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by MercyMe » Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:25 pm
This RP looks to be one of the most fleshed-out ones I've seen in a looooong time. Awesome ^^
Not sure if reserves apply here or not, but if so, I'd like to reserve the Banished Prince(ss). If not, well, ignore this. Hehehe.
Sheet might be up by tomorrow, but probably not tonight.
And who are you, the proud lord said,
that I must bow so low?
Only a cat of a different coat,
that's all the truth I know.
In a coat of gold or a coat of red,
a lion still has claws,
And mine are long and sharp, my lord,
as long and sharp as yours.
And so he spoke, and so he spoke,
that lord of Castamere,
But now the rains weep o'er his hall,
with no one there to hear.
Yes now the rains weep o'er his hall,
and not a soul to hear.ርለጠኟ ዐኛ ፐዣዳዐከኟናI''m A Member Of Deh Nickname Club: #37 - Mercy
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by amithethird » Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:40 pm
(Ah yes! Someone interested! I wasn't going to start my characters until I actually got people, so I'll be doing that now. XD You absolutely can reserve him/her. I'll add it to the front page.

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by MercyMe » Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:42 pm
(Great! ^^ Question though: I'm was going to assume the pictures should be cartoon/anime-y but I've been in ATLA roleplays where the characters had to have realistic pictures so I'm wondering... anime or realistic pictures in this rp?)
And who are you, the proud lord said,
that I must bow so low?
Only a cat of a different coat,
that's all the truth I know.
In a coat of gold or a coat of red,
a lion still has claws,
And mine are long and sharp, my lord,
as long and sharp as yours.
And so he spoke, and so he spoke,
that lord of Castamere,
But now the rains weep o'er his hall,
with no one there to hear.
Yes now the rains weep o'er his hall,
and not a soul to hear.ርለጠኟ ዐኛ ፐዣዳዐከኟናI''m A Member Of Deh Nickname Club: #37 - Mercy
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by amithethird » Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:55 pm
(Oh I don't really care honestly. I'll be drawing mine (so I guess that's kind of like anime) since I have specific ideas of what I want my characters to look like, but you don't have to. Just use whatever you want. :3)
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by MercyMe » Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:59 pm
(Okay! I'll probably have to end up drawing mine, too, if I can't find a good picture anywhere else >.> Thats the problem with having specific design ideas lololol)
And who are you, the proud lord said,
that I must bow so low?
Only a cat of a different coat,
that's all the truth I know.
In a coat of gold or a coat of red,
a lion still has claws,
And mine are long and sharp, my lord,
as long and sharp as yours.
And so he spoke, and so he spoke,
that lord of Castamere,
But now the rains weep o'er his hall,
with no one there to hear.
Yes now the rains weep o'er his hall,
and not a soul to hear.ርለጠኟ ዐኛ ፐዣዳዐከኟናI''m A Member Of Deh Nickname Club: #37 - Mercy
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by amithethird » Tue Nov 12, 2013 5:04 pm
(The plague of the creative. XD Oh well. I'll give me a chance to practice drawing people.)
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by MercyMe » Wed Nov 13, 2013 1:59 pm
WOOT WOOT FINISHED THE GUY.
LEMME KNOW IF THINGS NEED A-CHANGIN'
`Makoto'[Male] [19] [Fire System] [Firebender] [Crown Prince of the Fire System]"Father, father, tell me where have you been?
Its been hell not having you here
I've been missing you so bad
And you don't seem to care
When I go to sleep at night, you're not there
When I go to sleep at night, do you care?
Why are you walking away?
Was it something I did?
Did I make a mistake cause
I'm trying to heal the pain
I don't understand this, is this how it ends?
I will try to understand
Father, father, tell me where are you now?
Its been hell not having you
Last thing I heard, you were fed up, you're skipping town
With no note telling where
When I go to sleep at night, you're not there
When I go to sleep at night, do you care?
I need to know, I need to know
Why are you walking away?
Was it something I did?
Did I make a mistake cause
I'm trying to heal the pain
I don't understand this, is this how it ends?
Why are you running away?
I don't understand this, is this how it ends?
Why are you running away?
Tell me please, tell me please, I need to know
Spent seven years wishing that you'd drop the line
But I carry the thought along with you in my mind
But is this what you call a family?
Is this what you call a family?
Why are you walking away?
Was it something I did?
Did I make a mistake cause
I'm trying to heal the pain
I don't understand this, is this how it ends?
Why are you running away?
I don't understand this, is this how it ends?
Why are you running away?
