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My First Editable Trotting Horse! by Instinct

Artist Instinct [gallery]
Time spent 1 hour, 43 minutes
Drawing sessions 4
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My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby Instinct » Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:39 am

Ok, firstly ingore the timer as I went to have luch, which took like and 1hr or something,
I want to give credit to BlueStar123 for helping me, understand this complex way of drawing online.

Can be use if your a member in h10.2
Can be used in magistream(Instinct, member of magistream)
Can be used for fun
Can be used in Signatures and profiles and as a fursona/character for sims and roleplay
Can edit lines


Don`t use on other sites apart from the above.
Don`t remove my signature.
Don`t use in competitions
Don`t claim as your own.
Don`t use as adoptables for free or use them to gain pets or gold.


Please suggest any items that I could add to this horse e.g. necklace etc.
I love critism so I can edit it!
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby Instinct » Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:17 am

why wont anyone use it? I want critism to why no-one will use it.
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby GriffinPersonFooPet » Sat Aug 28, 2010 3:54 am

Your anatomy is off, and that back right leg needs to be fixed... It goes the other way.
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby nmrn » Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:50 am

I think your horse is beautiful :) :thumbup: :clap:

Crit/Ideas: Maybe the nose a bit less square and perhaps for the hooves... well I think they're fine. ;)

May I re-draw to give you an idea of a horse? Not the muscles though, I dont know how horse muscles go haha! :)
Overall, a beautiful lineart, I think I'll use it as a character later
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby Instinct » Sat Aug 28, 2010 5:56 am

Patchwork= Thank you! ummm...... I will get to work on the hooves and the nose.
Petlover99= Thank you!

Can we keep it on topic please.
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby Bartimaeus » Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:10 am

Very cute. ^^

Critique: I think his bum is a bit fat. Nice, but a chubby pony. X333. I love it though.
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby nmrn » Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:11 am

Instinct wrote:Thank you, what do you think now?

Beautiful. Just beautiful. :) Very cute aswell X3
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby Instinct » Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:15 am

I will sort the bum out then, done what do you think?

Thank you.
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby Bartimaeus » Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:04 pm

Nice! ^^ x33333
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Re: My First Editable Trotting Horse!

Postby nmrn » Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:22 pm

Instinct wrote:I will sort the bum out then, done what do you think?

Thank you.

Thats better! :mrgreen:

No problem ;)
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