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by despairz » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:08 pm
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☾ red ☽
status;; wrote:with ;; bird, pumpkin, oak, bramble
apprentice ;; bird
feeling ;; annoyed
thoughts ;; "stop whining!"
Red snarls at the apprentice, "I do not want to get "fired" from being a mentor." He hisses. "I will take you to your mother if you don't let Petal fix you up. You will be able to come back to the training session. " He says, shrugging. "Now, Pumpkin will take you to the medicine den or I will bring you to your mother, kicking and screaming." The large tom says, sitting down.
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by grizzly. » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:24 pm
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age;; twenty-three moons.
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apprentice;; bramble.
tagged;; red, oak, bird, bramble.}
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Pumpkin noticed how heated the two toms were getting towards eachother and she stepped inbetween the two toms, looking at Red while covering Oak's mouth with her tail. "Red don't you think you're being a little harsh? If he wants to stay then he must suffer the consequences later, and if Vow tries to blame you then I will take the blame. Let Voe be mad at me, for what good am I as a warrior. I'm less coordinated than a kittypet, so what does it matter if the king's mate gets mad at me. Oak is to be our king in two moons, he will have to suffer more pain then this. It will be a good life lesson gor the tom if anything Red." She meowed softly, making it apparent that she thought she didn't diserve to be training an apprentice, as well as made it clear that she was neutral in the arguement.
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by despairz » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:34 pm
☾ red ☽
status;; wrote:with ;; bird, pumpkin, oak, bramble
apprentice ;; bird
feeling ;; annoyed
thoughts ;; "why'd she have to butt in?"
Red turns to the she-cat, "Fine!" He snaps, the usually calm tom seeming especially stressed toady- though nobody knew why and he wouldn't tell. He pads away, heading towards camp, "C'mon, Bird. We are done training with them. Today's lesson is over." He hisses, padding out, heading deeper into the forest to train his apprentice to hunt.
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by susurri » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:40 pm
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xxxCardinal was taken back by the harsh tone in Pumpkin's voice. "Alright, then." Cardinal turned around to the group she'd be leading to camp. "Anyone want to race? Just kidding- I'd beat all of you." She smiled. Cardinal had a bad habit of sarcastic cockiness. "Everyone come along the Cardinal train-woot, woot!" Cardinal started walked forward jerkily saying, 'Chugga chugga chugga chugga chugga chugga'. She stopped and smiled. She turned to Bramble and said, "I'm kinda weird- just try to see through it."
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by grizzly. » Sat Nov 02, 2013 12:50 pm
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{ gender;; she-cat.
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Pumpkin's ears laid flat at the hot tempered tom when he had snapped at her, and she gelt her throat tighten, but suddenly her lips drew back into a growl and er fur began to bristle. It seemed as if te gentle she-cat had been pushed far beyond her limit. "Cardinal, would you be a dear and possibly teach Bramble, Bird and Oak some battle moves, or just take them back to camp. I need to have a word with Red." The she-cat meowed theough clenched teeth, and without waiting for the she-cat's response she followed quickly after Red, her teeth clenched and her fur fluffed out, but she forced herself to calm down as she got closer to the tom and climbed carefully up a tree, making sure not to lose her balance as she crept across the lowest branch of the tree, and doing what she does best, dropping out of the tree she landed steadily in front of Red. It was almost difficult to tell that this she-cat was anything, but uncoordinated. "Mind explaining to me what all that was about?" She asked in the sweetest voice she could manage while anger bubbled in her stomach.
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by despairz » Sat Nov 02, 2013 1:00 pm
deefizzy. wrote:☾ red ☽
status;; wrote:with ;; bird, pumpkin, oak, bramble
apprentice ;; bird
feeling ;; annoyed
thoughts ;; "her again?"
Red looks right at her, "Disrespectful kits, that's what!" He hisses, lashing his tail. It was none of her business anyways. He didn't feel like talking, and no long explanation was needed. He have her the shortest answer possibly- a bad sign from this tom. He keeps walking, shoving right past her as he looks back, shrugging as his apprentice wasn't following.
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by despairz » Sat Nov 02, 2013 1:17 pm
☾ red ☽
status;; wrote:with ;; pumpkin
apprentice ;; bird
feeling ;; annoyed, angered
thoughts ;; "why is she butting in again?"
Red snarls, his white teeth bared, ripping his tail away from her mouth. "Stop it! You don't need to know everything about me!" He snaps, his eyes glinting with a slight madness. The dreams- nightmares- whatever they may be... They were taking over. He closes his eyes, his shoulders sagging as he seems to be.. somewhere else. He continues on, barely noting at the blood welling on his tail from where he ripped his til away. His eyes filled with tears. Oh the pain he felt. His mother in the dark forest? Why would she be there? She had always been kind- never hurt a cat in cold blood. Tears rolled down his maw a left a small dotted trail. He seemed to be headed no where... because he was. He still had his eyes closed.
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by despairz » Sat Nov 02, 2013 1:28 pm
☾ red ☽
status;; wrote:with ;; pumpkin
apprentice ;; bird
feeling ;; depressed, pained
thoughts ;; "why do i feel so sad?"
Red continues walking, before collapsing beside a tall tree, just outside the border. The roots engulfed him and he sunk slightly into the ground, the covered up fox den caving in under his weight, though his eyes were still closed. "Go back to camp. I'll come back when I'm ready." He murmurs, laying his aching, burning head on a large root, his paws hanging limply over another root.
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