character form from it while we wait for the rest of the group. i will be picking ash.'s

what is wrong with the signature below?
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Calling all avenging angels † Vengeance, you know it tastes so good † Vengeance is as cold as ice † When it has you in its sights † When it has you in its sights

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To be honest, I'm a real amateur. My forms are rather small, as well very unbalanced. I would greatly appreciate some help in those areas.

This is an older example of mine, the majority of my other character forms just seem to be missing something so I thought I'd go with this.

Oh and I almost forgot, the sig looks a tad big. I've occurred the problem multiple times and I believe that's the case with the signature.
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[mint.]

i'll post in a bit. i'll do mint.'s image and palette but i am warning you: this gal here ain't so good. ^^ and i feel bad. smoke won't have anything to do. --- edit --- smoke, i'll do your's so you can do mint.'s if that all right. so you can have something to play with. c: i'll post soon. i'm going to the movies to watch catching fire right now! ^^

its fine. lol, there will be five people in the class, including myself :3
i'll get critique up for Atlantic once cacti posts

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so sorry for the delayed reply, thank you for the critique mint c: i'll do your picture & palette as a signature as soon as i can at the bottom of this post.
edit--done with the signature, so sorry for the negative space, I also cropped the picture a bit if that was alright.
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a little critique for ash.--- when you're doing the quote on your form for lyrics there are other smaller alternatives to the actually quote box so it doesn't stand out against your entire form and take away from your character such as ┏━━━┓. it also blends well with the rest of the coding c:
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carriex ♡ xdeffsx ♡ xauriex ♡ xotterx ♡ xshay

[kingly]

form example ;
color palette

ignore the middle color and replace it with black
sorry for the wait, only logged on an hour ago to see the messages

name ; ---age ; --- birthday ;--- etc.

example picture ;

a few questions for the cutie?
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question ; answer
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cacti. would you be fine with me making the form or signature for you?

[kingly]

not at all c: