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by AHS_Freak » Sun Nov 03, 2013 12:47 pm
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~The Shy Sweetheart ~
Dazzle lay down luxuriously, her legs splayed out from underneath her. The she-cat was relaxing, even though she got to do that quite a lot around her, since she wasn't one of those 'slaves'. And thank goodness she wasn't. In the deepest part of her heart, she actually felt a little bad for that slave. She always had to work every single day, she worked like a mother bird making a nest for her babies. Nonstop. Dazzle would always be rude to the slave though since she felt like that was what she had to do. Even though she was shy, she wasn't that shy. She soon arose to her paws and started walking a slow pace over to the castle. And when she walked in, her blue eyes caught Comet talking to that slave. She let out a soft hiss and her eyes lit up with anger. She padded over to the kitten and hissed, " Why are you talking to that dingy slave ", she began harshly, " you know better than that Comet?"
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by Colorful » Sun Nov 03, 2013 12:48 pm
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A confused look grew on Lyla's face. Was the prince actually talking to her? She had never had any of the royal family talk to her like she was an actual cat with feelings. All they ever did was order things from her. She had noticed him observe at her before, but Lyla had always assumed his parents were teaching him the social classes and how slaves were nothing but scum. "Umm.. sure," She replied. A weak smile sprawled across her features. It was her job to do what others requested, right? So, technically, she had to play with him, didn't she? "So, what do you want to play?"
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by quittt_ing » Sun Nov 03, 2013 12:58 pm
{kiana, please refrain from posting the cat's image for it can be considered spam. If you make a smaller banner version, that could be acceptable.}
Comet
Male - Prince - 8 mos - Freedom's Ruins - talking to Lyla and Dazzle - ♥ N/A
Comet smiled politely at the cat, but it turned into a scowl when Dazzle came in. He didn't like that Dazzle was rude to this cat, he didn't like that anyone was rude to her. He didn't even know her name and he knew all of the cat's names by heart. His fur puffed up and he tried to make himself look bigger by instinct, "I can do whatever I wanna do, Dazzle," putting emphasis on the name, "and if I want to talk to her then I can! Uh... you, uh... Go... Go clean my room! Yeah, go on up there and clean my room and be fast about it!" He tried to make it look like he was angry with her in the first place, it's not like Dazzle knew what he said. His room was always tidy, but Dazzle had never been into his room. He didn't have much in there but a bed and a few cat toys. He decided he would follow this odd cat into his room and play with her there.
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by Colorful » Sun Nov 03, 2013 1:08 pm
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Lyla shrunk back when Dazzle approached. She had learned to always keep her mouth shut in the presence of cats higher ranked than her, except when she was asked to speak. Also, she didn't know how to reply. Comet, the prince, wanted to play with her. And Dazzle, the citizen, wanted her to stay away from Comet. If she agreed with Comet, Dazzle would tell the king. If she agreed with Dazzle, Comet would hate her. She retreated back farther, not looking to stick her nose in trouble.
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by AHS_Freak » Sun Nov 03, 2013 1:13 pm
{ I made it smaller. }
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Dazzle gave the slave a rapid loathing glance, and let out a small snort of contempt. Before then glancing back at Comet. " Comet, I'm just trying to make sure you don't get in trouble by Kuroi." she meowed more calmly. She then sighed and stifled a groan, before rolling her eyes, " Ok, I'll go clean your room, but if you don't stop hanging out with that slave, then I'll go tell Kuroi, and trust me, he won't be happy about this." She then glared hard at Lyla, before then stalking away over to the direction where Comet's room was. Dazzle looked over her shoulder once as she slipped away before then looking straight ahead again.
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by quittt_ing » Sun Nov 03, 2013 1:32 pm
{Why don't you try
this one?}
{Whoops I meant to command Lyla to clean Comet's room, but this works too lol}
{Dazzle could talk to Ryla now that she has left Comet and Lyla, that way you can still RP}
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Comet sighed as Dazzle went up to his (incredibly tidy) bedroom. "I know a place we can go where no one will find us," He said blankly, staring into this odd cat's eyes, "I won't let anyone hurt you. I won't let them do that anymore," He didn't like how the cats treated her and he thought maybe it was because he could relate to her. Not as much as most kittens, maybe, he was the Prince, but he knew how it felt to be bossed around and to have everyone disappointed because of you. He didn't like that feeling; why should he let this cat go through it? She was young - not as young as him, but young - and he didn't want her to have to live through this anymore. "I command you to follow me," He said with a soft smile, "Unless you don't want to, but I think you should. They can't get mad at me if I commanded you to do it," He smirked. He was good at finding ways around the rules.
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by Colorful » Sun Nov 03, 2013 1:50 pm
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An immense smile spread on Lyla. She wasn't sure if she should converse with him or not, as he did not directly ask her to. But he was young and hadn't yet grew into the royal personality she assumed his father wanted him to possess. She decided to take the risk and, after all, he commanded her to play with him. "That's really sweet of you Com- Prince Comet," She said. "So what do you want to play?" She tilted her head and a questioning gaze found its way onto her face.
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