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by pouty » Sat Oct 05, 2013 6:21 am
greystripe
ᴍᴏᴏᴅ: panicking, nervous, hopeful ➝ ᴡʜᴇʀᴇ: Med. den ➝ ᴡɪᴛʜ: Fernpaw, Lionpaw & Littlestep // Med. den
Whilst standing still and watching everything yet not taking anything in, something began to ring inside of the tom's head and it took a few quick heartbeats for him to realize that it was Fernpaw.
Thanks Starclan ! He thought, before gently putting her down. With his heart aching, Greystripe's eyes focused on the apprentice.
It's okay... Everybody is fine... You'll be okay... A whisper was all that he could manage. After swallowing a lump that was beginning to form, Greystripe's eyes focused on Littlestep as soon as she began speaking. I'm fine.. I'll be okay.. It was true. The tom joined the fight late and aside from the badgers blood, few deep scratches here and there he was physically okay. Maybe the biggest injury that he gained would be a fractured paw.
After taking in deep breaths to force himself to calm down, the tom's ears caught something that held his attention. But.. But you'll be able to heal Fernpaw... Not daring to turn the sentence into a question, the tom's eyes resumed on Littlestep.
really sorry for the short post :s ;;
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by Aʟᴀsᴋᴀɴ Esᴋɪᴍᴏs » Sat Oct 05, 2013 7:05 am
belle-blossom wrote:Լ ї т т ℓ є s т є ῤLittlestep
Medicine Cat
She-cat
30 Moons
Crush: none
App: Vinepaw
───────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────── Mood: Fearful || Place: Med. Cat Den || Action: none || Tags: Vinepaw.The small, cream she-cat purred softly as her apprentice stated that she knew many herbs, and began to call out each herb individually.
Well, at least she knows them. The next test is for her to know what every herb does she thought, thinking of how to test the young she-cat.
Ah, but that doesn't need to come now she thought after Vinepaw finished identifying the herbs and asked where the prey was.
"Well, the elders and queens are fed first, but you can go grab something if you're hungry." as she finished her sentence and was about to turn her tail to point in the direction of the fresh-kill pile, a scent of blood drifted into the den a second before a yowl of fear and agony filled the camp.
Oh Starclan no her mind froze for a second before remembering she was the medicine cat and it was her duty to treat the wounded.
By the scent of all that blood there's bound to be more wounded she thought grimly before leaping out into camp to find Fernpaw sneaking away into the apprentices den.
"Fernpaw had been in the patrol with... Orangefury and," she paused as she saw a white warrior racing around the camp,
"Snowdrift..." her mind seemed to slow as she remembered the herbs needed for infection. She turned around to find Vinepaw,
"I think it's time we put your know-how to work." she mewed, fear lacing her soft voice.
"It smells as if the patrol had encountered a badger, so what do we need?" she sat down in front of the medicine cat den, feeling rather useless that her clan-mates were being torn apart by a vicious beast while she's too small to even to go searching for them.
(Aw i was gonna have Littlestep talk to Fernpaw, xD i was too late but do you think Stonebreeze could come for some backup? Since i dont know if Barkpaw and Flowerpaw were accepted i dont have much to do)
VINEPAW--TAGS: LITTLESTEP{MENTOR}-- MOOD: WORRIED-- OUTSIDE MED-CAT DEN
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VinePaw was confused, and was thinking of the answer. "Poppyseeds incase someone gets very hurt, cobwebs...." VinePaw named quite a few herbs and then looked up at LittleStep. She slightly smiled, but she heard her stomach. She tried to ignore it, she could wait if she tried. VinePaw had blanked out, she was so tired she fell to the ground, and woke up when she saw two people in the medicine-cat den. "What happened?" she asked in a dry voice, she didn't feel so good. "I'm sorry, I just feel sick." she said and got up. Her head felt like it was hurting bad, and she felt kind of sick. She looked around her and had no clue what happened, she felt like a lousy apprentice, but right now she felt really bad. She looked up at LittleStep and felt like she was going to hurl. "Uhhhhag." she moaned, she tried to keep standing tall but she felt like she was going to hit the ground. She looked at FernPaw, GreyStripe, LionPaw and, LittleStep and felt utterly embarrassed. She felt horrid, and didn't want to walk right now.