Tell me please, tell me please, I need to know"
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Full Name:
Makoto IeyasuNicknames:
Mako, Koto (Although he's really not a fan of nicknames)Gender:
MaleAge:
19Rank/Affiliation:
Crown Prince of the Fire SystemSystem of Residence:
Fire System, originallyType of Bender:
Firebender_________________________________________________________
Hair Color:
BlackEye Color:
BlueSkin Color:
PaleBody Type:
5' 10"; Makoto's stature is rather skinny, but he carries himself with all the regality of true royalty.Distinguishing Features:
His right eye is gone, and he has with several smaller assorted burns and scars scattered across his body.Clothing/Accessories:
He wears a dark overcoat held together by a clasp with the Fire System Insignia emblazoned upon it. His shirt is a worn tank top, and his pants are equally worn with time and use. His boots are not as polished as they once were, but still very sturdy. He wears an eyepatch over where his right eye should be.Notable Possessions:
His crown, although he never wears it and keeps it wrapped up safe and hidden. He has one weapon: a lightsaber, although he's nowhere near as skilled with it as with his bending, and will only use it as a backup plan._________________________________________________________
Theme Song:
A Trophy Father's Trophy Son- Sleeping With SirensInterests/Hobbies:
Although at this point in time, most of his time is spent hunting down the Avatar, he tries to squeeze in some plain old stargazing whenever he can. He enjoys tinkering with machines as well, and back in his happier days he wouldn't hesitate to chat someone's ear off about mechanics. Personality:
Makoto is a quiet, scholarly person, and though he is very proud, he loves affection and attention when he can get it (but it's not like he'd admit it or anything). He is imaginative (though sometimes his imagination runs away with him) and and clever, but recently those talents of his have been used less for leisure and more for the relentless pursuit of the Avatar. Along with intelligence comes high standards, and thus, he often sees other people as inferior, or of lesser intelligence and significance. His pride and condescending tendencies makes it hard for him to see people as equals, and thus, to make friends. He insists he doesn't need any, but that is not the case. Exile can make one lonely, after all. Born:
The Fire System CapitalHistory:
Born into the Fire System's royal family as heir to the empire, Makoto wanted for little throughout his childhood. From a young age, he has focused on honing his skills as a firebender, and this has made him the adept firebender that he is today. The one thing he strived for throughout his youth was the acceptance of the Fire Lord. He wanted his father to be proud of him, and for the most part, the man was. Makoto was a prodigy; the perfect child, and he was happy to be so.
That is, until the day he unwittingly challenged his father.
It had been during a war conference—the first that Makoto had ever attended. At this meeting, his father revealed that he had plans to capture the Avatar and either use them to the Fire System's own goals, or keep them locked up and alive for as long as possible. Now, until that point in time, Makoto had regarded the Avatar as some sort of hero, a person to be revered. His father's plans to enslave the Avatar shocked him, and without thinking, he venomously attacked the morals of the plan, in front of the entire council no less. His father took this as a direct challenge to his authority, and before Makoto knew it, he was dueling his own father, the one person he'd looked up to his entire life.
He lost the duel, as well as one of his eyes, and was sentenced to exile. Now, Makoto roams the systems, seeking out the Avatar so that he may regain the place he once held as his father's prodigy._________________________________________________________
Sexual Orientation:
Bisexual (It's not very well known, though, and he doesn't think much of it).Love Interest:
N/ANotable Family:
Fire LordFriends:
HAHAHA NOEnemies:
He considers the Avatar to be one, although that wasn't always the case.Other Important People:
N/A_________________________________________________________
Things That Don't Fit Elsewhere:
N/A
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MercyMe on Wed Nov 13, 2013 5:57 pm, edited 1 time in total.
And who are you, the proud lord said,
that I must bow so low?
Only a cat of a different coat,
that's all the truth I know.
In a coat of gold or a coat of red,
a lion still has claws,
And mine are long and sharp, my lord,
as long and sharp as yours.
And so he spoke, and so he spoke,
that lord of Castamere,
But now the rains weep o'er his hall,
with no one there to hear.
Yes now the rains weep o'er his hall,
and not a soul to hear.ርለጠኟ ዐኛ ፐዣዳዐከኟናI''m A Member Of Deh Nickname Club: #37 - Mercy
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by amithethird » Wed Nov 13, 2013 5:35 pm
(Accepted. ^^ Although there is one thing I forgot to add to the form. DX Under notable possessions or just in a separate spot in the same area do you think you could add any weapons he might have other than his bending? Sorry for the trouble. I just realized that I spaced that. DX My forms should be up tomorrow. I planned on getting it done today, but I've been busy all day and haven't had any time to myself. At least the pictures are done.)
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by MercyMe » Wed Nov 13, 2013 5:53 pm
I'll hop right to it! Thanks for letting me know XD
And who are you, the proud lord said,
that I must bow so low?
Only a cat of a different coat,
that's all the truth I know.
In a coat of gold or a coat of red,
a lion still has claws,
And mine are long and sharp, my lord,
as long and sharp as yours.
And so he spoke, and so he spoke,
that lord of Castamere,
But now the rains weep o'er his hall,
with no one there to hear.
Yes now the rains weep o'er his hall,
and not a soul to hear.ርለጠኟ ዐኛ ፐዣዳዐከኟናI''m A Member Of Deh Nickname Club: #37 - Mercy
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by amithethird » Thu Nov 14, 2013 2:15 am
(No problem. ^^ I'll post my forms after school today. If you have any Star Wars/ATLA fans for friends go ahead and invite them. I'll see if I can find some of my old Star Wars RP buddies who might be interested.)
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