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A life as an Orphan ~ Pokemon Form and Story |D

Postby oumasai » Mon Nov 18, 2013 10:27 am

Username ↓
Hi, Blaze! It's Ikorra, don't remember me? :c
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Pokemon's Name ↓
His name will be Carnel, just because it almost sounds like Caramel,
and he sort of looks like it. It also sounds a bit like a boy name, which is tots adorbs! <3

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Interaction ↓
Pokemon used: Moka and Victor
Looking at the Linoone, Moka and Victor looked at each other and looked back at the Linoone.
"Um, and you are?" Moka asked the Linoone softly. "Uh.. Um.." The Linoone stuttered, a bit nervous to spread
personal information. "Well, I'm Victor. That's Moka." He said to the Linoone. The Linoone looked at his feet.
"Well.. Um.. I'm.. I have no name.." He said sadly. "I never seen my parents, so I was never named,"
He said. "I try to name myself, but all the names I had enough weren't good." The Linoone said, a frown appearing
on his face. "Well, how about Carnel?" Moka suggested. "Oh uh.. Wow! I never thought of that name before!"
He said happily. His fears and bad thoughts went away quickly. "S-So, how about a visit to my temporary place?" Carnel
asked. Moka and Victor nodded, smiling. Victor only had a small smile. Smiling wasn't his thing. Carnel smiled and nodded.
"Right! It's over here, follow me!" He said, as he entered a small abandoned house. The house was actually pretty neat-- No broken wooden floors, holes in the walls, or any of that stuff. "Oh my, this place is lovely!" Said Victor. Victor saw a small hole in the floor. "What is this for?" He asked, taking a peak in the hole. "Ah, it's a lovely home." Moka said. Victor nodded in agreement. "Oh, that hole is for storing my berries in. And thank you, Moka!" Carnel smiled at him.

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Why I want him ↓
Well, Carnel is so adorable! And also, I kinda want him to be part of my story.
He's pretty awesome, and I think that he'll be perfect to join the group of Scarf Buddies. *Cough*Becauseyou'lladdmeandi'lladdascarftoit*Cough*

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Carnel's Personality ↓
Carnel can be Loyal, happy, proud, strong, and also can be shy. He loves picking berries,
having fun, and also he could be polite or sad. He can be anything, really, but he's usually one of the listed
things.

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Art of Carnel ↓
Link/Art made by me/
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Other things about Carnel
Favorite Poffin: Bitter
Favorite Color: Yellow
Favorite hobby: Picking berries
Friends: Probably Bella's whole team.
Best buddies: Of course, Victor and Moka!
Favorite food: Well, aside from Bitter poffins and berries, he likes Popcorn.
Favorite cereal: Um, well, he likes Fruit Loops.
Favorite animal: Well, nothing more than a Furret!
Family: I don't know if he has a family.

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About Carnel

Postby oumasai » Mon Nov 18, 2013 10:29 am

Carnel is a blind Linoone. He has a friend, who is a shiny Buizel named BB. Carnel is also
blind, but can sense things. It may not look like he's blind because of his actions, but he's actually blind. His sightings has been better a bit, slowly, day by day. But it will take longer than 2 years for his vision to have fully restore. Maybe 4 years-- or even 5! In human years, Carnel is 14 years old.
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Contents & Seek

Postby oumasai » Tue Nov 19, 2013 11:01 am

Chapter 1 sneak peak
Ever since Carnel's parents were gone at egg-birth, his life has been different. He lives in an orphanage, but
he says it doesn't feel right. He always wanted to meet his parents, but he knew he never would. He only has a friend, who goes by the name BB. BB is a Buizel, and loves to hang out with Carnel. But one stormy night, Carnel has gone missing! What has happened to him?
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Chapter 1 - The Buizel

Postby oumasai » Tue Nov 19, 2013 12:04 pm

"Wait! I'm packing my stuff, don't rush me!" Said a Linoone, named Carnel. He packed his water wings, and water toys. He struggled, trying to zip his backpack. Finally, he managed to defeat the zipper, zipping the backpack fully. "CARNEL, WE'RE LEAVING NOW!" Called Mrs. Empoleon. "RIGHT BEHIND YOU!" Carnel called back, running towards the door. "Wait, MY BACKPACK!" He shouted, running to his bed and grabbed his bag. He quickly rushed to the exit. As the class left, he followed along. A bully, who was a Frogadier named Bubble. Bubble had always made fun of Carnel, but Carnel wouldn't care. "Bully me all you want, Bubble, but it won't make you look good!" Carnel always thought. He always ignored Bubble, because Carnel had dealt it with Worse. By Worse, I mean a Sceptile named Worse. Well, Worse didn't have a very nice trainer.. And he abandoned Worse. But, Worse has been giving advices to Carnel. Carnel was always strong, and cared nothing about Bubble. When the class reached the lake, Carnel saw a Buizel sitting alone on a small island in the water. The Linoone carefully got to the island by using his floaties. "Um.. Hey," Carnel said. "Thought you might be a bit lonely... So I wanted to know what you were doing here." Carnel said to the Buizel. The Buizel looked up from the water and looked at Carnel. "Hey," The Buizel said. "I call myself BB." He introduced himself. "Cool! I'm Carnel." He replied. "Can I ask you, why so much people are here? It's usually quite boring and quiet here." BB said. "Oh, I apologize if we were interrupting your privacy, but it's swimming day today. We always come here every hot day!" He said happily. "Oh! It's also not that bad, I mean, I do get a little too lonely. I am an Orphan." BB said with a sigh. "Oh, an Orphan you say? You should join us!" Carnel said, smiling. "We do so much fun stuff! Games, outdoor games, and more!" "R-Really?" BB said excitedly. "Absolutely! Come with me!" Carnel said, tugging BB to Mrs. Empoleon. "Hi Mrs. Empoleon, this is BB! He wants to join the Orphanage!" Carnel said happily. "Look at the little Buizel! What are you? SMALL? Ahahahaha!" Bubble said. BB frowned. "You'll get used to him." Carnel whispered to BB. "Now don't speak to them like that!" Mrs. Empoleon said to Bubble. "Well, we could make an acceptance! Welcome aboard, BB!" Mrs. Empoleon said, smiling.
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