{Sorry for semi-short post!}
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Iᴛ ᴡᴀs ᴀ ʙᴏʏ,
ᴀɴᴅ I ᴅɪᴅɴ'ᴛ ᴋɴᴏᴡ
ᴀ ᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʜɪᴍ.
Wᴇ ᴛᴀʟᴋᴇᴅ ғᴏʀ ᴍᴏɴᴛʜs,
ʜᴏᴜʀs ᴇᴠᴇʀʏ ᴅᴀʏ...
Aɴᴅ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ I ᴋɴᴇᴡ...
Tʜᴇ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ ᴡᴀs ɢᴏɴᴇ.
Iᴛ ᴡᴀs ᴀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ ɴᴏᴡ.
❧ Mᴏɴᴛʜs ᴘᴀssᴇᴅ,
❧ ᴀɴᴅ ʙᴇғᴏʀᴇ I ʀᴇᴀʟɪᴢᴇᴅ ɪᴛ,
❧ ᴛʜᴇ ʙᴏʏ I ᴏɴᴄᴇ ᴋɴᴇᴡ ᴀs ᴀ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ,
❧ ʜᴀᴅ sᴛᴏʟᴇɴ ᴍʏ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛ...
❧ Hᴇ ɴᴏᴡ ɪsɴ'ᴛ ᴀ sᴛʀᴀɴɢᴇʀ, ᴏʀ ᴀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ.
❧ Hᴇ ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ I ᴡᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ʜᴏʟᴅ.
❧ ❧ Fᴏʀᴇᴠᴇʀ.
❧ Hᴇ's ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ I ᴡᴀɴᴛ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ ʜᴀᴘᴘʏ.
❧ ❧ Aʟᴡᴀʏs.
❧ Hᴇ ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ ᴡʜᴏ ᴍᴀᴋᴇs ᴍᴇ sᴍɪʟᴇ.
❧ ❧ Eᴠᴇʀʏ ᴅᴀʏ.
Nᴏᴡ ʜᴇ ɪs ᴍɪɴᴇ
ᴀɴᴅ I ᴀᴍ ʜɪs.
Fɪɴᴀʟʟʏ.
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by Keriae » Sun Oct 06, 2013 3:38 am
♚ LIONPAW ♚
↷ the reckless ↶
tom ;; ten moons ;; apprentice
Ugh. Why did his head hut so much? It wasn't a dull, throbbing pain: instead it was a sharp, intense and constant pain, piercing through his very skull and if cats could cry, tears would be streaming thick and fast like a waterfall down his face (despite how it would make him feel weak). The next sense the young ginger tom was aware of was the dusty scent of herbs, the mixture of the scents of many cats and the stench of blood. Was that his own? Then he could feel something solid and soft under his frame, the pain in his leg, and the sting on his face and leg. After that, he could hear the murmur of voices, although it was faint in one ear and quite a bit louder in the other. Finally, the apprentice's eyes cracked open and his jaws parted as he took a deep, rattling breath. Everything was fuzzy and all he could make out were wavering shapes and colours. Where was he? This didn't seem to be the forest clearing, although the blood scent was still there. A hacking cough tore from Lionpaw's throat but he was too exhausted to raise his head. It took all the strength and courage and effort to form sounds into words and speak. When he did, it was faint and hoarse, more like an elder than a young cat. "Water.... please."
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by foxflight, » Sun Oct 06, 2013 3:54 am
FINCHSTAR
Finchstar had returned to his den after announcing the patrols out to the clan, his mind racing with thoughts. His lean body was hunched over slightly and his ears flattened against his head, a small scowl on his face. The bright ginger tom was forced out of his thoughts when a loud commotion started within camp, his ears pricked forward and he peered out of his head to see Snowdrift and Fernpaw race into camp before leaving seconds later. Instantly he began to worry. It was his duty to provide for the clan and help them when needed, but right now, he was a little lost. Obviously something big had happened. Finchstar was then dragged back into his own thoughts once again, but his mind didn't wander far since the commotion started up again. The voices inside of camp were loud and rushed, some sounded fearful whilst others were panicked. He feared that it has begun, feared that the rogues had finally come to destroy the clan. The tom rose to his paws, almost gagging as the stench of blood reached him. Finchstar headed to the den entrance, but a dark shadow appeared at the entrance, causing his fur to bristle and a growl to rumble in the back of his throat. But his burst of aggression was short as he recognised the voice of Orangefury. Finchstar slipped past Orangefury with a small nod, looking around camp quickly before observing the tom, he looked bruised and battered, and he could pick up the stench of badger. "What happened?" He asked, despite having a pretty big hunch about what had happened.


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by king boo » Sun Oct 06, 2013 4:07 am
FERNPAW•the bubbly one•╔═════════════════╗
-----------------b a s i c . i n f o
---------ɢᴇɴᴅᴇʀ: She-cat
---------ᴀɢᴇ: 10 moons
---------ᴍᴇɴᴛᴏʀ: Greystripe
---------ᴍᴏᴏᴅ: Pain - pleading
---------ᴄʀᴜsʜ: Lionpaw
---------ʜᴇᴀʟᴛʜ: 50%
---------sᴛᴀᴍɪɴᴀ: ???%
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She felt greystripe gently lift her by the scruff of the neck and carried her in the den as though she were a kit that had grown tired from playing outside. It was a relief to be set in a warm, soft den of moss. After all that had happened to the battered frame of Fernpaw it was a cure of its own that no herb could of done.
A small, rounded leaf was pushed in front of her with poulitice on it. She glanced at her mentor before licking the herbal remedy, soon she had finished and all that was left was the small beech leaf. She just lay there staring into the distance, completely unfocused. Memories were drowning her in her mind. Flickerkit, Stormclaw, Dapplewing. All dead. She could of died to, or Lionpaw or Orangefury or Greystripe. That was the second time she had met a badger and she had lost her family, only Bumblepaw was left to her and even then he too died. Saving me.
A hacking cough brought her out of her numb trance and she turned her head ears pricked. "Water.... please." said a voice she new to well to confuse. Lionpaw had woken up at last. She could see two hazel orbs from the shady den and fernpaw mewed in a calm soothing voice. "Lionpaw, Its ok... Were in Littlestep's den...we're safe" she spotted the trickling water that the medicine den had to offer but it was no use. In this state she couldn't walk, only drag herself slowly and even that took effort. Instead she peered at her mentor who was in discussion with the pretty medicine cat she dragged her moss den closer to lionpaws ginger fur until their dens sat side by side and her green eyes flickered in the dark.
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by Taiyo » Sun Oct 06, 2013 4:19 am
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•Gender: Tom
•Age: 31 moons
•Rank: Warrior
•Status: Single
•Tags: Finchstar
He dipped his head respectfully at the appearance of his leader though he quickly cut to the chase when asked directly. "I was in charge of the border patrol along the northern part of the territories when we encountered a badger. The badger had been chased out for now but you might want to organise another patrol in the future to check for other predators... there was a lot of... blood in the area." he meowed softly then sighed as exhaustion settled over him like a thick blanket. With the adrenaline in his veins finally settling, the warrior felt exhaustion like no other and the pain in his side was emphasized, throbbing painfully with each breath. "Two apprentices were heavily wounded and the rest of the patrol were either bruised or sustained minor wounds." he reported back, his tone flat and emotionless though the words seem to sear into his very soul. He couldn't help but felt like he failed everyone as he was the assigned leader for the patrol.
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by Paintedbythewind » Sun Oct 06, 2013 11:30 pm
[[ hey guys sorry for inactivity, but my dad decided that surprise holiday would be the best thing to do. I have been sooo busy preparing and I can't be on until next Saturday EST (it's Sunday here now) So sorry but dad likes surprises e_e I am Ravencry and Falconpaw. I will be back soo soon, sorry Hopeful but Dawnflight and Ravencry's little loveydovey has to wait ;n;
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